VIRMAN FF : Love To Be With You - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Awesome update...
Loved each nd every part
Virat nd manvi both ve feelngs 4 each othr
Nd ur precap seems interestng
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awesome update
virat love at first sight
continue soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Chapter 4

It was a fine Sunday with a moderate climate as sun feels shy to come out and show his face to world.. so the vadhera's and sharma's planned their way to a resort. This was a couple of week after vanshika and mitali's meeting. So they mischieviously thought that this small picnic would make a bond between our virman.. but manvi tried all possible ways to avoid their picnic, as of well all her plans were crushed by her nani.. so they all decided to heed over resort. And virat was on cloud nine, he was mentally thanking his mom and his soon to be mom for arranging such a awesome picnic one nd only for him. Karan and payal joined with them and manvi's nani stay back at home, as she cldnt walk fr a long. So they all decide to move on.

Virat wore his casual white shirt, which reveals his bulge muscles out. He was sizzling hot in his attire. After getting himself ready, he came to sharma's villa to see his angel. He entered and wished everyone, then chachu greeted him and starts a casual business topic.. Virat was in a hurry to answer to all his questions, bcoz as soon he answered, he cld search for manvi. Here nani noticed his uninterested talk, so for that she call chachu and ask him to do some work. After he went from there, nani called virat to herself and he too moved towards her..

Nani : beta, for whom yur eyes are desperately waiting for??

Virat baffeled with this sudden interrogation..

Virat : k..k..ku..kuch nahi. Its just like that, I just wandering abt the interior designs nani.. as it was quite simple yet beautiful. (he thankd himself to came up wth an excuse)

Nani : lekin aap pahele se hi hamare ghar ke liye aya tha aura iske bare me soch raha hai.

Virat doesn't knw wat to say, he thought that now he was caught red handed and couldn't escape from her

Virat : wo..wo (he stammered not knwn wat to say)

Nani : kuch hua beta? Manvi still in her room, dressing herself. As yu knw beta she was a slow worker in everything.. yu have to be bit sure abt it and make her get ready soon. (she said and smirked at him)

Embarresement is a quite hard word to say about the present condition of virat.. he blushed on nani's statement.. he was so embaresed to get caught by her.

Nani : beta aap use pasand karte hai?

Virat : ji main manvi ke liye bahut pyar karti hoon.(he said open heartedly, he dnt want to hide his inner emotions, he wants that the whole world should come to know that how much he love his manvi)

Nani : am so happy beta, mere bachi would be fine and live happier with u forever. Bless yu beta..

Virat : ji

"NANI" a chirpy voice echoed back of virat.. he turned back and got a shock of his life.. there stands manvi, his manvi with his fav white colour sleeveless dress, looking not less than an angel. She wore a simple accessories with minimal make up.. she was heavenly beautiful as virat couldn't take his eyes off frm her.. its seems that someone spelled virat to see her without blinking his eyes. Here manvi knws that virat was shamelessly gawking her, bt she smewat blushed at tat moment. Virat smirked at her seeing his effect.

Nani : yu look so beautiful beta. Be happy always.. (she said those words and looked at smiling virat)

Manvi : ji nani. She sat on her side and said" I would be always happy nani, so chill"

Mitali : oh finally this maharani has come, manvi if yu hav finishd wth yur bakwas go and sit in the car. As we want to move fast

And she added that " virat, yu too go with manvi bcoz yu youngsters come together"

Meanwhile karan and payal too came there and settled themselves in car. Virat was in a driver seat, karan was beside him. Manvi and payal were seated at the back.. virat purposely drove the car as he cld see his princess thru the mirror. Manvi and payal were chatted among themselves and sometimes these 2 young man's join them. Finally after an hour of travel, they reached the place. The resort was heavenly beautiful specially decorated for them. Manvi loved it to the core.. she enjoyed wth her family as much as she could.. now it was an evening, ending of all pranks, naughtiness, leg pullings, nok jokhs bla blab la.. they stood up for a photo session.. virat wantendly stood beside manvi and he bend his head towards her ear and said " please smile for a while, orelse yu would be bad at photos" as brushed his lips softly on her earlobes. Manvi was taken back with his sudden proximity, she dnt hav any idea that he wld say such things to her, later she compose herself and said "no, thanks". He again bend and said that "yu would be more beautiful, if yu doesn't smile" bt this time he slightly nibbled her earlobe. Manvi cldnt take it anmore, and she blushed badly.. as of it the photographer took a pic of them.. later at night, everyone return to their respective rooms and slept soon bcoz of the tirefull day. Here virat was sleeping happily as thinking of manvi, whereas she couldnt she regain her blissful moments with virat.. sheblushed badly and dosed off, expecting a beautiful days ahead.


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So how was this?? Is this upto an average???

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Edited by priya_nishal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Priya,its a very nice n sweet update👏...
enjoyed it more..
btw,thnks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
wow akka after along time u updated
it is very very nice update akka
i loved it
i love these virat nd manvi to the core
nd their naughty parents too
update soon akka
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: panamaa

wow akka after along time u updated

it is very very nice update akka
i loved it
i love these virat nd manvi to the core
nd their naughty parents too
update soon akka


Thank yu anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Cutely written...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
nice update her nani now know that
virat like manvi update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
akka these is the last warning for u no need of thanku for me

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