sandhir ff:always together-2 part 24pg 89thread1 - Page 20

Created

Last reply

Replies

663

Views

206.5k

Users

72

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

kaveriw2008 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow

Aisa la ga koi movie dekh rahi hoon...purane jamane ki...lol
Irij55 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
amazing loved it update soon
Shivi_forever thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update 👏
It was hillarious 😆
Sanyu & her eloping ways was funny 😆
Liked how rd handled rohit 😊
Interesting precap
Update soon
Molli12 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
aaj ek bhi prt updt nahi kiya 😭
Edited by Molli12 - 11 years ago
kirtiarora111 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Unres on pg 27.😆😆
Plz unres ur comment on my FF as well. Jaha you got the 1st LIKE of the first chappy..😉😉🤗

Luv ya
shubhrabardhar thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for commenting late , well u always write amazingly and I loved that part when randhir check out sanyukta . Aur agar sandhir scene thoda jyada hote to Accha rhega Kyuki in parts mein bahut kam the ,but all over I just loved it
moonlight2630 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
All the updates were awesome.
Plz update soon .
Asapom thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
it was epic
sanyu's eloping mission🤣
continue soon
anyania thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Wah! What a filmy running story? Chaku dikhakar chor ko fasaya. Hats off to u sanyu and to ur writings. Aise filmy ideas r great! Update soon. Waiting...
chowanisha thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Part 12:~

Sanyu:hustle bustle mere wajase????
Rd:yes...already tumhari is tacky clothes k wajase offce mei log batei kar rhe hai aur upar se bahar k log aye !!!den I am nt gnna spare u...and smirked...
Sanyu:office mei log batei kar rhe ha!!!!!u mean to say about their talks of me being sexy?????and she tried to copy his smirk bt failed ...
Rd:sexy???kaun tum????dictionary mei meaning padlo pehle...aur engineering k sath sath thora dictionary bhi pad leti to kam ata...
Sanyu:realy???
Rd:nw stop ur nonsense or tel me directly u wnt ur punishment which is ready fr u...
Sanyu:ok sir...and she moved towards the table where arjun ws working...

Odrs giggled seeing their teasing f8s as dis ws healthy one...
Dey worked al day again ...forgetng their suroudng and the clock struck 5p.m

Harsh entered the offce followed by vd sir...
Harsh:hello guys...
All:hello sir
Vd:so guys u al are working hard as I can see...
he tuk a look al over and he stoped his gaze at paricular direction wen he spotted sanyu in saree
Vd:sanyukta u came back???
Sanyu:umm yes...
Harsh:o so its u fr which our male wrkers r going gaga over r8???
and let out a small laugh whereas sanyu flt embaressed...
Vd:wel sanyukta I wud like to have a talk wid u later bt fr now I have an announcement to make...
Harsh:yeah kind of invitation...
Arjun:invitation???ap ka to bday next week hai...mera aur rd ka to bohot der hai aur office to abhi 24 years chal rahe hai...phir ???
Vd:well in dat case u r r8...bt dis invitation is frm my side bt at ur house...
Harsh:yeah...its the celebration fr vd's daughters bday...i wnted to throw the party bt den vd said he wud gve dis party and den I said at my place...
Arjun:well dats gud...
Vd:ok den ...its tomorw and I wud b wid my family dere ..
Harsh:yeah it wud b surprising fr her too
Vd:yeah yeah...anyways guys u al r invited and I wnt every1 dere...ok??
All:yes sir...
Harsh and vd went away leaving the happy bunch bhnd

