ArShi FF: Like Never Before #1 - Thread 2 added (20.07.14) - Page 75

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the first chapter.
Khushi was already feeling some kind of unknown attraction for aranv.
Glad to see khushi as an educated responsible woman.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter-2 is really interesting.
Got to know about Arnav and khush's story.
Garima though played an evil game with khushboo and akilesh, but she did a great job by introducing khushi to akilesh. Now khushi will be under the protection of akilesh.
But will Arnav able to love khushi easily?
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Posted: 10 years ago
All the part of chapter 3 is written wonderfully.
I enjoyed how you described the wedding. The wedding didn't happen with grandeur but very neatly and everything was so organized.
I loved the conversation between khushi and akhilesh and garimA and Arnav too.
Felt really good that garima portrayed khushi to Arnav so nicely. She was a bad person indeed, but her remorse and responsibility to khushi lessened her guilt a lot.
Arnav is just a perfect husband any girl can dream.
He seems compassionate too.
Above all both of them liked each other at the first sight.
They seem a perfect couple, soul mates as well.
Looking forward to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter-4
Arnav and khushi seem really made for each other.
Khushi amused me actually. It is beautiful,how they are adjusting and understanding each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter-5
Very emotional update.
I love the intriguing character and of Arnav. he seems an enigma. But Khushi slowly is discovering him and he also is in rendition to his lovely thoughtful wife.
Their mansion as you described is beautiful and how they played the pIano together made the ambiance really romantic.
Unchained melody is one of my favorite song.
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Posted: 10 years ago
1A...

wow the start sound like thriller

lot of twist and vengeance set

scary little

well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
1B...

wow hidden pain in khushi...

taunts and accused

both lead have a set of pair as their pillar

well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
2A...

what a mean women garima...

sad and very hype update

wow
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Posted: 10 years ago
2B...

Arshi getting married...

fate bringing them together

akilesh and kushboo

2nd version

awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
3A...

Khushi emotions about marriage...

NK going crazy

its hard to accept... this but.. is something she needs to do...
NK is there

Arnav getting himself prepared to welcome... is better
half worried but surrender

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