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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Nice start.. Can't wait for the 1st chapter..
Just hoping Asad accepts Zoya and doesn't reject her after the nikaah

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647704

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome Prologue👏

Zoya gets engaged.. 😛

and she is excited too for her marriage like any other girl..

but Asad..??

and her parents also being too sweet..😕

daal mein kuch toh kala hai..😲

update soon dear..😊

and best of luck for exams..👍🏼

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Amazing prologue 😳
Cant wait for the 20th ! 😃

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Thanks for Update.

It was nice starting and Interesting story.

Please Update soon,I am waiting here.

______________________

(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA-KABHI ONLY)

PRIYAKABHI.

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

amazingg. Feels lyk dillu is asads mum n sumthing kinda gt wrong bw radil n thus he dnt believe in love n all

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

@VindhyaMounika

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

interesting and amazing start...

Loved the prologue...

Thanks for PM...

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Hello Srashti 🤗

How are you dear? Hope well...😊

Your plot is definitely interesting...and a woman actually always fight through her life...be as a daughter, as sister, as lover, as wife or as mother...she always needs to fight with...

So I am expecting it is going to be tough for Zoya but eventually she will go through it and will gain her fair share of happiness in her life.

Coming to prologue...

Well it is too tough to judge a story by a prologue but for me it is intriguing so I am definitely asking you to continue it...

from that I have a doubt that Asad had gone through some mental trauma and he did the engagement without his realization. (is he addicted? or something? well time will tell but he was not in his senses)

Your writing is very good...I loved it...so update when you are free...

Lots of love 🤗

Swapno

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Nice start! God shrasti! It is taking her 5 yrs to confess! Is asad some mentally challenged or what? Had he had a heart break? Is he also being forced into this marriage ? Dilshaad lukd helpless ! Shireen too stays wid dem ! God i hav many questions in my mind! Will b back aftr my exam!