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Posted: 11 years ago
that was a brilliant, fantastic update..simply superb...from the start to the end I simply loved reading the update..it was so very well written.. really a interesting and intriguing update..keep up the good work going...Arnav and Khushi have really come a long way...Arnav being worried that Khushi must have seen the photo wall and his coming up with various reasons thinking how Khushi must have missed seeing the photo wall that was very sweet..and Arnav wants to avoid talking about the photo wall with Khushi...well for this all I can say is for now maybe Arnav can avoid the topic but Khushi surely will not let it go..when the time is right Khushi surely will ask Arnav about the photo wall and Arnav will answer Khushi's queries that too without any hesitation..Arnav and Khushi's next day morning interaction was really nice...the scenes where Arnav cooked dinner, the small moments all were lovely...it looks like Arnav and Khushi's relationship slowly but steadily is getting back on track.. this is awesome... the talk between the two was very well portrayed...Arnav has started opening up and sharing his thoughts with Khushi, even though it is a small step it means a lot coming from a person like Arnav...loved the way Khushi explained to Arnav that it was not his fault and how she sees the man who forgives one and all for their mistakes against him...that scene really touched my heart.. simply beautiful...and the last bit of the update was really good..the way Khushi hugged Arnav while sleeping...the scene made me go all awww...so cute...very nice update...good job..please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...😊
Edited by MysticRiver - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was beautiful. But I feel Arnav still needs to open up to Khushi since she is like an open book to him. I am glad the tried talking their difference out and that she didn't ask him abt the wall of pics was just cute.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just can have full dost of this story ...I just love the time they are spending together xxx this update is warde wating thx dear for giving ur time to us and give us this great story madin our day lolxxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just can have full dost of this story ...I just love the time they are spending together xxx this update is warde wating thx dear for giving ur time to us and give us this great story
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Posted: 11 years ago

So this is their life together in NY

New beginning I guess you could say

And they needed this new beginning

After the six months they have had

Just the two of them

No bade papa, buaji, chachu and most importantly rishu there to make things more difficult for them

About time they got this break right

And am glad about it

So lets see what this time together will bring them

Dude you will know and soon why it wasn't best idea to send khushi to your room

And he got it didn't he

The wall right

Where has his wife's picture all over

Hey too late now

She has already seen it

And am glad she did dude

Warna how else would she have known how much and when you fell for her

Now he gets why he shouldn't have sent her to that room

Wait not just his room is it now

Now its their room

And boy does that sound good or what

Thank god for this momentary lapse

This way she found out something she should know about

Had he remembered he would have made sure that she didn't see that picture wall right

Sorry dude you are too late

And how you didn't realise it

Oh I don't know arnav

Maybe because your wife is here

And her appearance meant that you forgot about everything else mate

Aww he didn't know what to say to her

But arnav why the shyness dude

Okay not shyness but awkwardness

Okay you are not really her stalker

As she knew you were there

That's another matter that she didn't know you were clicking her pics

Aww sweetie she wont think anything bad about you

In fact you have shocked her with this

Bless this was all he thought he would have so he put them up

Well she is his so he cant have her pics cant he

Plus it did have an soothing effect on him right so nothing wrong with it

Just obsession with her photos arnav

Or also her well they are her photos

So it aslo obsession for his wife

Which now need not take extreme measures to do anything

As she was is and always will be his

He is so cute aint he

Arnav and his running god what to do with him

But guess he isn't ready to answer her questions is he

Though is he ever ready to answer her questions she will leave it I think for today

Enough confrontation they both had

Really arnav I didn't thisnk that you would use the excuse of a call to run from her question

Dude she endears them all

As you know very well

Seems the lawyer was more happy than arnav himself

Wow this girl sure can charm them all and she doesn't even know what she does

Thank god for his dad

This time he was being selfish for arnav

But about time he did that

After all arnav is his son right

And if this makes arnav happy then he was all ready to get them back

But of course he wouldn't have done all this had khushi herself not wanted to get back to him

