SanDhir FF : ~~ Along Came 'She' ~~ *Discontinued. Contd. on wattpad* - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: federized2210


Yeh tum log na mujhe guilty feel karwate ho humesha!!
So jaya karo please!!!
Update subah padh lena!!
Mera time ka koi theekana nhi rehta...
Sometimes I keep studying and time dekhna bhool jati hoon...
I'm so sorry if I kept u waiting!!!
Love u loads :*


Awww...when we know you are going to update, hum phir bina padhe kaise so jaye!!!!😳
You won't believe iss update ko padhne ke liye kitne papad bhelne padhe!🤢 Will tell u in Comment!!! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats anu di loved ur update u r jst awsm will wait for ur nxt update love u for ur awsm writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi anu...
no words to comment yar to write each and every word that u have written and each and every thing u wrote is marvellous yar...
thumara feeling thumara vocabulary and thumara sentence formation and all the things are marvellous yar

that thu take a topic to write the along came she the topic marvellous yar and in each and every part which u are narating the topic is marvellous yar i love to read ur FF

no words to explain the story which u have written and main thing is how the feeling that randhir is feeling for sanyu is marvellous yar... i cant believe yar etana marvellous writting and etana excellent feeling thumara brain m kaha sa aya but yar excellent FF i loved it...


and ALL THE BEST for ur exams yar... and WHEN U HAVE TIME UPLOAD NXT PART SOON...


❤️

bye
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is as always perfectly written...u r a gifted writer...now randhir came to know about that sanyukta is d one whom he quarelled wid in d childhood...dis seems to be very interseting hoping for a new bond to develop between the duo...anyways i wil wait for d next update and all d best for ur xams...u wil surely rock in xams as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
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**RESWA For Chapter 11**
**UNRESWA**xD

You Know what Anu, you have made me done weird things! Though I love studying bio, but waking till 3 is a pain in a**h***! But you are so special, your creations are so good,that I am forced to comment! I never starve to comment on anyone's Post(except of my pudding)! I comment because I feel that the author should be appreciated for writing so good! But you, you are different! After studying so much, I feel the urge to comment!You are indeed special (like my pudding, Please, ignore my obsession towards by pudding xP)!

You know, it was 1st May, when you updated! I didn't have any idea that you would update, I haven't even login the whole day!Me and my cousin both make deals that when and who will use the Computer, as there is no NET in my lappy and tab!!!
So, it was decided that I won't use the computer in night! As I hadn't logged in since morning, I grew quite restless! I thought to login once when he will went to have dinner!
And to my surprise, you have pmed me for your new thread, as I read on, you said that you will update at night, now what should I do???😆Raat ko toh cousin dekhega Computer!
Agar nahi padhungi toh phir raat ko need bhi nahi aayegi aur bio mein mann lagega! So, finally I thought to tell my bro to compromise! But, little did I know that I had to pay such a biggg amount for reading your story Anu!

My fiendish bro agreed to me, but he too had a condition, he is no less than Randhir!😈 He asked me for the Adidas shoes which he was craving since 4-5 months! My mouth fell down! I can't agree to him at any cost, the shoes cost effing 3000! I can't waste my pocket money like that! He toh never gave me anything except a bouquet on my B'day! And here he is asking for 3000 Rupees! For once, I just felt to stab right through his heart! 😡He is merely a good for nothing, who ended to come in my home for completing his education! I can't gave him 3000, but then I can't sleep or study without reading the update! Upar se itni garmi, I started sweating!So, I finally switched on the AC and eventually an idea struck my mind! See, he is such disgraceful person, he has 5-6 gfs and none of them knew his real side except me! I had clicked some of his pics with different girls! I had thought to share it with papa! Now, I finally found out that how I can blackmail him!🤣I am so great, my insane ideas always help me!😆😆😆

Aapni katha sunnate-sunnate bahut bada comment ho gaya nah, xP I am sorry but I couldn't resist myself to tell you that how many papads I had to roll to read the update!😉 Anu, don't you think I wrote all this to make you feel guilty,NO, NOT AT All!!But just to let you know that Your Updates Have Magic! I mean, I am not at all flattering, I don't believe in that, but i totally believe in praising a person to the most if he/she deserves to be!

See, I have to rolled so many papads to read the update! Would you please update soon!!! I can't wait till Thursday! But, then its your choice, I don't want to make youto study less because of me!!!

