The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148

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MoonlightAura

@MoonlightAura

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

That was great beginning. The plot line is very interesting and unique. As much as I like to read about a high and mighty ASR, I adore stories where he is show to be struggling man as any other. My fav authors are already in place, would love to read how you inspite of having difference narration style gel this piece of art together. All the very best for your collaborative efforts!

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MoonlightAura

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Thousand apologies for late comment!

To be frank I was intrigued rather not so impressed by the title - Last place on Earth.. It sounded too mysterious about what the story might be all about!
But you totally had me with the casablanca reference.

Also the way Jen put the ecerpt it was like - OMG! They have some history! and I felt if is it angst that ASR talks these words with??

But when I actually read the full chapter was pleasantly surprised. When you described Arnav and his uniform and haircut- you lost me there for a few minutes 😳 I was in dreamland literally!

After learning abt ASR's apprehensions about Khushi and her team coming to corbett, I am sure we are in for a journey full of excitement, a lot of happenings and am eagerly looking forward to it!

I am also very very impatient to know about their equation in the college life!

So I am on with all you girls. Bring it on. Thank God for assured weekly updates! 😃

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Helllooo People 😃

Bringing you a taza teaser by Anupama. :)

But before getting on with the teaser, let's talk about a few important things, shall we... ;-)

So firstly, THANK YOUUs to all you wonderful people from all of us. Thanks for welcoming this story, for raising the excito-meter even for us, thanks for liking the first chapter and for all those wonderful comments, but more than anything else, thanks for making me feel like Madhuri Dixit! Yes, I wasn't aware that I'd been making my "big comeback" with this collab 😆

*Chane ke khet mai*

Secondly, about the PM issue, since some of you asked... I don't how this is going to work out. The writer who writes the update will send the PMs for that one. So either you buddy us all, or just simply stalk your 'My Post'. We'd also try to update our status' regarding the chapter update if that helps. :)

...And that's it for the talks. It's TEASER TIME!! :

Teaser for chapter 2 :)

After putting up her nonchalance for a couple of minutes, she gave up and moved out of her bed. She walked to the window that was covered upto half of its length with a curtain, its edges stretching over an iron string, the upper half of the window uncovered. Rising on her toes, she peered out and saw him sitting lazily on the bonnet of his Jeep, his back resting against its glass shaft, an arm draped across its edge while the other one found its place over his raised knee with the foot of that leg too over the bonnet. The muscles of his bare arms flexed as he leaned back his head and looked over at the dark cloudy sky and closed his eyes.

And just like that, suddenly, she wanted to be there, beside him. She walked back to the side table near her bed and took hold of her camera. Coming out of the room on soft steps , she found him still sitting in the same way. Moments passed and she couldn't tear her gaze away from his being, the inexplicable feeling his stance gave rise to, not letting her. Focussing the camera on him, she clicked his picture. Bringing it down gently as she looked over his image and caressed it with her finger, she tried to control this weakness. With pseudo determination, she closed her eyes as that same finger now hovered over the delete button.

Her resolve had broken long before she had even made it and she raised her head only to find him staring intently at her.