ASYA UNITED WE STAND #1 THREAD 2 LINK PAGE 1 - Page 52

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Gr8 and too emotional by knowing asad part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Aww all this was soo sad ,,

I feel bad for Asad more now LoL

lets see how Zoya is gonna help him !

Update sooon (:

Originally posted by: Maz8

😭

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Simply beautiful and heart wrenchingly touching!


Amazing chapter! I absolutely love the bonding between these three ladies!


And I love how you've described Zoya's turmoil.


So real. I was caught up myself!


And I'm so very happy to know that I'm right in saying that Asad is not crazy.


He's just brokenly traumatised!


And it us up to Zoya to help him!


And when you say treat this like a first timer writing...I was like please please. If first time writers write the way you do...I wonder how you'll be when you're all experienced!


Epic writer!


You nailed the emotions part amazingly well!


You're talented girl!


Update soon!


Mwahh

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Asad mother killed in front of his eyes
He had given electric shocks for getting his property
Zoya parents traded her. Asad is not mad but a disorder patient
Zoya is ready to help him after hearing full story
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: khadupam

Sorry for being late
I didn't thought that u will update so early
It's okay update early only
Finally the asad flashback is out I wanted to know that
Anyways long way to go for asad n zoya
It was awesome n wonderful story update everything
Just keep showering with all ur update stories
It's fun to read
Continue soon

Originally posted by: Surish

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

superb update starry...
beautifully penned down...
loved it...
asad has such a painful past...
zoyas parents r so cheap...
humaira is a sweet friend...
dilshaad asked for zoyas help to ake asad out of that hell... n she agreed...
curious to kno how the story unfolds...
continue soon...
i want a lioness zoya jo rashid n shireen k hosh uda de...

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Srash its an outstanding work dear

I love it

Its so touching & painful

Poor Asad he suffered so much

Poor Zoya what type of parents she got?

Is she not their real daughter?

Pls pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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Originally posted by: parakshi

Thanx for the pm!
awesome update!
loved it.
asad has such a troubled past 😭
CONTINUE SOONISH SOON!