TH#3 ArHi SS: Love Uninterrupted TH#4 PG. 140 (02/06/2014)

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Res 😃
Un Res 😳

OMG ME FIRST IN LAZY LEAVES FF 🥳

Congratz on new thread 🥳🥳
From reading d first line I think that Arnav and khushi r kissing
😳 but when in background some noise came I said how can a noise came because Arnav an khushi r in suite but by reading more I get to know that d couple r our Aakash and Payal I thought that Payal and Aakash would be shy type but they r very bold 😉
OMG Arnav was all joking and troubling khushi poor khushi was feeling guilty when she get to know about truth and then Arnav also feel bad that he has taken d joke long
I was hating d girls how can they say about Khushi like that 😡 Arnav did d right thing by firing them
Dinner food was mouth watering I hope one day I also get all these things to eat 😛
When Arnav said that what khushi call him so I said that doesnt he know that she call him Arnav than again I read d SS from starting and I get to know she hadn't call him by his name even when she was talking with Ratna

The update was superb 👏👏
I loved it ⭐️

Now I am eagerly waiting to read next part ⭐️
Edited by Aisha1996 - 11 years ago
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Me!
Me!
not acceptable! The whole Ramanchi you did in the start is JUST NOT ACCEPTABLE. I want a full fledge ArHi scene like this in future! bas!

well I never know that here shy my PayAsh are so much in action! acha hai. 😳

itna toh I believe my Arnav that he will never do something like THAT but I really wanted to know that k wo kya reason dega after teasing khushi. a honeymoon suite as a gift to payash. well smart enough!

a flustered khushi is a treat. oh how much he teased her and in the end both were thinking that they hurt the other one. how cute is that!

I like how khushi ordered HIS favourite food and in the end HE ordered her favourite dinner. made for each couple 😃

I feel nostalgic while reading photo shoot part. it bring back so many memories. though I enjoyed reading it and loved how you explain each and every bit of a professional photoshoot and problems faced by a newbie! wonderfully written 😊

Flashback was so cute. muje bhi koi itna handsome maths padata toh mera maths itna weak nahi hota
Ratna is a sweetheart :)

the best part was their walk and how khushi was preparing herself to ask much needed questions to Arnav. but all said and done. Bechari khud hi phas gyi 😆

I too have noticed that she never took his name but I thought you would bring this up after their marriage or engagement or some progress in their Relationship. I am happy k you brought up that jaldi hi. 😊

I loved how Arnav reacts like a baby when Ratna called khushi instead of him. and mother-son knew each other answers and how khushi and Arnav were thinking about Ratna at the same time. sweet 😃

v.s is back! Yay! 😛

I wish whatever you want . god gives you that. my prayers are with you. humesha 😳
Edited by .Avanti. - 11 years ago
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I am on first page
First of all, CONGRATULATIONS on new thread.
WOW Fantastic update as usual. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
The very intimate scene which gave me goose bump in the begining of the chapter, i thought it was Arnav and khushi together in... that position but i was shock to find that they were actually Akash and Payal. Akash is so change in this story, i love his character. He is not shy type and reserve. He is truly the brother of a flirtitious Arnav, romantic, naughty like him.
Shock no.2, the honeymoon suit was for Akash and payal wedding gift. I thought Arnav booked it for their stay, the way you have presented Arnav around khushi it urge me to think like that.
Yellow is the color of khushi, she looked as bright as sun and give a picture of sunflower. I think her wedding dress may have yellow color in it.
Love the flasback.
A furious ASR was a treat to read, i miss that Arnav soo much.
Arnav is getting very observant for khushi with each day, the way he check out khushi in his lovely wedding dresses during the photoshoot and making khushi nervous, he is captivated by her beauty and innocence.
The following lines are khushi whenever Arnav stare her lunatically
dekhti hain jis tarah se teri nazzrein mujhe
mein kudh ko chupaoon kahan
jadoo hai nasha hai, madhooshain
tujh ko bhula ke abb jaon kahan
Part B was mouth watering update and the end increased my heart beats just like of khushi.
rajisthani thali, though i haven't taste it but it's in my list of food which i want to devour.
He wants to khushi to say his name "Arnav". I know he is deeply in love with soft and sweet voice and i think he is planning to listen his name from her his whole life.
I think i get what are Arnav thoughts for khushi that Why is he turning so flirtitious, naughty and getting so close to her? My take is Arnav fell in love with khushi a very long time back, may be in his teens but he didn't want to confess it because he knew his confession will confuse innocent khushi and will distract her mind from her life. He didn't fear rejection and control his feeling for the time being until Khushi becomes sensible enough to understand these sinsitive emotions. He may wanted her first to complete her studies and settle goals in her life and now that Khushi is big enough to get distracted, he is giving her signals that he is interested in her which Khushi too is finding hard to control and was planning to question his change behavior in this update. may be this all is a stupid thought of my mind, i am pagal too😆 and i don't blame your stupendous stories because Arnav intriguing character was making me restless and i am peaceful when i share my perception with you.
eagerly waiting for the next chapter to know the effect on Arnav when khushi will pronounce his name.

