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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: azina

interesting prologue continue and upload first part soon

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Hey friend here is the first part of this ff. sorry for the spelling mistakes in advance

Sandhir FF:Love Till Eternity

chapter 1

As the dense forest slept peacefully by the loving rays of the lovely moon embraced it. As disturbing this peaceful sleep a angelic girl with a beautiful blue gown came running into the forest giggling happily as a boy with blue pants and white shirt chased her with a naughty smile on his face

''Anna this is the last time i am warning u stop there otherwise u have to face the consequences''said the boy still chasing the girl


''oh come on love if u want the treat u have to work hard.so if u want me then u have to catch me dear''said anna as she turned and giggles seeing the irritated yet lovely face of the boy


''Anna wait'' said the boy chasing her .


As the girl ran without listening suddenly the forest became pitch dark as the dark clouds covered the beautiful moon.Anamika stopped in her track as she can't see anything . As she opened her mouth to call her love suddenly a rough palm covered her mouth from her behind.


''No anamika no . don't make the mistake of calling him''said a cold voice which send of shiver of fear with its evilness.


As the girl struggled to realise her from the evil's grip a huge hungry fire encircled her and within mintues it stared to burn her and she turned into ashes as she heard the cold n evil voice said '' Goodbye love''


A girl in a white and purple room with dim lights woke up breathing heavily as tears and sweat covered her face .Just then the room filled with brightness as a 16 years old boy switched on the lights and sat beside the girl and rubbed her back .


''sanyukta di shhh calm down u r fine di just calm down '' said the boy to a paniced sanyukta

Then he took over a glass of water and made her drink it.After sanyukta drank the glass of water and she calmed down some what.


''Di the same dream?'' asked the boy worrily.

''Yes veer . The same dream . The same dream which is haunting me for the past couple years.And asusual today also i can't see the boys face or know his name. for the last two years only i can see the girl face which is same as mine.I don't know veer when this torture will end . I just don't know veer . '' saying this sayukta broke down completely . veer just hugged her and rubbed her back as tears came from his eyes too .After few minuted veer broke the hug and cupped her face and wiped her tears and said


''Di everything thing will be fine soon. please di don't hurt urself by thinking about it again and again . We will make everything fine soon . I am with u na? . u trust me na?'' asked veer


Sanyu just nodded her head as fresh tears formed in her eyes.Just then veer wiped the fresh tears and said dramatically'' NO tears . u know na ur tears break my heart and i hate tears puspha'' keeping his hands on his chest.


sanyukta smiled seeing her little brothers antics and playfully slapped him on his shoulders

''stop ur drama my drama king. Now come and sleep . Tomorrow i have to atten the college and i don't want to be late on my first day''said sanyukta and lay on the bed as veer jumped and lay beside her hugging sanyukta

''ok di ok .But please di don't think too much about it. Everything thing will be fine .Afterall ur prince charming veer is with u to rescue na?'' said veer giggling

''OK my prince charming i will stop worrying. Now sleep'' said sanyukta and kissed veer on his forehead as he kissed on her ceeks.


Sanyukta covered them banket and switched off the lights.Within mintues veer drifted off to sleep . But sleep was far away from sanyu's eyes.


Sanyukta's p.o.v

why these things r happening with me? why these dreams r haunting me?why can't i see the boys face?who is this girl anna? why she is having my face?why i am feeling someone is calling me ?why i am having this emptiness in my heart?

These are the unanswered questions for the couple of years . I don't know whether i can't find answers or not. But i have a feeling that tomorrow will bring something /someone in my life .But good or bad i don't know . Lets see what will happen tomorrow.with this thoughts sanyukta drifted off to sleep.


