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cineraria

@cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Just read through the prologue and the first chapter after 'accidentally' discovering your wordpress blog. And I am absolutely LOVING IT!

Oh gosh this is freaking hilarious. And Shyam's a gay. ROBL [rolling on bed laughing].

Seriously Awesome. Awesome. 🤣🤣

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Part Two is now up, here. I'll see you all in two weeks!

An Extra Note: For those of you wondering what Arnav is thinking, I can assure you that he will voice his thoughts soon!

Edited by chotidesi - 11 years ago

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

🤣 I will give anything, absoluely anything to NOT be in Khushi's place - where you left her!

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Oh... Khushi's script is getting rejected from everyone... that was sad. I hope the last one will be successful... Looks like Arnav is beginning to have some feelings for Khushi. But I think it is too soon. Will wait for next chapter...

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cineraria

@cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: shree10

2)What if Khushi had not grown into an attractive woman? Would Arnav still be attracted her?
In all this Arhi filled passion this is nagging me. SOrry to be such a spoil sport. But I enjoy reading abt physical intimacy more when there are sincere feelings.

Exactly my thoughts. I wished she practiced a bit more of restrain. For someone as self respecting as Khushi who declines help from her own father as it apparently mortifies her pride, I am afraid her precarious fling (it seems so as of now) with Arnav is going to mortify it further.

Arnav of course may have his reasons but there is no way she understands them, sigh, she's in for a major heartbreak and major jolt to her self respect. Under this scenario I wonder why she is going on without talking about this with Arnav.

And I really really wish amidst all this there is a semblance of a sincere emotion involved from both the parties which is something apart from lust.

Needless to say, I love it. Awesome work.

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: cineraria

Exactly my thoughts. I wished she practiced a bit more of restrain. For someone as self respecting as Khushi who declines help from her own father as it apparently mortifies her pride, I am afraid her precarious fling (it seems so as of now) with Arnav is going to mortify it further.
Arnav of course may have his reasons but there is no way she understands them, sigh, she's in for a major heartbreak and major jolt to her self respect. Under this scenario I wonder why she is going on without talking about this with Arnav.
And I really really wish amidst all this there is a semblance of a sincere emotion involved from both the parties which is something apart from lust.

Needless to say, I love it. Awesome work.

This is an interesting comment- thank you for leaving it!

I can't say much without revealing what I have planned, but I will say this- Khushi is someone who expected her life to work out perfectly. She was a star student in high school and college- but that didn't reflect post college. When someone like Khushi is face with something like this, they don't always know how to handle it, and that's what's happening here.

Khushi isn't sure of herself- her relationship with Arnav is a way to get out of that uncertainty and just forget everything. Until now, it has been defined as sex, and that was something rigid and certain. But now that feelings are coming into play... If either side does anything, it'll change the balance- and that's something neither of them wants.

I hope that explains her motives a little, and why they haven't talked about it yet. Thanks for the comment!

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cineraria

@cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

As in sex as a way of venting out frustration. I get it.

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

That was beautiful update...

I don't what is wrong with kushi? if she only wants no strings attached relation then she should be loyal to that... if she has feelings then she should tell the same to Arnav. i am not blaming her but some how i cant see the helplessness in Kushi, where as Arnav is more than OK to do any thing with other women.