Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 19

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: happe

Thanx but I already do feel better. It's deepey who had headache. 😭

You got confused yaar. This is Deepey's fan-fic not mine. 😆

Deepey, don't ming my buddy here, the fan-fics can get confusing sometimes. 😃



Oops I am so sorry for the confusion. Let me give credit to the rite person for this fanfiction. Deepey thanks for a wonderful episode and please take care of ur health.

Happe, your fan fiction is coming up nice too. I enjoy it immensely. What else can you do when the original kyph is going to the dogs...😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
Oops I posted it before I could complete. Infact the fan fictions are more addictive and interesting for me... Thank you guys 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
yup deepey....it was onderful but plz take care of ur health
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Posted: 20 years ago

hey deepey

itsz kp

ur story is fantabulous

i love it

i stayed up till 1.30 in the morning to read it

i got soooooo addicted

wow, just love it

am waiting for ur next part

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
Hey Deepey. I hope ur feeling better. Ur fan fic is fab
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😛please continue that was really😛 outstanding😛
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Posted: 20 years ago

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue

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Posted: 20 years ago

hope you are feeling better now......😊........as for the fan fic, do continue when you get well.....i am practicaly living on ur fanfic....i have become a complete addict

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Posted: 20 years ago

I just wanna say THANKS THANKS AND THANKS. U guys r simply da best. Thanks 4 all ur support, and love. Here's the next part. Enjoy

PART-21

Naina feels really bad to see Angad like that. She thinks I know that Adi is Angad's child. She thinks that no matter how much I hate Kripa, Adi is still my grandson, he is my blood. I should go see him. So slowly she goes to meet Adi. She's never seen him before. She goes to the hospital and asks somebody, they tell her what room number he's in. She first checks if anybody is in there. But doesn't see anybody, and she goes in. She looks at Adi and feels like her baby Angad is looking back at her. She extends her hand out to toch his face but then thinks, Naina for the past 5 years u did so many things to keep Angad and Kripa apart, u can't give up today. Afterall Adi is also Kripa's khoon. She just turns around and leaves.

Angad is unable to sleep the entire night he keeps thinking about Adi, and Kripa. He doesn't know what to do now. He's hella confused.

The next day he goes to the hospital to meet Adi. He sees Khushi outside.

Angad: How's adi now.

Khushi: he's better

Angad: Aa um and Kripa (he asks slowly)

Khushi looks up at Angad: She is ok, now. But doesn't really talk to anybody. Last night she didn't get any sleep, and just kept saying. "mere adi ko bachalo, please. Don't take my Adi away from me." Use bahut gehra saghma laga hai. She thinks that umm ur gonna take Adi away from her.

Angad: Khushi u know how much I love Adi, trust me I would never want anything to happen to him. Please make Kripa understand. Please.

Khushi: "I'll try. Go see Adi now before Kripa comes back. She went to the restroom"

Angad goes in and slowly kisses Adi on the cheek. Adi wakes up.

Adi (slowly): Hi star

Angad: Hey kiddo, how r u feeling now.

Adi: it hurts.

Angad: don't worry bacha ur gonna be alright.

Adi: I know mommy said that too.

Kripa comes in, she looks at Angad and yells at him

K: "U here, again."

Adi: "ma. Remember I told u about my star. It's him."

K: "bu Adi.."

Adi: "please momy, I want him to be here."

Kripa can't do anything so she sits on the other side. Angad holds Adi's hand and sits down next to him.

Angad: "I won't let anything happen to u I promise."

He goes out and Kripa follows him.

K: why r u playing games wid us. Ha. Please leave us alone.

Angad leaves ands goes to the beach, he thinks, what is going on, goddddd please I don't know what to do. Please help/

One week passes by

Adi comes home, he's fine now. And Kripa also feels a bit relieved. She isn't acting crazy anymore.

She gets a call from Mr. Sharma

K: "hello"

S: "good morning, Kripa"

K: "good morning, sir"

S: "how's Adi now."

K: "he's recovered."

S: "that's good."

K: "I'm sorry for the delay, in your show. Coz of me u had to delay everything."

S: "no problem Kripa. I understand. Family is our first priority."

K: "Thanks Mr. Sharma. I'll be coming to rehearsals from tomm."

S: "ok, thanks. Take care. Bye"

She hangs up.

The next day. Kripa goes to Mr. Sharma's studio, and sees Angad their. They don't talk to each other. They're back to hating each other again. The choreographer (spelling??), Jay, comes and tells them that they're both gonna be performing along with other actors.

Jay: Kripa ur gonna sing a song for the audience first, then u have a dance number with Sahil (actor), and then u and Angad r gonna sing some duet songs, Afterwards Sonu Nigam and Sunidhi Chauhan r gonna sing, followed by some performances involving : Shahrukh Khan, John Abraham, Arjun Rampal, Kareena Kapoor, Kajol, and Rani. We're gonna f inish it off with a performance that marks the return off our much loved couple, meaning u two. The last performance is gonna be the biggest one. You guys r gonna perform on hit songs, with some of the best dancers in India. Alright.

Both Kripa and angad nod their heads in approval.

Jay: alright then I'm gonna be the three of urs choreographer.

Angad: three of us, but it's only me and Kripa.

Jay: Yeah, Sahil is also gonna come, coz he has a performance with Kripa too.

Anagd: oh.

Just then Sahil enters, looking really fit. Angad doesn't relly like him. But as he comes in he goes straight up to Kripa and hugs her.

S: Kripa, long time no see, I haven't seen u since the premier of my last movie. How'r u doing.

K: "I'm ok, just been busy."

Angad feels a bit jealous watching them being so friendly with each other.

Jay: alright guys lets get started. We only have to month to get this show organized and get all the people ready. It's not a lot of time. But we all r doing it for Mr. Sharma."

First we're gonna practice the singing part. Kripa and Angad u guys go in the recording room and get started while me and Sahil will go choose the outfits. And yeah in this show we're giving u guys a lot of freedom, so u guys get to choose the songs you want to sing.

He leaves and Kripa and angad slowly go into the recording room. (I really don't know what all these places r called, so just bear wid it)

Angad opens the door and both of them walk in.

A: so what songs should we sing.

Tadam Tadam Tadam

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

First of all Thanks to all of u for all the good wishes, I feel much better now.

Ok I need some feedback now. I'm confused guys, can u do me a favor please, can u guys give me a list of songs that u guys want them to sing. (ur fav. Songs or something) Coz they're gonna fight over what to sing. (as always). Please I'd really appreciate it. Thanks and take care guys. Lots of love from Raman.😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
hey tks deeply 4 such a beautiful update..... ummmm... i think one song sud be...... yehh bekhabar 4rm da movie zeher... it will suit angad when he will see sahil n kripa 2 gether.....😳 hope u like it...

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