P. S. congratulation on securing a governmnt job. May every day on your new job be rich, rewarding and kind. Good luck👍🏼
Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on new thread
wow on first page
thats new for me
no really it is for your stories
well might not happen next time you make new thread
stalking does help
am sure we wont doze off but instead read it with big big eyes
cant be arhi can it
but then it did finish off with arhi in HM suite
now that was scary
for khushi at least
but for arnav and us good news
hmmm hope its arhi man
getting cosy cosy are we
lips open to be kissed
dude just kiss her will ya
this is getting hot
with their kiss and all
haiyye just in dreamland now
kya baat hai kissey wissey and all
hmmm and she is participating too
what the pressure cooker
then cant be arhi
they are in a hotel
how will they hear that go off
hain ho kya raha hai
waise he still wasnt ready to let go of her
who ever this couple is
damn that sure scared the hell outta them
no one came breaking the door i see
shhh dheere se
warna pakade gaye toh aap log gaye dono
oh teri this is payash
ahhh then it makes more sense why he is sneaking around
wait how i thought they were still back home
how did aki get to her house
when did he get to her house
mr gupta to be ahh thats funny
hey you were sneaking in what else do you want her to greet you
didnt she kiss you back
she sure did give it back to him didnt she
man are these brother both shameless or what
hmm night too huh
well aki arent we getting naughty
hmm yes aki is right you know payal
you guys did keep it quite for so long
am sure they wont know now either
oh my he is getting shameless now aki
well do that after you are married
not that long to go dude
payal chill yaar she wont know
and please dont say about your wedding not happening
poor aki isnt happy with that
aki is in mood to cary this on later
ufff poor payal her mother is on her case now
yes bach gaye payal
warna toh gaye the
ohhh flashback yipeee
what the
hain poor khushi
her and her big mouth
hmmm well nothing has changed then
she is still intimidated of arnav
damn yaar bechari
i so feel for her he makes her forget things
damn man her body is not in her control
and she cant help but be affected by him
this is so cute
but headache for her right
hmm checking him out huh khushi
guess he is returning the favour now to you dear
she was so lost in him she didnt see him before her
awww so sweet of him to help her out
actually thats good she doesnt go for rote learning
wont help her understand it
oh teri khushi
you are too darn attuned to him
sorry zoned out there just like khushi
wasnt listening to that explanation
maths not my forte
did she compare his to ice cream
hmmm he looked that yummy huh
if she tells him what she is thinking well then she will be doomed for sure
good she lied hope he believed her
not paying attention is she
but cant say i blame her either
he is too darn distracting
ratna is so sweet
no really she is
can she share what she has been thinking about your son to you
i dont think so
awww ratna sure got her mind back to it
she really loves khushi and vice versa
no wonder she wants her as her bahu
i had a feeling he was looking at khushi
if he didnt that would be weird
and back to present
giving khushi a right heart attack
damn he is freaking her out
ahhh he loves to mess with her dont he
she is mad well of course she is
but that didnt affect arnav
dude why are we making it worse
am sure this is the HM suite for payash is it
cause i doubt he will do that to her
now am even more sure its about payash
must be he wouldnt be going in that direction
yipppeee of course its for payash
but he had his fun with her didnt he
naughty arnav
nalayaki ki bhi hadh hoti hai arnav
he is being really bad
awww isnt that cute
khushi no need to berate yourself for that
he knew what you were thinking dear
chalupanti mein yeh mahir hain
awww khushi chill dear
he was just pulling your legs
well now it makes sense about HM suite
its for payash now
and maybe in future for arhi too
well yes you did take it too far this time
now look what you did dude
well now that she is all guilty
she is bound to refuse any rest and delay in shooting
awww loved their thoughts in end
so cute
how they were thinking of one another bless
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Aww she ordered for him