No matter what he says they are both dear to him

His laddoo and his son

Wow really he wants to make sure she nods off before he sees her huh

Of course just because things have started to sort out doesn't mean they will be sleeping in same room

But why not well this is arnav

He likes to make things difficult for himself

But then if he sleeps next to her well he knows he cant control himself

Of course not

Which is why he slept on the couch outside his room

Not guest bedroom that would make things worse

Oh I don't know am sure she wouldn't mind

But once again he didn't ask but assumed she would

Wish he would ask or tell her what he wants

This trait of his has to disappear if they wanna be together

Actually they both need to communicate with one another

Or else well we will be back to square one which of course would be silly

Yes do stop pushing her away

Or she will really stop being in your life

No more pushing her away but pulling her closer now arnav

Yup they gotta meet in the middle

She has begun by coming closer to you

Now its your responsibility to meet her half way

Like you said without her your life is pretty meaningless

About time he is gonna do this man

Oh he finally, finally accepts it

That he loves her and madly so

And wont be running away anymore

Yippee arnav in love

Well this I am looking forward for

So far we had insecure arnav now we will have madly in love with his wife arnav

Dude you have showed to her really that you are capable of love but don't know that yourself

Arnav I though you knew her better than this

She would never do what you did to her

Love isn't causing the one you love pain

Its to understand them know where they are coming from

And more importantly know that their love weakness and fault and yet accept those and you know she has done that already

So don't worry so much about that please

If he carries on with his I don't deserve her thing I swear she isn't gonna be happy with it

Dude its upto her to decide and she did decide to choose you mate

Well if you wont be selfish for her then who would

Come on stop all these self doubts

Give her all your love and see how she returns the same tenfold

Yes hell yes it counts

That you are ready to let go of her shows how much you care and love for her if that doesn't matter I don't know what will do

