Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28)

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arhi_love_boni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hey...congratulations on your success...👏 i don't have your blog link...can you please PM me the link pleeeaaassseee😊

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naajuka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

post the update fast . waitng

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thephoenixenigm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

congratulations👏a beautiful and endearing story😊

weekend starts on friday the update on...??

Edited by champsum - 11 years ago

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simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hey...congratulations on your success...👏 i don't have your blog link...can you please PM me the link pleeeaaassseee😊

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surrazdan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

i read ur story on Blog.. and posted a comment there too.. but cudnt stop writing here also...

that is so so so amazing... d way u pen down each story.. u make us look even small things in a vry different perspective..

i hav loved each and every story of urs... u r so so so talented...

P.S. I loved Kian a lot...

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

I read the note

I'l miss this story.

Pls extend it.

Why do stories end up the moment things get sorted bet Arshi.

As far as suggestion u write so well tht u exceed the expectations.

Yes the characters are so well defined.

Tho I m yet to figure out why khushi had to continue her frriendship with Rishabh.

Yes he did a lot as a friend bt thts wht friends do.

But he also did a lot tht friends dnt do spl when he claimed to love khushi.

He dint stand up for his feelings because of khushi's limp n took off to US.

He lost his right as a friend then

Then he let her wedding happen to shyam he lost the right to claim his love.

Most of all he dint take khushi's opinion if she loved him bt confronted Arnav jeopardising khushi's engagement n even Arnav's dad health ws at risk for the timing.

Where ws his so called love till khushi told him abt the engagement.

If Arnav dint hve a right then wht right did Rishab

h have on khushi.

So Khushi saemed to be so stuck on Rishabh tht she too ignored Arnav's insecurities spl when she ws in love with Arnav her marriage Arnav shud hve been a priority nt her friendship.

Leaving the accident part aside did she even try once to let Arnav know thru her actions tht he ws more imp thn Rishabh

Arnav character totally jsutifies his behavior except tht push which also ws an accident not intended to hurt khushi.

Infact any husband wud have done much more thn jus leaving the place he dint say a word to riahsbh bt left. He dint even tell his family abt wht hppnd other thn he pushed khushi infact he took the bame on himself for the accident and even divorce.

Love is not somethng th said a lot of times like rishabh did bt proven by actions which arnav did more tho he dint tell her those words$

Most of all even tho rishabh helped khushi with her leg he still saw her as flawed but arnav never even thought Khushi as a flawed person. wht l love abt Arnav.

I m soundin to hard on khushi but her behavior of bein subservientt to Rishabh coz of the friendship she had while arnav n his family took more care for her she dint feel obligated tht itself shows tht arnav ws nt anyone who did anythng bt had a right to take care of her because they are family.

If Arnav wud have a female friend who loves him and he did wht khushi did everyone wud b bashing him like the Shitall track.

Dint Khushi do somethng similar by ignorin Arnav n continuing with her friendship with Rishabh who only broke them apart.