How sweet right

Well bet she was thinking to make up to him for not trusting him

Though she don't need to that's what arnav must be thinking

Hmmm well khushi that view of his will be more common later on

When they get married

And wont say if as I know they shall marry

As if he will lose out on chance to have more time with you dear

She was gonna serve him

But before that he served her

And it seems all his favs too

See she did it for ya of course she did

Oh yeah it can be hard to eat spaghetti with fork

Aww he fed her the spaghetti hmmm spaghetti

Sorry that's me day dreaming of spaghetti

That was funny when she said nobody had to teach her how to eat spaghetti

Well am glad she is better

He wont be there for the shoot

She might find that good but I don't

Maybe he will be there

But she wont know hope he shall be there

Its true he does make her more nervous

Bless shaadi ke baad inka kya hoga

Oooh so he booked the whole place for her cool

Yes it isn't being a model

So much more work

Make up hair styling

And endless hours it seems

Baap re had I been in her place might have screamed by now

So almost all ready now

Just lehenga and that's her ready

Damn she wanted to change with them not there

But looks like that wont happen

Well they did leave

But seems they thought it weird

Oh my you get to know something new every day

Sweetie this is a shoot

So of course they gotta make it perfect

Damn its one heavy costume

But she loved the end work

And wants to get married

Even thought of arnav man

That's something right

But then she always does think about him

Damn that long

Well this is difference between real and reel life I guess

He is there

Woohoo of course he is

How can he miss this chance right

Damn she is doomed

Ab inka kya hoga

Poor khushi she always manages to gets into trouble it seems

Hmm of course if he didn't check her out I would think it odd

So cant seem to get your eyes off her huh

Of course not

Ahh seems she is getting nervous due to arnav being there

Which this mark person isn't lking

Now what can she do with him being there she worries too much

Trust me she is okay but still not okay

Of course its him how can she be fine when he is looking at her the way he was its making her jittery alight damn yaar

Bless poor thing is in tears now

She thinks she isn't right for it

Think she is the only one who is perfect for this

Why else would arnav ask her right

Phew arnav to rescue

Hope with his words she can do it

Am sure she can now right

She needed that for sure

I knew it she would do it for him

He just needed to encourage her

Oh my just what he needed to hear not

How dare they say about khushi

And with him there too

They didn't just say that

Boy is he mad or what

And rightly so

Well you girls asked for it

Insult khushi and boy that will make him mad

But he is right in what he said

He fired them wow

Well not wrong there either

Sweetie trust me he did what was right

Even you would have reacted same or maybe you would cry

And that would make him more mad

He didn't fire them just like that

He isn't that unreasonable

And if you were to find out the reason for his anger well you will be hurt for sure dear

Well that shoot went good

And am glad

But seems arnav went from there

Well he wouldn't wanna burst on khushi now would he

Ahhh dinner together huh awww

Don't over think it dear

He is being friendly only

Well maybe flirty too

But never forced for sure

Really you aren't just his to be sister in law sister that's all which is between you both

