THE FAMILY CIRCUS- new links-pg 152 - Page 4

Originally posted by: bhumishah

nice intro
continue soon can't wait

yaa i will try to really soon

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey apra dear
thats totaly fabolous yaar
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gr88888888888888 intro
all the characterz are really good............. 😳

can't wait 2 read the 1st part

luv it and u

lol
ana

hey thanks anan always love ur comments yaar 😳

Originally posted by: Indian101

nice intro...waiting for the 1st part

yaa iam continuing really soon

Thank you for leaving such encouraging comments which urged me to write the first part of my fan fiction..

So here comes the first part just for u allJ

Part1J

Cars are zooming early in the morning at the juhu circle the most crowded as well as posh place in Mumbai . while driving past the juhu circle one could never ignore the "parivar mansion" the main attraction of the juhu circle and the biggest bunglow of Mumbai people who saw it wondered how many bedrooms it had as it had been built in a 200 acre land and in Mumbai where in the people were used to staying in chawls this mansion served as a dream for them .

The parivar mansion was owned by abhay kapoor, dk seghal and sumit wadhwa and its architecture was done by angad kapoor the only son of abhay and kusum kapoor . the people who lived in this mansion were rich but simple in their very own ways .

The morning aarti was being sung in the mansion by kusum and was joined by disha soon enough every single member of the family had to be present for the aarti it was a rule that had been laid down by dk but hardly even dk obeyed this rule because even he felt it was to early to get up from his cosy bed

Each and every room ad been designed by angad so well according to the taste of the people who were going to stay in it like dk's room had a small balcony cum garden as dk was intereted in gardening the room had the color yellow as disha loved bright colors

Angad had designed abhay and kusum's room keeping in mind abhay's good habit of reading he had desgined a small study inside the room for him and a small theatre room for kusum as she loved her tv serials .

Kumud had got a sweet and cosy corner of the house where her room was placed angad knew that kumud loved silence and thus for her he kept her room in the quitest corners

The most difficult task for angad had started when he began designing the rooms for nimmo and anju his weakness . the problem was that both nimmo and anjali always wanted the same things and it was very difficult to match their expectations but angad had finally constructed two rooms that were of the same size and shape and had all the features same. angad always wondered that what will happen when they hunt for their life partners ????????? but he still hoped for the best

Well angad had got the full advantage when he designed his room he chose the biggest rooms of all which was located on the top floor where he could easily get the glimpse of the morning sun rising from the beach shores , every person in the house was jealous of angad's room it was not just big but was really beautifully decorated and seeing his room everyone accepted that angad had talent one of the main features of angad room was there hid loads of secret behind the sound proof wall about which only nimmo, anjali and kumud were aware in the house

Apart from the rooms of the people who stayed in the mansion the rooms of those who did not stay were also constructed and desgined by angad and he made it sure that the rooms looked equally good as every member of the house… apart from these room the mansion had 50 rooms more just for the guests which made it a palace and the loop holes of this palace was only known to nimmo, anjali, angad and kumud

It was nearly 9 in the morning when nimmo entered angad's room and found him sleeping on his stomach she just took a cushion from one of the couch and threw it at angad

"wake up lazy bones" she screamed

Angad slowly opened his eyes and muttered

" let me sleep I slept late last night"

"I know that but there is something really interesting going on downstairs" she said getting eager

"what is it" he yawned

"anjali has got a new fever" she giggled

"what oh my god I will just come down" he quickly got up and washed his face and marched down with nimmo

Anjali and her fever were frequent it was not temperature what anjali had got but her new fever meant her new fascination that she had taken up the last one which angad remembered was that anjali had taken up numerology and got the whole house turned up side down well it was really entertaining to watch anjali when she took up new tasks what could it be this time he wondered

When they reached the main hall he found anjali sitting in the centre and abhay ,dk, disha, kusum and kumund seated surrounding her he noticed that now days with the change in fever anjali had also taken up a change in dress right now she was dressed up like a priest wearing the yellow color dress with om printed on it and the brown beads necklace

Angad and nimmo looked at each other and gave each other a she is hopeless look and went to see what she was up to now