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As the bright stars covered the black sky a boy in his early 20 stood on his balcony holding a beautiful braclet in his hands and stared at the sky and spoke

''How many more days n night anna .How many more. How many more years u r going to make me wait. I am living this dead life for the past 250 years only coz of u and ur promise. u promised me u will return to me soon . U know anna these 250 years i am living in hell without u and ur love .please anna come back to ur randhir soon please.I can't handle this torture of not having u beside me more. please anna please come back to me.''said randhir with a broken voice as he gripped her bracelett .Just then a arm was gently placed on his shoulders. Randhir know whose hand it was and he wiped his tears and turned look at his big brother

''vardhaan bhai . whar r u doing here bhai u should be sleeping now as we r going to hunting tomorrow na?'' said randhir

'' i can ask u the same randhir .''said vardaan

''Its nothing bhai just thinking about anna.''said randhir

''randhir i know its not easy for u . even i too miss anna . she is like my little sister randhir. but randhir do u think she will be happy knowing u r paining over her'' asked vardhan

''i know bhai i know. but i can't take this anymore these years of waiting is remaining her more n more. she died just coz she loved a cold blooded monster like me . and this guilt is killing me bhai.''said randhir with a broken and pained voice

''no randhir dont call urself a monster . anamika never liked it. and u belive in her right?'' asked vardhan

''more than myself bhai''replied randhir confidentily

''then belive in her promise . she will come back to u as promised. so stop hurting urself like this.AND go to bed right now.coz u have the college tomorrow and i don't want my brother to be late on his first day''said vardhan with a smile to light up the mood. randhir understood his intention and replied

''ok bhai . but u know what bhai i am so bored of attening this college and more over ur classes.i hope my anna will come soon and rescue mefrom ur torture''said randhir with a smile. Vardhan just smiled at him and said

''ok now go and sleep .and get ready on time tomorrow morning .goodnight''and hugging him

''good night bhai'' said randhir as vardhan broke the hug and walked out of the room


Randhir looked at the bracelet in his hand and kissed it.


''Bhai is right anna . u will come to me as per ur promise . i trust u . i love u anna .'' said randhir and went to embrace the sleep.


PRECAPE:Randhir n his anna meets after 250 years


ok friends here ends the first chapter . i will continue if i get more comments . please give ur feedback. Hope u enjoyed this part.


with love ,

scarlett🤗

Edited by Scarlettkevin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awosame loved it upload next part soon
Edited by azina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing plot... Cont ASAP n yup pm wen update..

Love
Ayesha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update👏
Loved the prologue & first part👏
Update soon
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Originally posted by: azina

awosame loved it upload next part soon

thanks dear ... Will update soon
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Originally posted by: Craziness123

Amazing plot... Cont ASAP n yup pm wen update..

Love
Ayesha..

Thanks dear ... Will update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Awesome update👏
Loved the prologue & first part👏
Update soon

Thanks dear ...will update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my gosh!!!! A supernatural fiction..!!
This is just amazing...
I can't tell you how much crazy I am for stories centered on extra-terrestrial species... Oh! The prolgue just made me go insane. It was just magnificent..
The first chapter is just awesome. I'm so fond of this FF already.
Anna's incarnation as Sanyukta was a big jolt for me...
Aww... It would be great to read how the story proceeds and how SanDhir's first encounter comes out...
I enjoyed every bit of the story so far...
Do write the next part soon..

