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Knarwal thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hv read story in one go must say very nice story but what happened with khushi was wrong
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow guys so much of Telugu poetry I got to read today. Thanks a lot for such beautiful poems.

Hope the next maha update brings out more poets in the open.


HEY ... INTA MANDI TELUGU VALLU VUNNARA?? first time IF lo ila telugu discussion.. adi kooda prema gurinchi.. Super Praasa... Arshi =NuvvuNenu...



I know... if your heart fills with more happiness or sorrow,... you obviously want to talk in your mother tongue. But as Deepu said in her story...

Nee Pedavulu palike Bhasha Nee gonthu vinipistundi...
Nee pedavulu neeku kuda asathyam cheppa vachu...

Nee Hrudayam palike bhasha... Mounaga nee kallu vinipistayi...
Nee kallu yennadu..yevariki asathyam cheppa levu...
Mukhyanga nuvvu preminchina vaariki.

Yendukante... nee kallu .. nee hrudayaniki addam lantivi...
Nuvvu manasulo yenta premiste... nee kallu anta prajvalistayi...

Nee kallani nuvvu chooda levu...Nuvvu choose kallani nuvvu nammalevu...
kani ninnu preminchina vaari kallu nannu artham chesukomani pradheya padatayi...

Alanti appudu nee prema nu nammutava... ninnu mosam chestunna nee kallanu nammutava..

Nenaithe Nannu premalo biginchina nee kallane nammutanu [ANTUNNADU MANA ARNAV].

Deepu said excellent point... Of course he believing her eyes more than what he saw with his own eyes... Wow Deepu excellent yaar...👏
wammo ...e poetry na understanding level daatipoyindi...😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
so finally he believes that she is not yet fault, let's see what is the baby future is, continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
MIND BLOWING UPDATE😊👏👏
THANKS FOR PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I so loved this chapter ..The whole delimma that Arnav is going through was beautifully portrayed .. Cant wait for Khushi to find out and realise what actually happened
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jduke


Wow guys so much of Telugu poetry I got to read today. Thanks a lot for such beautiful poems.

Hope the next maha update brings out more poets in the open.



HEY ... INTA MANDI TELUGU VALLU VUNNARA?? first time IF lo ila telugu discussion.. adi kooda prema gurinchi.. Super Praasa... Arshi =NuvvuNenu...



I know... if your heart fills with more happiness or sorrow,... you obviously want to talk in your mother tongue. But as Deepu said in her story...

Nee Pedavulu palike Bhasha Nee gonthu vinipistundi...
Nee pedavulu neeku kuda asathyam cheppa vachu...

Nee Hrudayam palike bhasha... Mounaga nee kallu vinipistayi...
Nee kallu yennadu..yevariki asathyam cheppa levu...
Mukhyanga nuvvu preminchina vaariki.

Yendukante... nee kallu .. nee hrudayaniki addam lantivi...
Nuvvu manasulo yenta premiste... nee kallu anta prajvalistayi...

Nee kallani nuvvu chooda levu...Nuvvu choose kallani nuvvu nammalevu...
kani ninnu preminchina vaari kallu nannu artham chesukomani pradheya padatayi...

Alanti appudu nee prema nu nammutava... ninnu mosam chestunna nee kallanu nammutava..

Nenaithe Nannu premalo biginchina nee kallane nammutanu [ANTUNNADU MANA ARNAV].

Deepu said excellent point... Of course he believing her eyes more than what he saw with his own eyes... Wow Deepu excellent yaar...👏
wammo ...e poetry na understanding level daatipoyindi...😕

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jduke


Wow guys so much of Telugu poetry I got to read today. Thanks a lot for such beautiful poems.

Hope the next maha update brings out more poets in the open.



HEY ... INTA MANDI TELUGU VALLU VUNNARA?? first time IF lo ila telugu discussion.. adi kooda prema gurinchi.. Super Praasa... Arshi =NuvvuNenu...



I know... if your heart fills with more happiness or sorrow,... you obviously want to talk in your mother tongue. But as Deepu said in her story...

Nee Pedavulu palike Bhasha Nee gonthu vinipistundi...
Nee pedavulu neeku kuda asathyam cheppa vachu...

Nee Hrudayam palike bhasha... Mounaga nee kallu vinipistayi...
Nee kallu yennadu..yevariki asathyam cheppa levu...
Mukhyanga nuvvu preminchina vaariki.

