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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Khushi and the mystery man!

nice update.

waiting for the party. Khushi picked a perfect dress to get the attention of that certain gorgeous man.

can we expect a dance or a little romance!

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

I have missed this story Aami... I am glad you are back and now the pace of the story is going to pick up... because I want it all... suspense, drama, romance... a lot of romance actually! 😆 I am liking the subtle transitions in Arnav. And I love this fiesty Khushi who is soon going to need all her courage. Loved her question Arnav about Krish... and the green eyed monstor making its way into our story. I am still apprehensive of the fact that Khushi needs to give her boss... the inside scoop on Arnav... It is going to be such a heartbreak and deception for Arnav... I dread to think how he will react already... even before they actually come close. And aah haan... crimson beauty... looks like someone is going to be a goner! 😳 Update soon Aami... we are always waiting outside the lines...

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Superb FF.. I read it in one day and absolutely loved it...

Arnav is a cricketer and Khushi, a journalist... What a fire cracking combination especially when Arnav hates journalists with so much passion...

Arnav is rude, brooding and mysterious personality for the world... And this is his way to shield himself from hurt and pain that his past brings.. Something happened in his childhood that made him the person he is now... While khushi is a bubbly and lively girl with high morals.. Both are attracted to each other but with Khushi's secret assignment and the mysterious man, where would it take them..

Loved how Arnav cares for her and how khushi defended Arnav infront of her friends. . Loved their first date... Arnav opening up to her and khushi's crazy antics and her love for food... That was beautiful. . ..

Eagerly waiting for the next update. .

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Nice update aami..
Aww! Loved the way kushi is getting conscious about her dressing to impress sone set of caramel eyes 😆 😉
A person can lie to the entire world but cannot runaway from their own conscious when falling in Love...
Both r trying a lot to convince that its just attraction but hope they realize it soon that the feeling is more that that 😊
Kushi is planning to start her investigation.. good..
Waiting for the story to proceed further...
Thanx for the pm aami... 😛

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kanika

@kank_dah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

great update.arnav nd khusgi gelling up with each other slowly

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navjot7

@navjot7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

awesome update
arnav is jealous,when khushi ask him about krish
so arshi will again meet in party
i am waiting for that
thnx for pm

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madgirl84

@madgirl84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Nice work

Good SS

waiting for the next

update soon

Do pm me for the next

sent you the request

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Welcome back, A!

Was missing this story.

I have a feeling this Krish guy is a bookie involved in match fixing.

The next few chapters will be interesting with this new angle in the story.

Arnav is not too happy about Khushi taking interest in other men!

Wonder how Khushi will react to this!

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archa2810

@archa2810

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

is arnav feeling jealous?? i hope so!!

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

After a sensational chapter 13. I was expecting more romancing scenes from Arnav and Khushi and was kind of disappointed. Neverthless it was a good chapter and your writing is superb.

I know why this is necessary as you wanted to resolve the mystery man and make Arnav jealous so he recognize his feelings.

Looking forward for their party as Khushi is dressing up to impress Arnav.

Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

thanks.