--With love
Kajal
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Hey friends thank u all for ur lovely comments.so here is the next chapter.Enjoy reading ...
CHAPTER :2
As the early moring rays of the sun kissed her lovely face sanyukta opened her eyes with a lazy smile and took her xperia Z mobile from the bed side table and looked at the time it showed 10 past 6,she decided to prepare breakfast for three of them and kept the mobile back and tried to get up when she felt a strong grip on her waist . she smiled and turned only to see her cute little brother sleeping like a baby helding her waist tighly like a four years little boy helding his mother's.sanyukta lovingly smiled at her sleeping brother and kissed his forehead .Then she removed his hands carefully not waking him up and properly covered him with his bedsheet and went to kitchen to prepare breakfast after freshing up . when she finished preparing chappati and curuma it was already 7.30.she went upstairs and entered the room next to hers and opened the door and looked at the figure sleeping on the bed sheets entangled with his legs .sanyukta shook her head with a smile and went and sat on the bed waking him up ''Abhi get up na its already 7.30 dear .''said sanyukta to sleeping Abhimanu.
ABHIMANU the best brother a girl will wish to get.sanyukta and abhi are twins where abhi is 20 minutes elder to her .But he is the most supportive ,understsnding ,loving and caring brother in the world to sanyukta .He always supported in her thick and thin and loved her a lot.
''Hmmm sam 10 more minutes please''said abhi sleeply and covered his face with the sheet.seeing his lazy brother and thought ''still a baby''.
''Abhi please get up .We have a college today and coz of u i don't want to be late on the first day.so get up now ''said sanyukta shaking him.But Abhi who was in no mood of waking up ,turn and started sleeping facing other side.sanyukta was irritated by his lazy brother and snatched the sheet from him and turned the AC on 16 degree,within minutes Abhi started shivering and woke up with a annoyed face and looked at sanyukta who was giggling .
''sam u know what veer is right sometimes u r a hitler''said abhi standing up from the bed and went near sanyukta and kised her fore head
''Good morning sam''said abhi hugging and resting his head on her shoulders and closed his eyes.sanyukta smiled at his antics and hugged him back and said''Good morning bro''
''This is not fair u twins are enjoying here leaving me pain in lonliness .This is not at all fair di ''came a voice from their behind and both of them turned to see veer standing there with a fake angry face.
''oyi drama king stop ur drama and give me a hug''said abhi opening his arms and veer came and hugged with a smile and hugged sanyukta next.
''ok guys enough now .Abhi go and get ready for the college i don't want to late so go now ''said sanyukta pushing him inside the bathroom.
Then sanyukta went to veer and said''veer be careful ok .since ur school is reopening after two weeks you will be staying alone here so lock the house and if there is any problem call me ok .have ur lunch on time ''with a corcern face .veer smiled at his sisters love and care .
''oh di please ,i am not a 5 years little boy .so don't worry i will be safe and did u forger i am ur prince charming.So none can do anything to a prince u know''said veer with a naughty smile .sanyukta laughed at his brother .
''ok my prince charming .Now i have to get ready .so lets go''.And both of them existed the room.
After 1 hour both sanyukta and Abhi left for the college having the mouth watering breakfast.
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As the metallic black Audi entered the FITE campus it caught everyones eyes and they just stared at the car.After parking the car a hansome came out from the driving side in a crushed blue geans and a blue T-shrit as all the girls started drooling on him making other boys burn with jealously.But the next moment a beautiful girl in a black geans and a white sleeveless top with a ponytail reached till her waist came out from the passenger side as the boys dropped their jaws seeing the breath taking beauty as it was girls turn to burn in jealously.
As abhi and sanyukta saw their effect on the other students, Abhi whisphere to sanyukta''The history is repeating as in london''and both of them started laughing.
Sanyukta and Abhi are walking in the corridor to their class .But both of them have no idea were their class was .
''Yaar where is class room man,really my breakfast would have digested in this walking''said sanyukta getting irritated .
''wait sam i will ask someone''said abhi as he spoted a cabin on which it was written Vardhan suriyavanshi
''sam look there is a cabin .I think it much be some professor's,let us ask if anyone is inside ''and both of them went to the cabin.
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On the other hand vardhan and Randhir was talking in the corridor about thier time table.
