Arhi SS The Cursed Heart Th 3 Completed

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Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Loved d update

C 🥳 NGRATS ON NEW THREAD

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Congratz on the new thread🥳

This story is one of the most hilarious stories I've read so far, along with the much needed romance and all the other elements😳

Thanks for sharing it with us🤗

Will comment soon😉

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ipkkndeternity

@ipkkndeternity

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Superb update hats off

from de start 2 de end every thing was jst mind blowing

i want khushi 2 confess his love for khushi

and u wnt blv when he said li luv u 2 khushi

my heart did a little jig jag wow superb

and de poolside scene damn dey created havoc in my senses ... my heart was jumping and i felt lyk it wud come out any monent superb uodate dere de way she ran towards him was mind blowing she loves him alot

thx for de pm update soon dear ... love dis story

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Congrats and superb update dear plz update soon

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

nice
i lik d chapter name

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Aww such a heart wrenching update

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

lovely...hope Nani tells Arnav, how distraught Khushi was for him...

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

The way Arnav showered Khushi with kisses to prove how much he desires for her and his confession filled with love an anger was so passionate. Finally he uttered those three magical words which were so hard for him to said because of her earlier numerous rejections.

I have to admit that everytime when dream scene was described, I thought it was real. Because the way you portrayed these scenes seems so realistic. For one moment, I thought that Arnav accepted the marriage proposal in order to make Khushi jealous. But everything turned out to be a part of Khushi's nightmare. As usual, I always fall for your trick.

After reading the title 'Confession, Seperation and Reunion', I thought Arnav will forgive Khushi at the end of the chapter. We had confession and seperation parts but not reunion part. I hope we could see the reunion part in next update. Because they are both suffering separately in their own worlds. At least he deserves to know her real feelings for him.