She doesn't want you to change

But she does want you to involve her in your life

As she does with you dude

Not much she wants just wanting you to open up to her man

That am sure you can do

Ahhh so the sleeping beauty awakens

Hmmm a lot has happened since they got married

I know not a lot was nice

But it got them to this point too

So guess that was a learning curve of sorts right

She has changed since they married

And frankly so has she isn't that good

Hey nothing wrong with checking out your hubby he is hers

Now if only the said hubby would notice her

Aww she was shy of him

Well she need not be man

He is hers like she is his

Acha she waited for him to come back in

But being jet lagged she fell asleep

And of course arnav didn't wanna disturb her so he went and slept outside

Well he is leaving somewhere dear

Of course he is going to work

But they still have lots to talk about

And the wall the first thing on agenda

And he notices her thank god

Good that you are turning back time so to say

After all this is new start for you both

Well he wanted to keep himself busy no wonder he took so many projects

Trying to forget her this was the best way right

But now that she is here he will have to cut down on all this right

Warna inka kuch nahin hoga kahani aage nhin badegi

What do you mean she doesn't wanna spend time together with you

Don't be silly you actually thought about this well isn't that good

See told you she will be glad that you are thinking about the two of you

Why would she wanna let go of this chance to be with you dude

Well that's that then

We can all breath now things are going great so far

Awww so cute doing his tie for him like any other married couple

This scene I always love

So intimate and cute too

Wife helping her hubby to get ready while hubby getting naughty with wife

Isn't that just so sweet scene

The domesticity of that I just love

Ufff arnav the scene was so beautiful

Why did you stop

Well because he isn't sure if she wants this or not

Aww bless isn't he adorable when he does that

I knew it she was loving it

But then he had to stop

Well maybe next time huh

Are we gonna talk about the wall with her photos

Or is that to be discussed later

Well he will try to get outta it if she brings it up for sure

I knew it he would try to run if he thought she was gonna mention the wall

That was so typical of him

But that's okay if not now later then

She will get him to tell her about those photos

He isn't gonna escape from her for too long

No matter what he thinks

Aww he is gonna make her breakfast too

Well best he does we all know she can be disastrous in the kitchen right

He is nervous

And why not dear

He thinks you wont like this

And he doesn't know how to explain it either so his nervousness is coming out

I agree with khushi he is so cute when nervous

Arnav why so nervous

She is your wife mate

But damn am liking this side of his

Boy is he ready to leg it or what

Just so he can avoid her questions

Well you gotta give it to him for trying to escape from it

But not for too long of course

Aww he made her breakfast hot chocolate

Maybe next time breakfast in bed hey one can dream right

He wants to make sure she will be comfortable huh

Dude she isn't a child well even they can remember that

She will call 911 if there is emergency

Aww seeing him so concerned about her is really adorable

Ahhh I love this hubby side of his

About time it came out for her man

What can be better right

He is so cute telling her all this

Well he wants to make sure she will eat and be comfortable in his absence

Am sure she will be fine arnav

Whats with okay puran man

But then what else can she say right

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Cant blame him for telling her not to cook

Damn that can be a right disaster for sure

He doesn't want her to get hurt right

This had be in fits for sure him saying that

Dude I am sure she got it all chill yaar

What the

This is what she wanted to ask him

About tv and the channels that come on it

This girl is too much at times for sure

Sorry dude you did hear right for sure

Well of course you did

What that long to tell her about the tv and less on the essential things

She is one of a kind I tell ya

There again I agree with him khushi will be khushi

Not that he would wanna change her right

Aww he did check up on his wife

Isn't that cute of him

What with him calling her his little wife young wife

He likes calling her that is it

She called him too

Tv helped did it arnav of course it did

Why wouldn't it

Well as long as she wasn't sad without you that's okay right

Arnav she is missing home so she ordered Indian food

Like you said you will introduce her to various foods with her

That will be a new experience for her right

And you too enjoying with your wife what could be better

Well about time it stopped looking as if no one lived here

After all its your home aint it

That's even cuter

She was waiting for her hubby who came from work

Haiyye its these little things that can bring you even closer I think

He cooked well best that is

We don't want to have well her cooking can be dangerous

Maybe he could teach her some simple things

This way more bonding of arhi right

Bless he did miss her

Loved you've got mail nice movie

Back to normal or as normal as it can be for arhi

Ahhh bed time

And he is sleeping in same room with her

No am sure she cant blame you for spooning her into you

Or cuddling up to her in your sleep

Am sure she is looking forward to that

Damn am liking this change in him

He doesn't wanna hurt her anymore

Isn't that just sweet and the loving arnav is here to stay

Aww it has been long for them both

To be away from one another

But sleep seemed to have eluded him shame

What was that

Why did he wake up like that

Nightmares or something else

Well what ever it is can he please tell her this time

Don't keep her in the dark anymore arnav

Not nightmare phew that's some relief

What is wrong with him now I wonder

Nothing good for sure if he is trying to be away from her

Ahhh I think I can get whats wrong

His drinking problem

Am sure of it

She is right do tell her she wont know other wise

No matter how bad it is she has the right to know

I knew it his drinking problem

Damn he is hooked but time to get him outta his addiction too

Dude she knows no need to tell her

Seems your dad has told her all

He had to right so she can help him out

Hmm he will have to wean it off for sure

Give him company aww isn't that cute

Wow he sure has kept track of her

Allergic to alcohol unless of course you mean that episode in dubai boy that was funny

