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bs1224

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

😳

Got the confession of IPKKND ...and now I'm missing it even more 😒

Waiting for update

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smiley13

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

lovely teaser...
waiting for the update...😛

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harman12

@harman12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Awesome story read i one go teaser was awesome waiting for update

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Happytwinkle

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Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

loved the teaser

thanks for the pm

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akhila22051993

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Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Wonderful teaser waiting for update

And thanks for the pm

Edited by akhila22051993 - 11 years ago

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sera-high

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Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

brilliant teaser...waiting for the update

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joviha

@Joarshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

wat he is ill????wat happened to him????she is crying for him...can't wait to read more...

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Neelam/Nilu

@-Mannat

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Wow! Amazing Teaser..
Can't Wait To Read The Update..

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desisweetheart9

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Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Thanks for the PM. Nice sneak peek.

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dudley

@dudley

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#480

Hi,

I just came across this story and could not stop till I read the entire thing!

just one word: wow!!👏

I found your characters to be realistic, I mean they do have some fictional qualities, but still they are very real. Especially the way Khushi handled Arnav's proposal.

Okay I am a romantic at heart, but if she had just accepted him in one go, it would be very difficult to digest. This way you have kept true to her nature, she is a fighter and will only forgive Arnav once he earns her forgiveness. Also, by making Arnav keep trying, you have managed to portray his stubborn nature as well.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading your work. The story is very gripping! There were times when I felt like hitting Arnav on the head, and there were others when I wanted to give him a hug 😊

But yes if there is one character I absolutely despise it has to be Prachi. 😡

I really don't like her and now I'm very interested in how you will redeem her. From what i can deduce from your work, you seem to be someone who loves happy endings. So i'm waiting to see how you give Prachi, NK, and Khushi's fiance (sorry don't recall his name ) their happy ending.

Now this is getting pretty long, so all i have to say is thankyou for giving me the opportunity to read this amazing story, and I am eagerly waiting to read the next part 😊

P.S: don't make Arnav suffer too much please! Can't see him suffer😳

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