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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: twni

nice one great going update soon

thanks dear Will update tonight or tomorrow morning
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTE

Hey friends . I really thank all of my friends who gave their lovely feedbacks for this story . Really it means a lot to me. THANKS A LOT for all of them who comment on this story .But i am really upset on seeing the no of views and the comments. I didn't even get 100+ ,where the views arre 3900+. Please atleast like the chapters . It takes a lot of efforts to write a story and update it. so i request everyone to like n comment . Even the feedbacks are negative it means a lot. So i will only continue this story after the 4 th chapter if i get good response. otherwise i will surely discontinue my works. Sorry if i am rude and demanding , but i want response for my works . i will update the 4th chapter within 2 hours .

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scarlett🤗
Edited by Scarlettkevin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sandhir os:Make Me Alive By Ur Love
so friends here is the next . sorry for the spelling mistakes
PART 4


As vardhan entered the class everyone greeted him . He eyed everyone and he greated them back.


''Good afternoon a very good aftenoon.so by now everyone would have come to know about the college culturals which will be held next month in mumbai.so i want everyone to concentrate on this culturals .As ur one month vacations are starting from next week i want the final list of praticipating students by dayafter tomorrow evening.i am appionting sanyukta, parth n randhir as the head . so u three must handling this .Am i clear guys?'' said vardhan eyeing the trio.


''yes sir''said randhir, sanyukta and parth.


''Good very good. Then everyone give ur names by tomorrow morning by tomorrow morning to any one these three. Now everyone go n practice for tomorrow . Go now'' said vardhan and everyone except the trio n vardhan left the class.



As everyone left vardhan said to the trio


''so guys i hope u three will not let me down .I allowed our college students to take place in this cultural only by ur resquest sanyukta . I hope i will not regret it later''said vardhan to sanyukta


''No sir i assure u , u will not regret it . we will give our best sir''said sanyukta with determination


''ok thats good . Here is the full details of the programs so all the best.''said vardhan as he left the class.


As vardhan left sanyukta jumped in happiness .


''i know i know sir will accept this. thank u so much parth if u didn't helped me today sir would have never accepted this . thank u so much yaar''said sanyukta and hugged parth and parted the hug within few seconds.


Parth just smiled at her childishness and said''Come on sanyu its my duty to help u . Ok i have a important work now . I will meet u guys later . bye''


''ok parth bye .''said sanyu and parth left the class leaving sandhir alone


''so MCP i know u r Mr. Intelligent i know u rock in lab. But how u r going to rock the stage mr. hmmm''said sanyu teasingly


''I will show that in the stage Farzi. so may i know how u r going to rock to stage. '' asked randhir with his usual attitude


''u will too know that in the stage ok. Now i have important work so lets us meet tomorrow morning MCP''said sanyukta


''ok farzi . but please atleast tomorrow come on time .''said randhir


''yea yea i know that. bye MCP'' said sanyu with a smile n left the room



AS sanyukta left randhir stood there with a sad smile playing on his lips


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As sanyu reached her room vidushi hugged her and thanked her


''thanks sanyu thank u thank u thank u so much. if u didn't asked vardhan sir he would have never allowed us to this culturals .thanks a lot yaar''


''ok ok . but please let me breath yaar otherwise i will end up in hospital ''said sanyu lauging at her friends antics as she parted from the hug


'' Really yaar u r the best friend . ok now i am going to practice bye ''n she ran out of the room.


sanyukta went to washroom to fresh up.


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As the night winds kissed her face sanyukta hugged herself to protect herself from the cold as she walked on the beautiful college garden.


''i don't know what is happening to me . why this new feelings for him . why am i feeling this empiness when i am not with him. i want to make him happy by my love. is this love?or just a crush? i really don't know but i want to get a try to my new found feelings for him. yes i will give a chance''though sanyu as she keep walking.


But she stopped in her tracks seeing the persons condition which broke her heart into million pieces. There sat the person crying his heart out around whom her revolved these days.Without her knowing her leg carried her to him. she went n stood behind him and called him


''Randhir''


Upon getting no response even after few seconds she kept her hand on his shoulders.