Sahil:woho party...
Parth:per itna mat khush ho...sir ki beti ka hai...koi bachi hogi duffer...
Vids:realy???
Jiggy:arrey ha...sir ko dekha hai...unka beti koi 6 7 saal ki hogi ...haina parth
Parth:aur nhi to kya????
Rd:guys party kal hai...abhi kam khatam karte hai????
Dey al went back to work...
***************************************************************
Next evening...around 7p.m...
People were runing around making the arrangemnts perfect ...and why nt it ws bday of vdsir the perfectionist s daughter's...
Arjun ws in rd's rum playng on psp...
Rd:kitna score kiya????
Arjun:arey abhi to shuru kiya hai!!!!waise rd...vd sir k beti ka nam kya hai???umar kitni hogi???
Rd:mujhe kya pata???
Arjun:arey to phir gft kya de???
Rd:I dnt knw...meine to arohi ko keh diya mere taraf se kharid le...
Arjun luked up at rd ...
Arjun:tu ready bhi ho gaya????kya mast dikh raha hai????
Rd threw his towel on arjun's face...
Rd:ye maska mat mar...mei abhi tak taiyar bhi nhi hua...agar har gaya hai to dusra chance nhi milega
Arjun:kya yar...
Rd:tu ja taiyar ho...arohi ajayegi...and winked while taking his shirt frm cupbourd
Arjun:ha to aye mujhe kya???
Rd:acha????koi bat nhi...mei use direct tere rum mei bhej dunga ...thik haina...
Arjun threw the towel back at rd and dashed out of his rum...
***************************************************************
At ground...
All had gathered down only waitng fr vd sir and his family...
Harsh:guys thnks a lot...
Arohi:arrey vd sir hume bulaye aur hum na aye...waise sajawat acchi hai...
Harsh:thnks...waise arohi tum jake arjun aur rd ko bula lao ...wo dono apne kamre mei hi hai...kabhi bhi vd ajayega...
Parth:yeah arohi tum jao...mei aur sanyu gfts arrange kar dete hai...waise ek min sanyu kaha hai????
Harsh:wo sanyukta dusri taraf hai...flower arrangemnts dekh rahi hai...
Sahil:koi bat nhi...chal mei help kar deta hu
Harsh:thnk u so much guys...
Arohi:cmmn uncle...and she turns to enter the house wen rd and arjun comes out...