"pick up a card kaku" she said to dk

Dk then picked up a card which were placed in front of him and gave it to anjali

"So my u card says that u will soon meet ur long lost friend" said anjali

"Anjali we all know that" spoke kusum "tell us something new"

" well this is all the card says" said anjali defending herself

"now its u r turn angad pick up a card" said anjali looking at him

Angad just carelessly picked up a card and handed it to her

"well u r card says that u r secret will be out soon" and then she looked at him

Angad just stared at her with anger in his eyes

"not unless u take us all for kumu di engagement shopping" she backed up herself

Angad then just hissed and anjali switched over to nimmo

" now u r turn" she said

And nimmo to followed the instructions and picked up a card

"well ur card says that u r secrets from the past which no one is aware of will be in front of u and this time u can not escape from it" anjali looked at nimmo getting confused

"stop it anju u and u r baseless prediction" said nimmo in a irrated tone

"well iam speaking the truth"

"ok u know anju even I know to read the tarot cards" spoke angad

"really" anjali asked getting amazed

"well yes and without reading the card I can predict that the person who will marry u will either be mad or blind because only then he will be able to tolerate u" said angad

At this anjali got irritated and everyone else laughed

While all this was going on in the parivar mansion far away in Chicago it was nearly midnight and sumit and kumkum were still awake waiting for someone

"mom just chill kripa and kunal will be back soon" said kavya to mellow down kumkum as he knew that she was getting really tensed about the two of them

"let them come I am not gong to leave those two today enough of this "zaib nonsense" I will see it that kripa gets rid of this madness of hers" said kumkum in a angry tone

It was true that kripa was madly in love with a singer called zaib , he was the most popular singer around the world and every girl went mad about his voice but the only negative point was zaib never came into public he had kept his identity a big secret , he had earned millions of dollars by keeping his identity a secret no girl knew how zaib looked all they knew that he was an Indian singer with a voice of gold

It was zaib who was kripa's inspiration to study music and today was yet another day when the rumor had spread that zaib was coming to Chicago for his recording and kripa had gone to confirm this news and kunal went with her for safety sake

Nearly after 1 hour both kripa and kunal came back

" so u met zaib" kvaya asked her

" no he never came he had cancelled his recording" said kripa

"enough of this nonsense kripa now onwards no zaib in my house" screamed kumkum

" but mom"

" no means no" said sumit who stood in support of kumkum

Just then the phone rang -----

Sumit answered the call

"hey sumit this is abhay here"

"abhay how are u ???"

"just great well I called up to ask that have u packed ur bags to come back"

"surely for settling down forever now that our business is all set here"

"then when is u r flight"

"tomorrow"

"I will be waiting"

And the line went dead

Then sumit turned towards his family and said

"we are leaving to Mumbai tomorrow and I want u all to pack ur bags because we are going to settle down in Mumbai"

Every one heard him and went back to their rooms kripa was happy that now she could finally meet zaib as zaib stayed in Mumbai , kavya had no feeling regarding this and so did kunal so everyone packed their bags and left for India (Mumbai) .

The flight landed in Mumbai and abhay , kusum, dk and disha were waiting eagerly for sumit and kumkum and their kids soon they spot them and after a long hugging session they proceed towards the parivar mansion

On seeing the house kavya ,kunal and kripa were taken a back because the house seemed to be a palace from outside their house in Chicago of the biggest in the city but was no where near what they were seeing now this one was awesome beyond expectation and his architect was brilliant according to kripa

Hope u all like the part please post ur comments

Coming up- angad anjali and nimmo meet kripa kavya and kunal

Love

ApraJ

hope its long enough 😉
and hope to get loads of comments

Originally posted by: unum ali

Wonderful Part

well thank u 😳

AWSOME FIC 👏 👏 👏 U ALWAYS ROCK 😊 😊 😊 CONT SOON 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome part!!!!
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thank u soo much

Originally posted by: sweet honey

awesome plz cont soon 😛

yaa i will

gr8 part... now who is this zaib?? is it angad by any chance?? needa read the intro again..lolz..

well continue sooooooooooonn