Yendukante... nee kallu .. nee hrudayaniki addam lantivi...
Nuvvu manasulo yenta premiste... nee kallu anta prajvalistayi...

Nee kallani nuvvu chooda levu...Nuvvu choose kallani nuvvu nammalevu...
kani ninnu preminchina vaari kallu nannu artham chesukomani pradheya padatayi...

Alanti appudu nee prema nu nammutava... ninnu mosam chestunna nee kallanu nammutava..

Nenaithe Nannu premalo biginchina nee kallane nammutanu [ANTUNNADU MANA ARNAV].

Deepu said excellent point... Of course he believing her eyes more than what he saw with his own eyes... Wow Deepu excellent yaar...👏
wammo ...e poetry na understanding level daatipoyindi...😕
Feeling Home.. :) once again.. emi aa kavitvamu.. (Telugu Translation ) way wah wah wah :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonder wonder ...
Its like a new wonder... wow aftr such many updates .. i wasnt crying.. aftr reading.. this very update...

Diii... u are a excavation of talents... hats off to evry way u make us go through to sharpen ourselves with more perfection in learning the lessons of life..

Wow its as superb update as always .. evn it make us cry at tyms.. laugh at tyms..make us feel content at tyms... sad at tyms... bt i really love each and evry feeling when it comes out aftr reading TVK..

dii.. i always fyd shortage of words wen it comes to this very ff.. and sply about u.. u are just a umda writer...

M really greatful to my luck that i striked some good day to ur stories and nw i feel like its the best one can read...
No line out of order ...no word out of crease.. no sentence out of graph .. no emotion out of the forming craft...

dii for u :

Mere jhuke palak bhe apko salaam karte hai
Jo karu ab ibadat ,jubaa bhe apke liye fariyaad karte hai
Kaisa ye daur aa gya hai jindagi mei mere
bin yaad kiye apko ab din aur raat adhure lagte hai...


Nw coming to the update...

First of all m shockd of myself that i was always scared that wen the prologue will come in the story it will be the worst .. it was like broking shreds more into pieces.. bt to confess today i didnt feel any of this feeling as it was in perfect flow and as the prespectives were clear that it changd the entire scenario... i was nw clr to things much much more than earlier and nw my sleep will be more of releiving as nw the thoughts about the prologue part will stop nagging my pea sized brain..

I earlier guessd in thoughts that khushi will use this money for sure for the ladies who were the victims of this cruel world...
And m seriously feel proud that she is a saviour to this lives..
she has plannd a very well life for them...
i hope if ppl take such initiatives in real life than the society can be freed frm this cruelness on womens..
dii is their smeone who you have seen taking such bold step or is this ur very thoughts??
i seriously bow my head to the way u think.. evry point u added to this section was having deep meaning... i appreciate the way u think.. and make ppl realise the social issues in ur story ... rest very few read about such issues going out of order to give a chance ...

I really appreciate hw u put the simple simple facts that in the character of khushi that hw she choose things for the womens.. hw she set things for them.. hw she provide them with hair stylist .. is like that to make them feel spl. and to develop a confidence in them.. its so touchy to read this section... i really looking forward to read more of her this side evn her life turn any ups and down as this life has given her a new meaning to serve the one who have come out of more worst than what she had seen in her life.

Khushi's nature of appreciating the person who is right at place awed me.. as she dnt let her emotions and griefs to overcome the fact that arnav was also a man who cared more for such ppl.. and he evn did a lot for her until the day he betrayed her... (as she thinks so)

Atleast she has the guts to appreciate the very man who taught her life about love until he itself broke her heart to pieces..(again as she thinks so). she atleast saw a life that she never expected in her fate evn it was for short while.
Dii it was the best i have read about her ... Her character always make me respect such soul and u to put such a rainbow of feelings and emotions and goodness in her. really its a wndrful experience to read her life..

Khushi's eyes said all wat she or evn the tym may nt help arnav to read...she is the best character i had read till date ... as a female protogonist .. as till nw i have seen the lady walk back in her shadow of grief and sadness aftr betrayal bt this khushi is just a perfect example... of a strong women... fighting back with the cruel world ...

Nw i am just scared hw she will react to the situation wen she will be gting to knw about her life's worst night wen she was assaulted.
Will she accept wat arnav will try to say...or will she broke dwn .. or will she start thinking more worst for arnav..will she accept the fact.. and more ovr that will she listen to arnav at first place. nw this are new quest. nagging my mind.

