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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

nice os
idea ws really gud
only thing was ijust felt lil rushed
i understand its a os
so its fine
hats off to ur creativity

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anusha

@_Anusha_

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

XD lol! One of the most funny os' s I've evr read..don't mind but since u never wrote sumthing lyk dat it felt very odd...

Anyway...d romance was gud! :P

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Priyanka Datta

@taani.priya1997

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

but i liked it pooja but i think forgiving part could be a bit detail

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Pooja

@Cupcake.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: _Anusha_
XD lol! One of the most funny os' s I've evr read..don't mind but since u never wrote sumthing lyk dat it felt very odd...
Anyway...d romance was gud! :P

what was funny , i didnt understand your comment 🤔

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Sanjana

@sanjana.sanju

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

it was a nice os, reyam enemys, taanis love, reys reveng, everythg was nicely written bt d last portn after rey meeting taarey daughter was a little too fast i guess, s i no its an os and der is a limit in writing bt still i felt so, bt on d whole dis os was emotnal, hot ,romantic and lovely with happy ending : ) and all d best fr ur exams...

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928725

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesum blossom os
luved it fully

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vinnie

@vinnielove4

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

oh gosh...reyam enemies...????!!!!!!!!!

how could taani be so stupid to spend a night with a guy who already rejected her and was her bro's enemy...???? well may be bcz she is THE TAANI who can do anything...!!!!!!!!!

btw i love the name rihaana however rey's character wasn't good but it came to a positive end...and that's what matters...

and therefore i liked your os...

it was great...

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

heyyy dear i dont have

words to describe ur

writing skills i means

kahan se aate hain

tumhe itne saare ideas

yrrr they are minblowing

n this os takes my breath

so many emotions are in

one os just fabulous

love their romance

n the title was good bcoz

it describes the whole os

overall mindblowing dear

keep writing n thanx for pm

bye

take care!!!

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Prohelika Bhattacharya

@prohelikaVD

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Again an awesme Os...
I truly bowed u down
Awesme Os
.Rey used taani for his revenge Bt unknown to him Dat he will lose his only possession taani
Nd Der night was...I cnt hv wrds to explain
Loved Ur Os to the core

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yoyoaishwarya

@yoyoaishwarya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

😳 😛 👏awesome os
love u meri ideas shop , awesome os , donkey rey taani chali gayi tab taani ki importance pata chli, rehaana baby muhaa!!!!! description is so beautiful looks like I have seen that cutee adorable baby , fantastic end n loving os keep writing

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