You have gotta be kidding me

Never would he rage at you just like that

Told ya no need to over think it

And if you are with him then he wont go so mad either

Hmmm what perfect ambience for their dinner

Why did he think she wont come

Her mumbling can be pretty amusing no

This is so cute though

Them just getting along

Oh dear she did ask damn don't make him angry

And yes they did ask for it

Hmmm well there she knows he didn't just do it for sake of it

Chill khushi he sorted those girls out

Damn does she realise how close she is standing to him

I think it must be you and not what you said

Oyye hoyye arnav babu complementing khushi

And she is blushing

Arnav eyes where they should be

And they are there only right looking at her lips

Hmmm things getting cosy huh

He must know you smelled him twice dear

Lunch his fav and dinner hers cool

Wow that's loads for her

As she pointed out to him

She finished ti all off as well

Must have been real hungry then

And he had to tease her there right

Her thoughts are so cute

No really they are

As if he is gonna let go of more time with you dear

Gosh khushi you are so funny girl

Saved by the bell I gues

Wow ratna sure can shoot so many questions in one go

Well she is worried for khushi naa

Though she need not with arnav being there

Like he would make her work this late

Ohhh she was excited that they went on dinner together

Really you are asking that

When you didn't call her man

Wow his mother knows him so well of course maa jo hai

Khushi of course she would say that

Not telepathy in that dear

Bless this is cute

Good she didn't ask him

Or it could get awkward right

He beat her to QA session

What does he wanna know I wonder

I think I know where he is going with this

But does she

Khushi kea age badh arnav

Actually now I don't know where he is going with this

Well what does she call him

In her mind she calls him arnav

But she never did say his name out loud right

How come I didn't notice that till you mentioned it

Of course he knows it all don't he

Even I wanna know the answet to his this question man

This is getting fun right

Oyye hoyye he wishes to hear his name from her sweet lips

Kya baat hai

Why not say his name naa he wanna listen to it

Wow he sure is hell bent on making her say his name

He wont let go of you now dear

So don't even bother

This is so cute

But what a place to stop damn yaar

Does she say his name or not

Guess will find out next

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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huh!!!! D honeymoon suite is not being used ;)
but i dont think our Arshi will hav d conventional sorta honeymoon ;) :D !
Dey both felt guilty after annoying each other, cute banter :)
and den khushi's description of italian had me rolling on d floor coz even I am not a huge fan of dat!!
Complete north indian foodie. Infact after engineering i am thinking of starting a dhaba! ;)
dunno why i wrote dis! But d end dinner was fabulous and I could actually visualize dat.
Dis Arnav is really cute and khushi as usual naive..
And Arnav is sooo smart asking her to say his name after asking evry1's name !! Ha ha ha!
Realie awsumm chapter.
And thankfully Akash- Payal here are not stuck in d 'Ji' thing! ;)
And yes d flashback as usual was awsummm :)
though I am missing d lil Khushi and loads of love to ur niece, coz I can imagine her cute banter (Masha'Allah).
Ratna and Khushi are more of friends dan d typical to be MIL and Daughter In Law( though dey both dunno abt dis,could not help mentioning :D )
U should definitely write an OS on dese two ;)
in a nutshell, a really great chapter and dazzling photoshoot!
Gud luck for ur xamz! And i will b done wid my xam on tue so ur updatw will b a grand treat after hectic study session!
So thanxxx a lott in advancee.
:)
Edited by Sj236 - 11 years ago
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RES!!!! Yipee!! Resing for the first time!!
Ok Unresing now.. (never thought i'll be doing this!!)

You got me there Lazy jee... I really thought the beginning was Arnav and Khushi.. Then the pressure cooker part was not adding up, but as my imagination was running wild with the image of our couple doing that it didn't click my guttery brain! Then when they started laughing I thought it was NK and La.. got confused with the surnames... Such was the impact of your writing.. (ending the previous chap like that and beginning this one like this) But the scene was lovely.. And Akash's replies to each and everything... Reminded me greatly of Akshay himself...

Then comes the flashback.. little grown up huh... Me being a math teacher it was interesting to read that part.. Ok, so did Khushi really not understand mensuration and other such "confusing" topics, or was it an excuse to learn from her Mr. Smartypants? The last part of the flashback seems to be in favor of the latter.. and I have a feeling Arnav thought so too while observing her explanations to Ratna.. As he was older to her, did he understand that she had a crush on him? And that led to him teasing her (with genuine liking from his side too)?

After that came the reality.. Honeymoon suite.. So Khushi's mind worked like ours too.. hmm.. Love Arnav's sense of humor there.. Their lunch together was sweet..including their chat.. Gave a sort of domestic feel..
Khushi, my dear.. Your subconscious wants you to marry Arnav.. Why don't you accept it fast and make everyone (which includes us) happy? See how when you think of marriage, the first and only person to pop up in your mind is him... Khair chodo.. we'll give you more time.. Enjoy this phase of love before moving on to the next one..

Those two girls so deserved to be fired!! How dare they?? It's not just because it's our Khushi. But whoever it was they have no rights whatsoever to speak that way!! Simply hate such people! Never appreciate people's talents.. And I'm sure their good for nothing brain works that way.. Jump into bed with someone and get the deed done! 😡😡

The dinner scene was also fab.. K's enthusiasm and excitement.. A's admiration of K.. Her thinking it's the pic.. Him looking at her.. Her blushing.. Love it..
She ate the whole thing????????? 😲😲😲 My God!! She sure has an elephant in there!
The walk.. I was expecting some blushing blushing there.. But Ratna had to call.. Still the convo was cute.. It was like speaking to her son's wife..though in her mind she is..

And the final part.. sigh... love it the most! He is actually pleading with her to say his name.. which means she has never said his name in front of him.. I think she hasn't done it in front of anyone.. And when she says "I can't say your name" I was expecting him to ask why and wanted to see how she replies.. atleast to herself.. but this one was really good too.. Will she? or won't she? Dhak dhak.. dhak dhak..

Till the end Khushi didn't get to ask him.. And you know what Lazy jee? You almost always end an update in such a way that that part remains my favourite and it makes me very VERY impatient for the next update!! But kya karoon.. have to wait na..

OMG!! Just realized how long my comment is!! This is what happens when you're sick and on leave and have nothing to do but rest! 😆 All the best with your exams and 17th May!! Hope it goes as per your wish..
Edited by rizib - 11 years ago

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