Now it's 3:30, I am half asleep, but will comment for sure!!!🥱🥱

SO finally coming to the story!!!
Anu, kisi ne tumhara kam copy kiya???😕Tell me, I will send my own Mafias to catch them!
Samaira, if you are reading, I wanna complement you on the banner! It's beautiful!😳

CHAPTER 11 : Down The Memory Lane

"Everything has a silver lining. Sometimes the darkest moments in life become the brightest ones, if only we have a hand to hold."


Down the Memory lane!!! It means remembering the pleasant memories of your past! So, I guess, Sandhir or anyone of them going to cherish one of their memory!

I totally agree that darkest moment can be the brightest! I guess, Sanyukta's darkest moments will change into brighest moments! But who will do that, Randhir or Parth!
Because of CVs Sarth never leave my mind!!!!

I so knew it! I knew it that Sanyukta won't take help from Randhir at any cost!
Jiggy is such a duhling! He gave his saving, 1000 rupee! That's actually something biggg,at least for a poor and miser girl like me!xP
Sanyukta's daddy got haemorrhage! Its one of the worst condition a patient can be in!
Rs 20000, I can't believe, my heart sank too thinking this!!! But Anu, mehngaai kafi bhar gayi hai! I think aur thoda jyada paisa nahi lagta, sab expenses ko milakar!xP

Why was it that when you are left with just one option, that option turns out to be the worst you have???
I agree, I completely agree, this same happens to me! Though I had the solution, hopefully Sanyukta too would have!😊
It was actually destined for Sanyukta to get help from him!
Randhir, ufff!!! He is so sweet! Yeah, at a times, you made me hate him Anu, but then most of the time he is my heart-throb! How smoothly he got to know that Sanyukta needed his help, and how alluringly he placed his Credit Card in her hand! Mein toh apni parents ko bhi apne paiso ko baare mein na baato!😆
The way Randhir and Sanyukta's converstaion turned out, it was beautiful! You have written it very well!!! Lo, meri taraf se pudding kha lo! You would be wondering that who the hell eat pudding around 4, but I am Pudding-Freak!!!!Eating chupke-chupke!!!🤪

Randhir have money above 10 Lakh!!!And yet there is more to come! That's why all his friends except that Parth, are clingy to him!
Oh God! Sanyukta would have been feeling so bad seeing his daddy in such a condition!Anu, u made me emotional yaar!😔

I can't believe that Randhir was actually thinking such for Sanyukta, first he trusts her so much and then doubts her! Double-personality disorder!😆
Ishita tried to be so sweet!!! -_-
All of Randhir's friends fighting *doind bhangra*🤪🤪
When will Randhir understood that he and Ishita weren't Meant To Be for each other!

Parth is even lovely!!! No wonder Anu, you made me hate and love characters so easily!
Randhir got so jealous seeing Sarth hand-in-hand!!! 😳
Finally Randhir got to know about SRK and Phoolan-devi Raaz!!!😃
Sanyukta ke daddy ko hua kya?????He is alive nah!

Sandhir First Official Huggg!!!!!!!☺️ I was waiting to read it since ages!!!
Did Randhir actually said "What's life without Challenges? God gave problems to those who can fight against them! Fight Sanyukta, Fight"!!! I am mesmerized by Randhir and off course by you too Anu!!!😳
He leaned towards her and she copied him. They joined their foreheads and stayed that way.
Imagining Sandhir in such a state!It's so soothing to think them in that position!!!
So, finally the chotu-sa update ended!!! I told you nah Anu, jitna bada bhi doh, it will always remain ITTU-SA for me!!!xD

It was one of the best update by you Anu!!!SO many emotions were there!!! Emotions were actually dripping from each line!!! I always feels content after reading your updates! God know, what you mix in the stories!!!😉 Just Update soon!!!
Waiting till Thursday would kill me!!! And I hope you won't like to see me DEAD🤢!
Now I am seriously gotta go to bed!!! It's 4:15 now!!!

Love
Sanju❤️
Edited by krisrock - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Awww...That was exactly my reaction after reading the end of it...Finally we got to see some softness from Randhir's side...*awestruck*...For me,this is the best part so far...My day couldn't have begun with a better start...Thank You So Much Anu di ..Love ya...Aastha 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow ... Like wow... It was the best update abhi tak... Bestest... Just sad that the ice was broken at the cost of Sanyu's papa's life... Par.. I guess that's how it was ment to be... And Randhir.. Oh my.. He stole my breath away today...
Brilliant!! :-) :-)

Waiting for thursday to come!!

