On His Demand: THREAD # 5

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Arya Thakur

@RubblesTinTin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Beautifully and amazingly written...It is just painful to see Khushi in such a situation that got her sick...Really really sorry for Arnav too...He always stand strong for Khushi...And in that process he gets so hurt but he can't show it...His anger is justified...I hope Adhway comes into their life or they have kids of their own...Hoping best for them...

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@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

awesome update but too painful

I am really feeling bad for khushi and also for arnav... both already went through a lot and now this...!!

why khushi is feeling something's wrong with adwaya?? maybe her instincts are right? what if, who took adwaya with them calling them his parents, are not his parents? I mean, in real life things like this happens a lot so!

anyways, do continue soon

and thanks for adding this part here too 🤗 for that 😊

thanks for the pm

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Really loving it.
Arnav and Khushi found their baby in Adwaya.
When they took him away... Khushi's heart shattered again.
he's so worried about him.
I feel Khushi's gut is right... something is wrong.

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Awesome update hope adwaya is fine, were they his real parents?

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Nakshatra

@amfashionista

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Amazing update loved it.

hope adwaya is fine

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Its really very hard tym for arhi...happiness r just getting snatched frm them in sum r the other means...a women intsints r stronger n sumtym does prove itself right so it does swems dt mat be adwaya was in danger...
Congras for d blog n thanks for link

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beyonddarkness

@beyonddarkness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

hi
nice storyline,loved the concept
arshi has been through a lot of difficulties in life and I feel still there is lot more 4 them to bear
khushi's instinct abt adwaya may not be wrong but arnav's worry is also rght on his place
hope they soon find peace in their life

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Rabiabegum

@Rabiabegum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Wow!!! Amazing story and awesome update:))!!! I read the whole story up till now one shot. I couldn't stop myself when I started. I didn't see index for chapter47 & 48. Please give me access to your blog. Thanx

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kajal511

@kajal511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#589

awesome update
loved it
love how arnav trying to make khushi happy...arshi passsion for each other is boundless
hope adhwaya is fine...not want more tragedy in arshi life at least at this stage