She forgot but he didn't

When it comes to her health he wouldn't would he

How did he know about it

Was it just from the wrapper or is there more

She is good aint she being CID wife

Hey she has the rights to do so

She is good aint she

Come on tell her the truth already

You didn't read it on the wrapper for sure

Stop insulting her intelligence mate out with it

Okay stop giving her excuses and tell her already

It wasn't bade papa as well

Well maybe not 4 year old but she is your wife

This you interrogation mate

Wait till she really grills you upon the whole photo wall thing

Just tell her already mate

In the end we all know you will why prolong it

Put us and her outta her misery please

Aha so he was checking up on her

He asked her doctor aww sweet he is

And I thought he knew his wife better than that

Of course she wont stop not when she wants to find out about it

Aww he wanted to make sure what they gave her was safe

Bless he is so cute

He is all caring and loving

And yet he don't wanna show it

What to do we with him man

Yes sweetie he is cute and adorable for sure

Will we get any sleep though now mate

See I knew it no sleep but not for him but her

His care for her even when he wasn't there sure hit her

And why not knowing that he cared even when he wasn't with her sure told her that he cares more than he shows

Now she wont let him sleep either

Dude be ready for a barrage of questions

No really she wont leave him now

He sure does clam up but not for long I hope

Man does she ask the weirdest things or what

Hey just the sort of thing that one associates with this khushi

She is curious aint she so spill it

Wow that cant be good

Him getting that used to it

He will have to now that you are with him

He only drank and started on drugs as you weren't there with him

Which is not good for him for sure

She is becoming a right question bank and I just love that

Ahhh she gets to the heart of the matter

Why did he leave without talking to her

Was it because she said to leave her alone

So he left her for her not what she was thinking should have known

He really likes to make himself miserable don't he

Of course he does

Assuming things never worked well for their relationship

And here he did assume things on her behalf

As did she man

And look where that got them

To stage where they lost one another

You might have manipulated her into marrying her

But she did say yes on her own

You didn't force her you do remember that right

Well glad they had this talk too

They needed to tel tell one another what they feel for the other

That they never wanted to be away from the other

But fate wasn't with them

Though distance did make the heart grow fonder I guess

Well hope that doesn't happen then

She pushing you dude

Hope not unless he is being real mean

But she would never push him towards any oncoming traffic would she

Lets not go there shall we

I think by now she does know you

She knows you care for her

Despite your trust issues you let her come close to her

You might have said opposite of what you believed arnav

But truth is you did trust her mate

Well she is right in what she said

He did forgive those who used him

His dad who thought he wasn't his son

Even khushi to some extent

He doesn't give himself enough credit

He has gotta stop thinking he is all bad

When he isn't really not if you really know him

Well trust her she means what she says dude

Yeah I guess that's the only way he will believe it if you keep telling him

One day he too will accept who he really is and not who he thinks he is

Wait does that make sense hope it does

Does he still have the nightmares

But what are his nightmares all about

Do tell her she can help

After all how long will you keep it in arnav

Him and his running behaviour

She gotta get him outta that habit too right

Dude why are you so stiff biwi hai aapki

Or did he think she wont want to be close to him physically well thought wrong then

Ahhh she is real cute

And he too wanted the same stop denying it will ya

Aww he called her sweetheart treasure isn't that cute of him

Aye haiyye he called her my love

Hope she does find out what he said

As that was confession of love from his side right

He is good aint he

He confessed and she doesn't even know

Well seems things are alright in their world

But yes still a lot of things they gotta talk about for sure

Cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was so awesome.
Arnav forgot about his photo wall and was scared to go in his room. He didn't even sleep on his bed, just so Khushi would be comfortable.

I'm glad their morning routine continued with a minor change. Hopefully slowly their routines will be go to what they were.

After all the instructions, Khushi wanted to know about the tv. I would have done the same thing.

He is also communicating better which is a good thing even if Khushi has to prod him. He kept in touch with her doctor.

Both of them need to just communicate properly with each other.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update loving how Khushi is getting him to talk more and reminds him the importance of communication. Cant wait for them to have a conversation about the photos hopefully will be real sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Avesome update... Loved it... I smiled all Trough the update:) thank you for the update and for the pm .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Nice update. That photo wall is so cute dear. i also wish i meet some one like Arnav yaar. but than this kind of person r only found in stories n not in real life. Any ways i really like the last part. can't wait to read next update.

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