Arjun in black shirt and blue denims and rd in white shirt blue denims and black over coat...
Arjun ws mesmerized wid arohi's luk ...she ws wearing a white salwar kamiz fr a chnge...she ws nt luking less den a angel...he ws so busy admiring her dat rd's words didn't affect him...
Rd elbowed him hard and arjun broke his thoughts and went to the group...
Jiggy:wah kya mast dikh rahe ho...
Arjun:tu bhi kya kam dikh raha hai????
Rd:waise koi to zarur patega tujhse...
Parth and sahil joins...
Rd:waise aj mausam itna kya badal gaya ki arohi salwar kamiz pehen li??
Arohi pinched him
Vids:arey wo to sanyu ne zor zabardasti ise pehnaya ...
Arjun:waise sanyu kaha hai???
Rd:isme bhi late????
Wen a vOice comes frm back...JI NHI ...it ws sanyu's...
Rd turned to face her and ws mesmerized wid her beauty...she ws in red salwar suit and it ws simplicity at its best...
Sanyu walks over to them and stnds in frnt of rd...
Sanyu:mei time se pehle ayi hu...
Rd:acha????to kya nobel prize du???
Sanyu:huff...ap se behes karke apna mud off nhi karna...
Harsh:guys guys...vd aa chuka hai...
Vd enterd the main gate wid a lady in black salwar in frnt holding her eyes and another lady in saree by her side...
Arjun:sir ki beti to bari nikli...
Parth:ha yar...per
Arohi:tum log kya bache samajh rahe the???
Rd:aur nhi to kya???hume kaise pata hota ki bachi hai ya bari???
Sanyu:jaise humne pata lagwaya ap k dad se puchke...boys r so
Rd:smart...
Sanyu:no brainless...
Rd:as if u r intelligent...
Sanyu:yeah ..u see dats why we knew she is of our age nt a small kid...
Arjun:ab bs karo...
Vd sir had already approached dem and nw ws taking her towards the odr side...lights were off...he removed his hands and stud at a dist...
As soon as she opend her eyes lights were turned on and flower shower started...
She turned around feeling the flowers and spotted everyone...bt den her smile faded as her eyes gt fixed on one who ws also luking at her keenly...
All claped fr her making her smile again...
Vd came and hugged her and said happy bday...
Vd:waise kaisa laga surprise???
Lady:awesome...thnks dad...
Vd:waise tum to harsh ko jante hi ho...to baki sab se mil le...yeh rd aur arjun
Lady:harsh uncle k bte???r8...hi rd ...hi arjun...uncle aur dad bat karte the tumlogo k baremei...
Rd:hello...happy bday...
Arjun:hi...happy bday
Lady:thnks...
Vd:wo arohi,vidhushi,sahil,kaustoki,jiggnesh sanyukta aur
Lady:parth
Vd:ha...per tum
Lady:umm ek college mei the...
Vd:per parth tumne kabhi bataya nhi???
Parth:mujhe nhi pata tha ki arpu I mean arpita apki beti hai!!!
Vd:ok guys ye arpita hai...aur wo meri wife niharika...
All:hello mam...
Niharika:mam...pls...aunty bolo to bhi thik hai per mam mat bulao...teacher teacher lagta hai...
All laughed...
Vd:chalo cake kat te hai!!!!!
Sanyukta went inside and brought the cake...
Arpita cuts the cake and gives the frst bite to vd and niharika...she den gives to harsh ...
Arpita mingled wid them very fast and bth parth and arpita avoided talking...
The party ws going gud ...and it ws soon time fr everyone bading bye...dey were inside the house wid gang and arpita having fun whereas vd niharika and harsh were inside study rum...
Wen suddenly a servent went running to study rum...
Servant:saheb bahar kuch gundey aye hai...
Harsh:gundey???mere ghar???
Vd:chalo dekhte hai...dey al went out and saw some big stout men coming inside...
Harsh:kaun hai aplog????
Rd:hai kaun yeh sab????andar ghusne kisne diya????
One of dem speaks:hum sanyukta ko lene aye hai...
Rd lukd at sanyu who ws hidng bhnd all...
Rd:yaha koi sanyukta nhi hai...yeh shekhawat mansion hai...
All were shocked wid rd's answer...
Wen a man of 50's and a fat lady of 40's and a man of their age came frm back and stud in frnt...
Man of 50:mei sanyukta ka chacha hu...aur mujhe pata hai ki wo ap k under kam kar rhi hai...aur wo yaha hai...
Vd comes in frnt:dekhiye mr singh...wo yaha nhi hai...
Chachu:acha????to phir mr vd wo jo ladki in sab k piche khari hai wo kaun hai????he turned towards the gundas...jao use leke ao...
Dey went and caught her wrist...
Arjun:use choro...
Parth also held dat guards wrist...
Parth:chor warna aisi halat banaunga ki ayne mei shakal nhi dekh payega...
Wen another gunda came and punched him...
Sanyu and arpita:parth...
D goons were going to hit him again wen sanyu came in btween
Sanyu:use chor do...mujhse lena dena haina to mujhse bat karo...she freed her wrist and came and stood in frnt...
Sanyu:boliye kya chahiye...
Chachi:tu chal...teri wajase society mei humari nak kat gayi hai...
sanyu:mei kyu jau waha???taki phirse meri shadi karwa sako???nhi jaungi...