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Pyar mei tere mei kho kar khud ko bhul gaye
The mei bs mei tere sath kuch khaas ho gaye
Daga mil gye tujhse ishq mein is tarah
Warna ishq mei tere mei bhe fanaa ho gye hote...


Nw about arnav .. hw the complete truth can change a person's pov... as wen i only read the prologue i fyd Arnav as cruel .. and much more.. but today i feel pity of him.
As i dnt justify wat he said was right ... bt i am seeing the fact that it was the outburts that he felt at this period of tym and since the last two months 2days 17hours...
He was also so coz.. he found himself alliged responsible for wat he was nt at all responsible for.
Hw he can accept the fact that he is been taunted for acting cruel to her trashing her wen he dnt evn in his this life can think to harm her... this may be the reasons as no one stood to him to defense and the very lady he expected to be the owner of his life is blaming him... so this i judge completely as the wrong falls of the situations that put him into this frame..

Hw a man can see his wife with some one else on bed.. hw he can see tht she is carrying smeone's child ..

He may in his futr life may come ovr the fact that he was nt her first.. as the love matters above all. bt is this fact can be evry be washd frm his memory that he is not going to be the father of the very first child his lady love is carrying. can he love the child as he expected to love his first child.. hw he wishd to care for her .. hw he want all to be special in their life...

As i have understood about his character he may love the child more than anyone .. as he is such a personality which has always amazed us. bt just to be cncrn that hw it feels to see ur dreams trashed so badly ... And he realised it so late that it evn harmd the prsn who he cnsidrd his life...

i felt so bad that hw his silence at the tym of their last phone convo. was mistaken by her.. and nw evn he tried to clarify the thought it seems to be of no use as his words cannot make for wat his silent words damaged.

Arnav .. m happy atleast nw gt the brains to see the situation from the right prespective and read the hiddn facts.. As nw he read the truth in her eyes as he knw that her eyes nvr lied.. And also her gestures of protecting her child showd him that she is nt the same like his mother.. This single statement changd a lot for him to consider back ... and earlier he always was scared that if he evr saw in the same eyes he may be provn wrong for was he is thinking of her as her betrayal. bt finally he did it and was proven wrong and accepted the fact she is nt wrong as her eyes nvr lied to him ..that she is innocent.. finally my man is going to be the Valiant Knight...

I forgt to add about their office meet hw.. he fyd the change in her .. hw he see that she is no more the same khushi he wantd to protect... hw well he can read her.. hw he is a man of his words .. wow dii this character of Arnav and khushi u created are out of life .. and extra spelendid.. Nw i dnt dnt hope can i can fyd any Arnav or khushi this demanding and powerful as i fyd of TVK.. dii its like u have givn breathe to this characters .. thaku thanku for this very wndrful story and for Penning My Arnav and Khushi in this ff in a very of excellent way...

dii u are an excellent soul wen it cmes to pen the emotions and feelings.. wat should i say u are no less in any manner.. evry feature of ur is superb and best categorising...

Dii nw i dnt evn hav words left to appreciate yaar.. i wndr wat i will do for futr updates...


Tere nigaah ko jo maine ek baar dekha tha
Bs ushe pal tere nazar ko padna seekh liya tha

Jo jazbaat na dikhe shab se tere
Tere nazar se ab padhna seekh liya tha

Chip gye jo gham jhute hasi mei tere
Tere nazar se ab guftagu karna seekh liya tha

Na samaj saka chahe tere kae jazbaat
Tere nazar ke har asar ko pakadna seekh liya tha

Na tha yakeen kise par
Tere nazar he the Jispe yakee karna seekh liya tha

Na aye wo nazar mujhe nazar us raat ko
Jo tere us band nazar ko tere bewafaai samaj liya tha

Jo dikh jate tere ek nazar mere is nazar ko
Pher maine tere har nazar ko samaj liya hota

Aaj bhe lagta hai nahe samaj pata tere is nazar ko
Dekhte he bs ek nazar padh leta hoon tere har nazar ko...


Please bear my extremely free flying thoughts...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wat a great feeling it is aftr i cmnt on TVK.. Just unexpressive and unspokable..
Yt pleasing and feel like releif...


Nw hav fastened my seatbelt.. Ready to ride the new journey of TVK

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update deepthi.waiting for maha update :)

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