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Posted: 11 years ago
ghai ghai mein kiya re 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Awesome-blossom

ghai ghai mein kiya re 🤣
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Chalega! S sounds like res! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kri, that was superbly amazing. The I Love You was just wow. Will patiently wait for the next update as Memphis is still ongoing. Keep writing. Lots of love xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oye kriti, cliffhanger. The most interesting sequence of the chapter and u stopped. U mean we hav to wait :( and then the i love you part. OMG! i thought he is seriously proposing and so sweet for the chocolates..and do continue soon, waiting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res...
Unres memphis k bad hi karungi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oyehoye dear... post was amazing... handling both Xams & stories :) good job darling... some lines specially How Randhir said I love you dat scene was so cute... will wait for the next part...

Love you,
Mickey
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love your writing. So very much.
It's so effortless, the way you write. It makes me want to keep reading and not stop. From start to end, I was hooked. The story, the portrayal of the characters, the dialogues - it's all amazing.
But damn! I have to wait for the next update. I guess I will :)
Edited by AzureLicht - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ye kitttaaa cute tha. I'm loving this. Tu jaldi Memphis kahatm karr ke isspe dhyaan laga naa. xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
SPOILER!!!- LAMBA COMMENT HAI!!! MY HEART FELT APOLOGIES TO THE WRITER CAUSE DII KO ITNA LAMBA COMMENT PADHNA PADH RAHA HAI...

Dii!!!!!!
Do you know what have you done???
You have made me fall in love!!!
Obvio!!
Not with you!!
But with your writing!!!!
Dii!!!
Yeh itne acche acche ideas aate kaha se hain??
Mujhe bhi jaanna hai


"Um, can I talk to you for a minute?"

"Sure," I said. He looked at my friends, hesitantly.

"Um, Sanyukta I think, we'll meet you after a minute," Kaustuki said understanding Randhir's thoughts.

They went, without one more word. I saw them go as I waited for Randhir to speak. Then, I finally turned towards him. He took out a chocolate from his pocket and gave it to me. I looked at the chocolate and then at him. My expression told him the question I was going to ask. So, he explained it himself.

"Well, I saw your friends giving you gifts, yesterday so I came to the result that it might be your birthday but then I wasn't sure. So, I asked Tushaar today and got to know that it was your birthday on Sunday."


@blue-this part was something where my expectations went high... I was like "Yipeee!!!!!!!!!!"

@pink- And dhaadng!!!!!!!! Expectations ka kabada!!! *shooks head*

Well I don't blame you

Cause problem meri hi hai! Main aise type ke mauko pe kuch zyada hi romantic sochne lagti hoon ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ hehehe


Suddenly, Randhir came and sat by my side.

"I wanted to tell you something," he said. His face was serious but his eyes had humor in them, which I could see clearly.

"Um, go ahead," I said.

"I love you," he said. I was in shock. My hands started to shake. What? So easily? Like this? I stared at him, blankly. He stared back. Then, I heard his friends shouting and laughing and saw a pen placed on their table. And I realized what was going on.

"Oh, it was a dare," I said.

"Yup! But I didn't say it because it was a dare. I said it because I wanted to," he said.

"So, was it a proposal?" I couldn't help asking.

"No, I just told you that I love you, so you are not allowed to love anyone else"

"And if I say I love someone else..." I teased.

"If you are happy with that someone, I'll go away and wouldn't trouble you anymore"

"I don't love that someone," I said. He smiled.

"Good," he said and went back to his seat.


@blue-Phirse!! Meri expectations ne ek lambiii udaaan li

@red- Dhaadnggg!!!!!! Zameen par!Though mujhe dal mein pehle se hi kuch kala lag raha tha but dil hai ki manta nahi... 😆...

@Pink- Awwwiieee!!!!!!!!!!!!! Though do baar poppat ho gaya! But really totally loved it this scene was superb!!!! Haayee!!!! 😳 😳 😳

@green-Oh okay!!!!!! Ab I swear I wish mujhe aisa banda mil jaaye!!!! I mean really kitne log aise hote hain???? 😳 😳


The penning was great!!!!

Concept of the update! As usual! Mind blowing!!!!

Scenes were well defined!!

btw !!!

Do you know!!!!

How much I wanted to read high school romance???

I really love this romance!!

The high school romance is one kind of romance which holds a special place in my heart due to the feel of the first time love wala thing...

Ab

We all want the update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Looking forward for your next update


love

Anshika


p.s

My heart felt apologies again for such a lamba comment

Edited by MyLiFeMyRuLeS.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
kriti my love this was so good...
awww...their moment u make it so special...i love the way he is behaving with her...

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