New Arhi FF: Deceitful love,chp 1-7,#2 link pg 1

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ipkkndeternity

@ipkkndeternity

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Congrats on your new story and update de others plss w8ing

but hold it thru out de story i thought she was talking abt our very ownASR but how de hell did it turn 2 raizada confused

huh she wont get married 2 arnav ...

ok lets see wat happens next

plsss update soon dear plsss plsss

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Oho...what with the suspense? What was in that box?

Sid's reality? Is it happening? A heartbreak for Khushi?

In all this update from Khushi's POV I felt her happiness, her anticipation of a future with Sid, her excitement of being with him, her pain if being apart. But the I was hardly any emotions reflected by Sid.

Worst he didn't even put his proposal in words. Agreed it was not required but he simply just put the box in her hand didn't even open it himself for her.

May be I'm going to much negative on Sid but until I get an update from his POV or come to know what was in the courier box can't help it. So yeah Update Soon!!!

P.S. When will you update your other stories, ESPECIALLY MYM???

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Okay! I'm literally dying nw to read what's tht in the box !! & You bloody had to stop thr itself haina?! -_-

Ughh! :x

I jus hope its not a heartbreak fr khushi !!
Let siddharth be dead or sumthn ! Bas!

Waiting fr my arnav's entry! <'3

Lookin forward to read sooner !!

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Really really nice n intresting update...So Sid is cheating on Khushi??

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Theparcel surely contains pictures of Sid with another girl or girls!

I got a shock when I read Siddharth Malhotra.

But then I remembered the story is called Deceitful Love.

Our Arnav is a hero and he should come soon now to save his Khushi from Siddharth.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Very interesting start. So what's in the parcel?

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fanfollower

@fanfollower

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Mysterious parcel. All is not well ! Can't wait to find out. Waiting for the next update

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Awesome update Loved it Thanks for the pm

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

An interesting concept. Khushi is happily engaged to another guy.

Looking forward to chapter 2

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

WHAT THE ... IT NOT ARNAV WELL OF COURSE NOT THIS GUY JUST WANTED HER TO STAND THE AND BE PRETTY AND HOPE DM NEVER ANSWERS ER PRAY AWESOME PROLOGUE THANKS FOR THE PM.

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