Thanks for the pm...

And hearty congratulations on the new thread Miss Celebrity!! ;-) :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Anu!!!

I'm a very big fan of yours..
I'm glad dat i hve joined the forum so dat im able 2 read ur stories..
Ur a fabulous writer👏


I have read it almost 5 times till now... i hav been waiting eagerly 4 ur updates

Randhir kept stealing glances at the duo and noticed that they ordered coffee and burger. He watched Sanyukta finish her food and get up to leave. He saw how Parth gave her a hug and muttered what seemed like 'sweet nothings' to her.

"Effing hell.." he thought and got up.

"I need to go to the library guys. I will catch you later..." he said stubbornly.

This time the other 3 didn't stop him. Randhir sidetracked parth and followed sanyukta. He saw her go towards the trauma centre and his heart strained.

He walked faster and caught up with her.

"Hey.." he said.

She stopped and looked at him.

"Randhir...hey.."

"Where's your dad? How's he?"

Sanyukta looked fatigued.

"Dad is in surgery...He's not g-good.." she chocked out.

She then went inside the trauma centre and Randhir followed her. As soon as they entered, they saw the operation theatre door swing open and her dad being brought out.

Randhir felt sanyukta go stiff beside him. He looked at her...she looked numb, afraid.

He then focussed on her father and his heart stopped. One look at her father transported him 10 years back.

*FLASHBACK*

"Mom, how many more days are you and dad planning to stay here?? I hate Dehradun...It's so boring..."

Dr. Renuka Shekhawat smiled at her son and took his hand and guided him inside the hospital ward. A small girl of 8 years sat on a chair, weeping.

"See that girl...She is the same age as you.." said renuka.

Then she took her son inside a cabin and pointed at a frail looking man lying on the bed.

"That man over there is her father...He is battling for his life...He will lose the battle unless I treat him...Now do u still want to go back to Delhi?" she asked softly.

An 8 year old randhir looked at the sick man and the little girl and shook his head.

"Save him mom...please" he said, his eyes moist.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

"It's her...She is...Oh Goddd..."

"...Toh delhi ke betaaj badshah Shahrukh Khan...Fact is, i love u...I am in love with u..."

The words hit him like tsunami.

"So that's how she knew about the SRK thing..."

He turned and saw Sanyukta rush forwards to the doctor and ask him about her father. The doctor replied something making her face fall. Randhir saw Sanyukta's mother look stricken.

She hugged her mom tight and then slowly released her. She then turned to look at him and their eyes met. He felt a sudden rush of guilt on seeing her moist eyes and sad face. How could he have doubted her?

She walked upto him and handed him his ATM card.

"I'm sorry...I forgot to give it earlier...I will pay you bac-.."

The rest of her words were lost as Randhir pulled her towards him and crushed her in a warm hug.

Sanyukta stiffened immediately and then relaxed in his embrace. The tears she was holding back all this time fell free. This was the second time she broke down before him. Randhir kept his hands protectively around her, willing her to feel his concern.

"Thank u.." she whispered in his ears.

And when he replied, his own voice was choked, "Old habits die hard eh 'Phoolan devi'? Still the cry-baby i see..."

Sanyukta broke free from his hug and stared at him in shock.

Randhir smiled and asked, "When were u going to tell me?"

And she broke down again.

The love she felt for him was so consuming that it made her want to be in his arms forever. But she knew he had a girlfriend. She knew she wasn't good enough for him. She knew he deserved better, wealthier and prettier. All of these emotions combined with her family's state, led sanyukta to be vulnerable for once in her life.

Randhir watched her turmoil in silence. He recalled the days when he himself was as broken as her. He cupped her face and made her look at him.

"What's a life without challenges? God tests only those of us who can deliver. Fight Sanyukta. Fight..." he said and watched her eyes go from despair to determination.

He leaned towards her and she copied him. They joined their foreheads and stayed that way.


Update soon dear..


Luv

Meenu




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Posted: 11 years ago
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wat an awsum update di
i knw i m late bt was stuck up with some work so cudnt read earlier
so randhir came 2 knw abt their 1st meetng,good nw he ll never doubt her
nd dat hug,man it was beyond words
waitng 4 thursday eagerlyyy

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