Bhai:mujhe aisa kyu lagta hai tera insab ladko mei se kisi ek k sath chakkar chal raha hai...oho ruk ruk parth wahi hena tera bachpan ka yar...
Chachi:o to iske wajase tu shadi nhi kar rhi hai haina??????
Sanyu:apna bakwas apne pass rakhiye...warna police mei complain kar dungi...
Chachu:acha???kar...dekhte hai kaun tera sath deta hai????aur waise bhi tujh jaisi ladki ko koi bhi nhi sunega ...teri ma ki suni thi koi..jab mera bhai tere ma ko chor k chalagaya...tu to paida hi hui thi sabki khushiya chinne mei...
Sanyu's eyes were brimming wid tears...
Rd:ap apni phaltu ki batei apne ghar jake kariye...abhi nikle yahase...
Bhai:oho...tu to apni ma se bhi tezz nikli...ek bachpan ka yar aur ek ... ...yeh bata, kam k nam pe kahi yaha rangraliya to nhi...and thaaap...sanyu slapped him
Sanyu:apni gandi soch apni pass rakh...nikal jayiye yaha se...
Chachu:nhi niklenge kya kar degi tu???huh???bol...
Sanyu:dekhiye mei ache se keh rahi hu chale jayiye...hum is baremei kal bat karenge...yeh apka ghar nhi hai...jayiye...
Chachi:bara pyar aa raha hai tujhe inpar...
Harsh comes in frnt...
Harsh:dekhiye mujhe pata hai ki aplogoki apsi mamla hai per ap sab beith k batei ...
Sanyu:I am sorry sir...i am sorry arpita...mere wajase...anyways...aplog nikle yahase..mei aplogose kahi aur bat karungi...
Chachu:kyu yaha kyu nhi..aur tu is harsh shekhawat ko itni rspct de rahi hai...iski to aukat hi nhi hai...
Rd and arjun comes in frnt
Arjun:dad k khilaaf ek aur shabd bola na to police bhi nhi bacha payega...
Rd:ms aggarwal just take ur family frm here rght nw if u dnt want me to kill dem...
Chachu:ekdum chup...tu janta bhi kya hai...police ko bulayega na to bula...mere pehle tere is dad jayenge khoon k iljam pe...
Sanyu:bas kijiye...bohot bol chuke hai ap...ek aur shabd yehi sab ko mar dalungi...she ws boiling in anger...
Bhai came and slaped her
Bhai:tu maregi tu ...and ws again going to slap wen sanyu caught his wrist and twisted it...
Sanyu:tum log mere gusse ko jante nhi ho...bohot sehen kar liya hai...ab aur nhi...meri property k liye yeh sab kar rhe ho na...to phir thik hai..milte hai court pe ...yaha tum logoki jitni bhi property hai sab lelungi...and wid dat she jerked him...
Chachu came in frnt of harsh
Chachu:tu is harsh k liye humse humari property legi...humse ...jab ki is k wajase teri ma ki maut hui...
All were shocked...
Vd:ap kya bole jarahe hai??
Chachu:yehi saach hai...
Sanyu:dekhiye apka yeh jhutha ilzam
Chachu:mei jhootha ilzam nhi de raha...teri ma ki gari is k gari se hi takrayi thi...iski bhi biwi mar gayi aur teri ma bhi...
Rd looked at harsh who was shocked to hell
Tears made their way frm sanyu's eyes...
Chachi:kyu hogaya...ab bol abhi in k side legi???tere humare ilawa aur koi hai bhi nhi samjhi..isiliye jaldi chal aur shadi kar warna...
Parth:wo nhi jayegi...
Arpita:jo bhi hua ho per ap use force nhi kar sakti hai
Arohi:aur kisne kaha uski koi nhi hai..hum sab uske dost hai...aur marte dum tak hai...
Jiggy:ha
Vids:use leke jane ki koshis to kijiye
Chachu:tum sab kuch kar bhi nhi paoge...is harsh ko bhi mei dekh lunga...tab meine kuch nhi kiya kyuki meri utni aukat nhi thi per ab dekhna...
Bhai:ab bol sanyu kiski side legi??
Chachi:kisi k bhi le ise uthao aur le chalo...
Parth:ise hath bhi mat lagana...
Harsh:sanyukta meri bat suno beta meri usdiin ...and he tried to catch his shoulders wen she tuk few steps back...
Sanyu:ruk jayiye ap sab..pls...mujhe aur kisike bhi bat nhi sunni hai...sir us din wo black bmw apki thi????apko kya pata tha ki samne wale gari mei aurat mar gayi thi..
Harsh:beta mei wo
Sanyu:ha ya na
Harsh:ha wo gari meri thi per mujhe tab pata nhi tha ki tumhari ma ki ...mujhe bad mei pata chala ki aurat ki maut ho gayi hai aur ek ladki ko chot pohochi hai...
Chachu:dekha...
Sanyu goes and takes her bag...
Chachi:kaha ja rahi hai...
Sanyu takes some papers out and signs it...
Sanyu throws the papers at chachu's face
Sanyu:lijiye yeh property papers hai jo apne apke nam pe banwaye the...abse puri ghar apki aur company bhi...aur is ghatna k baremei mujhe koi aur bat nhi sunni chahiye aur apni shakal bhi kabhi mat dikhana
Bhai:ha abhi akal ki bat ki hai tune...chalo to phir chalte hai...
Vd:sanyukta ye tumne...bt snayukta just luks up...her eyes al red and tears were continuously flowing down...her eyes reflecting the pain...and withn seconds she left frm dere...
Harsh:ye sab meri hi galti hai...meri wajase meine renuka ko khoya aur sanyukta ne uski ma ko...
Rd just passed an angry luk and dashed inside his rum...
Arpita:parth I think hume sanyu k piche jana chahiye...dad mom ap yehi rahiye uncle k pass...hum ja rahe hai
