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Posted: 11 years ago
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seems interesting...
updt the frst prt soon di...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

Its a beautiful morning where birds were chirping in a melodious song. A place where the whole environment makes each and every person feel proud that the beauty of Indian culture still exists.

The whole Ashram is situated in an isolated place in mumbai, nearer to a forest. But the Ashram depicts a complete and full fledged view of a village.

Behind the Ashram there is one more 3 storeyed building which is the dance school.

named AJANTA NRITYALAYA.

Once we open the doors of the building we can find a huge hall completely with plain granite flooring and carpets rolled onto one side of the walls.

There are 8 windows on the whole in the ground floor and also in the other floors.

The building also gives a beautiful traditional and cultural look of the houses in a village.

In short, the place is nothing less than a heaven.


There is a statue of Radha Krishna in the middle of the wall in the ground floor of the dance school and A beautiful girl is praying in front of them.


She was draped in beautiful white colour anarkali and silver bangles, silver payal, silver jhumke.





"Hey krishna ji, aapne hamesha mera saath diya, mere mumma papa ke mauth ke baad aaapne mujhe guru maa diya hai, meri zindagi me dance laaye aur aapki aashirwaad ke wajah se me apne zindagi se pyaar karne lagi. bass aap mujhpe aise hi kripa banaye rakho taaki main apna diploma puri kar saku classical dance me"


Meanwhile at guruma's cabin

R: Namaste madam, mera naam Reyaansh hai. main yaha london se aaya hu, and apne magazine ke liye indian classical dances pe research kar raha hu. agar aapko koi aitraaz na hai toh main aapke students ke dances dekh saqta hu?

Rajeshwari: Zaroor beta,

and she lead him to the hall of the dance school, he took the pic of the name of the school
AJANTA NRITYALAYA

Pune: madam, aapke liye zaruri phone hai

Ra: theek hai, main aa rahi hu

Reyaansh beta, go and open the doors, you can start off your work.

R: ji, thank you!

Rey reached the main door and a soft breeze flew his face. He slowly opened the door and a girl was turned opposite side. He closed the door slowly and went to a corner, switching off the flash in his camera so that she wont get disturbed.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMPi3EB3ixU[/YOUTUBE]


Soon she started off dancing and he was awestruck at the beauty dancing before him.

He then came to his senses and started clicking pictures of her, and once she completed her dance she slide down on her knees making rey completely flat on her.

R: wow!!! amazing!!! mindblowing!!! *Clapping and going towards her*

"excuse me? aap kon ho? and yaha kaise aaye? aapne meri permission ke bina mera dance dekha kaise? how dare you??"


R: listen miss! relax!!! main aapke guru maa se puchke hi andar aaya hu. i am doing a simple research on Indian Classical dancers for my magazine.

" Matlab aap mere pics bhi kheenchey? aapko itni tameez bhi nahi hai ki aapki ek ladki se puchna bhi chahiye??"


Soon Rajeshwari enters,

Ra: arey taani, why are you shouting?

R: taani! (rey whispered and smiled)

T: gurumaa, mujhse puche bina mere photos kheench raha tha, how dare he?

Ra: he asked me beta, and its his work! now go freshen up!

Taani shot an angry glare at rey and left that place.

Rey was looking at her retreating figure when gurumaa's words disturbed him.

Ra: beta aap aur kitne din research karengey?

R: aur 6 din gurumaa!!!


Ra: theek hai beta, abhi School shuru nahi hua, aadhey ghante me saare bachhe aayengey, aap tab aaraam se apna kaam kar saqte hai. tabtak chaliye, aap thoda naashta kijiye!

R: nahi nahi guru maa! main nashta karke aaya hu! thank you so much! and agar aap yehi chahti hai ki main yaha naashta karu toh main kal se yahi karunga!


Rajeshwari (smiles): zaroor beta! you are always welcome. Waise kitchen ka poora kaam bhi lagbhag taani hi karti hai.


Rey was happy listening to this. Rajeshwari leaves and Rey started dreaming about taani.


PRECAP: TAAREY TAKKAR AGAIN

REY'S FAMILY.


Edited by hima_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

lovely start diii

all the things described by u

is lovely like indian culture

village taarey cute fight

even whole chapter is

a good work work pls

update soon n pm meee

take care

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
really good updatethank you for the PM
really nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Awesome update... Luvd it... Update asap...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
aewsome start

rey impress by taani n her dance

n taani angry on him

eagerly wating for next part

update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
nice start
loved taani n rey tashan
rey ws so sweet
n taani ws so angry
loved d whole seq a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Wow :)
Beautiful start :)
Awesome :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Beautiful update
Taarey meet awesome
Love it taani anger on rey hehehe
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
awesome updt
loved the chapter
liked taarey meet
and i also liked the idol of radha and krishna ji
eagerly waiting for nxt part
updt soon

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