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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Wow...what a chapter...what a date...splendid... it was just wonderful.. I loved loved it.. the way you slowly took things ahead was awesome... arnav was amazing.. he took so much care in giving her an awesome evening.. and well.. the kiss had to happen..buy cant wait to find out their reaction to it.. :D

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tinsel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

Brilliant update. Soon Arnav and Khushi will have something to look forward to.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

The update filled me with a lil bit of dread. Arnav s opening up to Khushi and beginning to like and trust her. Tough place to be in - to not trust or trust and perhaps be betrayed?

Khushi is beginning to get what she set out to get - personal details of Arnav. Is she going to end up using that and destroy whatever is developing between them? Tough choice to make - career, or trust and perhaps love?

Loved their day out together and what a wonderful way to end it!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 10 years ago

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deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

i cant believe its the same arnav who used to stay away people and who was on the point of going to anger managemnet classes. its true that love/attraction can definitely make someone change for better and its seems to be the case with arnav. loved their littel outing, it was so nice seeing arnav opening up and being himself, the guy who enjoys simple things of life. n thank u for the vitual trip of the real Mumbai. i just wished ki khushi too feels the same and i love the ending, a kiss is the perfect and special way to end such a mind blowing update. eagerly waiting for the next one

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Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

What a perfect date and the relationship status is complicated.

How will Khushi stop herself from not using the material he so unwittingly provided to her. She has some hard choices to make.

Poor guy has gone thru a very hard childhood and life in General has not been kind to him.

Arnav has very valid reasons for disliking the press and maintaining his privacy. Will Khushi be able to stop herself from betraying his confidence.

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Anupama Jinethri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Loved it

That was absolutely amazing

I enjoyed it a lot

The date was perfect. It was thoughtful of him to take khushi out to show her around mumbai. I wish i will be able to come to mumbai someday! :)

Well i didnt expect arnav to be so carefree. He is in to street food. Thats a pleasant surprise looking at his personality.

And even arnav was surprise to see khushi

And finally arnav shared about his past with khushi. He had a difficult childhood for sure. No wonder he is so reserved.

And he has started to see khushi in a different light. He feels comfortable around her

To tell you the truth i didnt expect the kiss. Nevertheless i loved it. It will be interesting to see how things will go after this

Will be waiting for the next update

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ArShiua

@ArShiua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Thank you for an interesting story Arnava and Khushi.

It is interesting to find out how now Khushi will come forth with information that heard

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faffy

@faffy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Where do they go from here ... their relationship has taken a big leap and I hope the journey ahead is going to be awesome for both of them!!

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 10 years ago

#359

Wow they kissed.. Awesome.

I didnt expect him to open up to her this soon.

Now after this kiss how will kushi react..?

So thrilled. I really hope there wont be any misunderstanding

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#360

Just read the last few chapters in a row. I lost interest when you put the story on hiatus as I thought you would not be coming back but you did. Thank you for that. I love how you describe the budding relationship between these 2. The angry young man is appreciating this quite but strong female who is not after the best catch in town. Love how he has slowly stripped away the layers of aloofness and finally revealed his true self to him. However I am a bit afraid of what lay in store for them for after all she is a journalist who was sent to get the story of his life by her boss. Will it not be betrayal if she writes the article as in will he not feel that like the other females, she too wanted something from him as in the story that will make her career? Well let's hope she also opens up a bit to him before she publishes her article on him. I know there is no malice on her part but if she does not talk to him he may perceives it that way.

That was a heck of a day they just shared and if it was a first date, it sure was a memorable one. Now we await the aftermath of the steamy kiss . . .