Parth:per mujhe lagta hai use akela time chahiye...ye sab janne k bad wo kisise bat nhi karegi...infact usne apni mom ki death ki bat mujhe uski janam din k din batya...wo kisise bat tak nhi karegi abhi
kausto:per aise akela chorna
Arohi:ummm I think guys tum log yaha rd k pass jao ..hum ladkiya uske pass jate hai...
Jiggy:ha rd bhai kyu gussa hoke chalegaye...
Arjun:kyuki use lagta hai ki dad ki wajase aj mom...
Sahil:ok ok den hum yaha hai tumsab jao...boys moved to rd's rum and grls moved out of house...
*********************************************************
In rd's rum...
Arjun gaining lot of courage opened the door slightly and peeped in...
He cud see pillows lying down,bed covers smashed ,few glass pieces down and even the black coat lying down...
Arjun opened the door fully and there stood rd hiitng his punching bag wid al his might...
Jiggy:hume sach mei inko shant karna parega???
Sahil:ha
Jiggy:mujhe to lag raha hai aj hi mujhe hospital na jana pare...
Parth:jiggy shutup..arjun???
Arjun:huh!ha kya??
Parth:tum itna kya soch rahe ho???
Arjun:yeh soch raha hu ki tumsab bhi andar jaoge ya phir bad mei...ha ha bad mei ao..pehle mei jata hu...
Rd shouted stil hittng his punchng bag
Rd:koi andar nhi ayega...mujhe kisise bat nhi karni hai...nt even arjun...jao yahase sab...
Arjun:dekh rd meri bat sun...
Rd approached them wid his fist tightly clenched ,eyes red in anger and he walked as if a tiger gt his prey...
Rd:kya bat suno mei ha???kya???ki usdin galti ki karan humne ma ko kho diya????ab to yeh bhi pata chala ki sanyukta ne bhi apni ma ko kho diya!!!abhi bhi tujhe us insan ki tarafdari karni hai????bol???
Arjun:listen rd...
Rd:nhi tu sun...tujhe unki tarafdari karni hai na to kar...per abhi bhi wo meri nazro mei gunegar hai...bas...and he slammed the door on their faces...
Parth:yaha to bomb phat chukka hai aur waha kya hoga ???
Sahil:mei vids ko phn karta hu!!!!and dere arjun's phn rang up...
Arjun:sahil ruk...arohi ka call hai...
Arjun picked it up...
Arjun:ha bolo...acha wait ...and he put it on loud speaker...
Arohi:arrey kya wait...yaha to ghar pura shant hai...usne apne rum mei lights bhi on nhi kiya hai...tabse pukar rhi hu kuch bol bhi nhi rahi hai...yaha to aisa lag raha hai ki ya to storm ane wali hai ya phir chala gaya hai...
Parth:ekdum shant hai kya???
Arohi:aur nhi to kya???ab mei kya karu????
Parth:just ekbar aur uska nam lo zor se...
Arohi:arrey to kya mei dhire se lerahi thi??
Parth:mera matlab dhamki wala...
Arohi:ok...oye sanyu tu darwaza kholegi ya nhi ...hum sab yaha pareshan khare hai aur tu andar chup chap ...and dere they cud hear shattering noises...
Sanyu:chale jao yahase...mujhe akela chor do...pls...she wanted to shout but the last words came as a whisper...
Arohi:suna??
Parth:arohi chordo...use akela chordo...wo kisise bat nhi karegi...kal subah dekhte hai...
Arohi:per abhi to usne kuch tora hai...agar use koi chot
Parth:nhi nhi...hum sab aarahe hai...wo sab aisehi chize torti hai...tumlog hall mei raho...
Arjun cuts the call...
Parth:umm arjun tum yaha ki khabar dete rehna aur mei yaha jake dekhta hu thik hai...
Arjun:hmmm...
Boys comes to the hall where harsh ws crying wid a photo in his hand and vd and niharika sittng dere...
Parth:ummm sir...dont worry sab thik hojayega
Harsh:kuch nhi hoga...kuch thik nhi hoga...saat sal pehle usdin ki saaza mei ajbhi bhugat raha hu...pehle mere bte aur ab sanyukta bhi...
Parth:aisa kuch nhi sir...ap pls sambhaliye apne apko...sab thik hoga...
Vd:harsh sambhalo...aur sanyukta ka??he turned to face parth
Parth:hum sab jarahe hai...kal office mei milte hai
Vd:u sure???
Parth:100%ok...den...and sorry wo sanyu k family k taraf se...arpita ka janamdin...
Niharika:nhi nhi...aur wo koi family hui bhala...beta arpita ne kaha wo wohi ruk jayegi...kal office jane se pehle kya ghar drop kardoge???
Parth:ji thik hai...
Wid dat the boys went out and arjun went to rd's rum and vd and niharika tried to pacify harsh...

precap...:changed behaviour of sanyu and rd...and few desicions...

wel thnks a lot guys...i wud again update it two to three days later...bcse i have to update odr ff too...and i have lined up interviews fr colleges this week..so i wil nt gt much time...
anyways...do say did u liked it or not...i tried to write about the raging souls but u knw i realy dont knw if it ws upto the mark...i always write funny things and dis cases r so damn serious which r beyond my capabilities...
so do comnt ...as i love to improve mre...




Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".