''Bhai what is this yaar i am going to attend ur classes four days in a week .Why god is always cruel to me ''said randhir with a dramatical expression .Vardhan smiled at his brothers antics and playfully slapped him on his back.
''ok ok now stop ur antics and let me remind u i may be ur brother ,but i am ur professor here .so don't u dare do this antics infront of everyone''said vardhan with a serious expression .
''ok professor i will be a good boy''said randhir with a smile.''Actually bhai i wan...''but randhir was cut off by a voice from outside the cabin.
''May i come in sir''asked a guy voice from outside
''yes .come in ''said vardhan as abhi entered the cabin.
But both vardhan and randhir stood there with a stunned expression when they saw a girl entering the cabin followed by abhi.Randhir just stood there looking at sanyukta deciding if he is dreaming or he is really seeing his ANNA again after 250 years of waiting.But what shocked him the most was his Anna stood there looking at him with a casual expression. on the other hand vardhan was shocked and happy seeing HIS PRINCESS ANAMIKA ,but he is really worried for randhir as he guessed that Anna didn't remember her randhir or him from her casual expression,he came out from chain of thoughts when abhi called him.
''Good morning sir ''said abhi with a polite smile.
''Good morning.How can i help u both .Are u freshers?''asked vardhan with a professional tone .
''yes sir we are freshers.I am sanyukta aggarwal and this is my brother Abhimannu Aggarwal and joined her for Mech.E .we are searching for our class room .Can u please tell me were our class is?''asked sanyukta politely and boldly with a smile .vardhan on hearing her bold talks thought ''U didn't change a little bit''
''sure students its my duty to help u .Myself Vardhan suriyavanshi and this is Randhir suriyavandhi my brother even he is first year Mech.E.so if u both wait outside for a few minutes he will join u and will show u ur class.''said vardhan
''ok sir we will wait outside ''said sanyukta and both of them left the cabin with a thank u.
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After they left the cabin vardhan immediately hugged Randhir knowing what he will be going through.Randhir who stood like a lifeless doll ,finally broke down on feeling his brother's warm hug.Randhir who was crying like a small baby said in between his sob''She didn't remember bhai .she didn't remember me .why always this is happening to me?why can i be happy in life?why bhai why?''with pain and helplessness visible in his voice.
vardhan felt like someone stabbed in his beatless heart seeing his brother's condition.But he composed himself and parted the hug and cupped his face wiped his tears
''Randhir just control urself .I know it must be really hard ,but u must stay strong for u and ur anna right.Randhir look at the good side ,after 250 years of waiting finally ur anna is here.If she is here ,then u can bring her memories back soon with ur love .so be strong atleast for her Randhir''said vardhan with a soft voice.
''But what if she never remember me bhai?what if she will leave me after knowing what and whom i am?''asked randhir like a 5 years little child.vardhan eyes become moist on seeing himlike this.
''Randhir if destiny made u both meet again,then the same destiny will unite u both soon.And i am sure ur anna will accept u ,whether she is anna or sanyukta but ur love is the same .so keep faith in ur love randhir .Now go and join them and go to ur class''said vardhan handing him his back .Randhir took the bag as he nodded and was about to go ,but vardhan stopped him by keeping his both hands oh his shoulders
''Randhir keep it in ur mind that she may be our anna but now she is sanyukta so please be in control around her ,don't do anything for which u will hate urself later ok''said vardhan with a seroious tone.
''Don't worry bhai .i will manage .''replied randhir knowing his brother's corcern and left the cabin giving a hug to him.
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Outside the cabin Abhi and sanyukta sat in the bench where sanyukta was lost in her own thought . She was so confused why she felt some unknow connection and attraction toward the boy whom vardhan sir introdued as Randhir.
SANYUKTA'S P.O.V:
why i am feeling like i know randhir and vardhan sir for a long time?why i felt like i got something for which i have waited so long?why i saw some kind of pain in randhir's eyes ?why its hurts a lot on seeing his pain?why i saw some longing in his eyes ?oh God why this is happening to me why?
on other hand ,seeing her sister lost in her won thoughts he know something is wrong ,as she didn't utter a single word after they left the cabin.As he was about to ask her what is bothering her the cabin door opened with a click and randhir came out of it and walked toward them.

-To Be Continued.

So here ends the first chapter . Please leave ur lovely feedbacks .sorry for the spelling mistakes.

p.s:For PM for next part hit the like botton below.AND SCROLL DOWN FOR IMPORTANT NOTE

With love ,
scarlett.🤗
Edited by Scarlettkevin - 11 years ago

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