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anura7281

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

nice progression

loved zohu here what a friendship bonding

bilkul bffs

Tanveer and Razia less said better

hmm read all your clarifications

in prologue i got to understand that she is happy at present now

anyway will wait for your story narration

continue soon

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

wow wow
i just loved the concept to core...
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. Realisation of love after marriage that 2 with husband ...
Thumps up..
I m really gonna read it forward...
Superb work srashti
ill surely read ur others works 2...
Lots of love
niyati... ❤️

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

PROLOUGE

oh really great work...
Zoya now love asad
so story in flashback..
Aaa.. 😡
i just hate tanveer gaffur n razia...
Trying to be sweet to her...
Zoya is forced to say yes...
Oh poor girl her misery...
:(
why???? She said yes...
...respect fr this kind of family...
Bt thats something incredible...
👏
love
niyati

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

PART 1A
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. So finally engagement came...
How could her family be soo heartlesss.
Poor girl.
Tanveer bahn ho ya sautan har role me zoya ke peeche padi rahegi...
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.i loved the pic part to core...
His eyes made her blank.,
really asad is divine god...
Beautifully described srashti...
Is asad angry???
Dint he wanna marry her...
Confusuon confusion...?????
But it looks he had been forced...
Humi is a darling..
Zoya found a sister in her...
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. I think i mixed prolouge n update...
No tension the thing is that its awesome.
Really i m also getting strong negetive wibes...
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. Lets see wat happens...
Update asap
thanksss for pm..
Love
niyati

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

THIS UPDATE IS...

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. sUPERB/!!!!!

Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Srashti hope u dont me spaming ur thread cz now i m in mood... :p

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

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. Isnt he cute just like ur update... :)

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Hey Sri...
Well count in dis name too in ur list..
Haha..

Superb prt..
I loved it to d core..

Loved humi nd zoya's sisterly bond..
Humi k gussa... !
But she was r8 at her place..
She was the only one who pray for zoya's hpy..
Nikhaah attend nai karegi na !

Who wrote the letter to zoya..
Does she dilshad ?

Razia nd tanveer..
Well i dnt want to tlk abt thm nd waste my words..
Aaww my poor baby..
She suffered so mch..
Nd never get any love from thm..
Doesn't she razia's own daughter ?

Nd abt the nikhaah..
Yes i read it in azeez's ff..
She told me tht It was the proper way..

Awesome prt dear..
Continue sooon