New Arhi FF: Deceitful love,chp 1-7,#2 link pg 1

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Elle.Frost

@Elle.Frost

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Beauuutiful update..waiting for the next
ps- eagerly

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#572

nice part..!!! he is the owner of the club..!!!1

i guess he must have seen khushi earlier with sid and then see sid is cheating khushi so he send that parcel to khushi because they are arshi..he must have felt something for her..!!!! just a guess..!!!!!!

waiting to read more..!!!!!!!

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#573

Oh wow so Arnav's got a club huh. GRTTT

Loved their convo...

NIce update.. Story is going fine...

Thanks for pm...

Waiting for next...

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pia-loves-sarun

@pia-loves-sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#574

you got me hooked girl..

m totally loving ur characters..

great job girl..<3

awesome updates..

can't wait for next..!!

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#575

Amazing update. Im in so love with this story.. Khushi's mind voice always brings a smile on my face. Story is quite interesting. Khushi is smitten by Arnav. Eagerly waiting for their meetings. Hope this relationship moves forward to next level. I loved the bond btwn Ash and Khushi too. Ash remarks hearing Khushi's story and her reaction towards Arnav where too good 😆.. Always looking up for ur updates.. Thanks for the PM.

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#576

loved d update

thanks for the pm

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#577

Arnav owns that club

loved the update as always

do continue soon

thanks for the PM

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arshiar8

@arshiar8

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#578

OMG that was such a gr888 update

man the way u write , i see that scene in front of me ...

you are one damn creative writer ...👏 i swear

Arnav is really v sexy yarrr

love him ...

haha ash really said that monster and bed thing infront of him ...

such an embarassing moment for khushi

amazing update

the way u wrote each n every expression , khushi describing her part , his looks , his body ... his description .. OMG its juss out of this world ... ur writing is screaming with perfection buddy ... stupendous .. fabulous .. no words in oxford dictionary can describe ur writing style ...i mean it dear

usually im lazy to type long comment but ur way of writing and story is making me take a lil more tym to appreciate this 😃😊