On feeling a warm touch on his shoulders randhir opened his eyes knowing whose touch it is. He came know this touch her touch among millions.He wiped his tears n looked her as she spoke


''Randhir what happend please tell me''


But randhir just stared at her .He was amused to see concern, care, pain, in her eyes for him . But he was stunned to see an another feeling in it.


Getting no response from him she sat beside him and asked again


'Randhir please tell me what happen?''asked sanyu worried.


''Nothing sanyukta . please leave me alone.'' said randhir


''No randhir not anymore. For how many days u r going to shut others from ur pain. please randhir atleast share it with me'' said sanyu.



Thats it when these words left her mouth the feelings he kept inside with him came out as a volcano.


''ENOUGH SANYUKTA ENOUGH. I HEARD A LOT AND I DON'T WANT TO HEAR ANY MORE. JUST GO AND SHOW THIS CARE AND CONCERN TO UR BOYFRIEND NOT TO ME. SO JUST LEAVE ME AND GO TO UR BOYFRIEND'' shouted randhir as he stood up n turned to go . but sanyukta caught his wrist and stood infornt of him and asked


''what the hell u r talking randhir. what boyfriend ? what is wrong with u''


''oh come on i know whats going on between u n parth . i know he loves u n u love him too. so now stop this drama n let me go


''No randhir u r not going anywhere or i am letting u . and what the hell u r talking who said i love parth ?. i don't love him n i can't love him randhir coz i love...'' but she stoped from saying .


''why i can't love him sanyukta tell me or u don't want me to know ur relationship with him . TELL ME WHY CAN'T U LOVE HIM DAMMIT WHY?'' shouted randhir shanking her


''COZ I AM IN LOVE WITH U '' said sanyukta making him stuned for a moment



Randhir loosened his grip on her shoulders on hearing this. He thought he was dreaming. He was cloud nine on hearing this . HIS SAYNU LOVES HIM. it is the great happiness he had his entire life. but that happiness turned into hater within minutes as the morning scene came flashing before him.


''SHUP UP SANYUKTA JUST SHUP UP . I NEVER IMANGINED U WILL STOOD THIS LOW . I REALLY FEEL BAD FOR PARTH LOVING A CHEAP GIRL LIKE U. I AM RIGHT ALL THE GIRLS ARE THE SAME THEY KNOW ONLY TO HURT OTHERS. BUT I NEVER KNOW U WILL BE ONE OF THEM. U LOVE ME SANYUKTA FOR WHAT MY MONEY MY STATUS OR FOR MY INTELLIGENT. I KNOW THE KIND OF GIRLS LIKE U WHO WILL DO ANYTHING FOR A RICH BOY LIKE ME. BUT I NEVER THOUGHT U WILL CHEAT PAR...''but he was cut off by a sound slap landed on his ceek.



yes sanyukta slapped him as the sound echoed the empty garden. As randhir looked her he was stunned to see the rage n pain which her eyes reflected.



''NOT ONE MORE WORD . U KNOW WHAT RANDHIR I HATE U .I JUST HATE U.I THOUGH U HAVE CHANGED . BUT NO U PROVED ME AGAIN. U JUST DON'T DESERVE ANYONES LOVE RANDHIR . U MOM WAS RIGHT BY LEAVING OTHERWISE U WOULD HAVE HURTED HER MORE THAN NOW. BUT U KNOW WHAT I HATE MYSELF FOR LOVING A PERSON LIKE U WHO DON'T DESERVE ANYONES LOVE. BUT Y WILL NOT DO THIS ANYMORE. U JUST KILLED THE LOVE I HAD FOR U . CONGRATS RANDHIR U DEAFTED ME THIS TIME.CONGRATS.'' with this sanyukta turned n ran towards the girls hostel.



sandhir just stood there stunned and confused what to belive . But the person who watched all this begining now came behind the tree to clear this great misunderstanding which broke two hearts. As the person came n stood before randhir , randhir was shocked to see him now and too with a calm face as his name escaped from his mouth


''parth...''




so it ends here . please comment.will continue only if i get good feedback.



with love,
scarlett.🤗
Edited by Scarlettkevin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
hey scarlett . its really a lovely story. love the way u portray randhir's feelings. and please don't discontinue yaar. its lovely. continue writing. thanks for this lovely story dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so interesting yar ... but parth told sanyu that i love her and sanyu said me too but again sanyu said i love u to randhir wht is this ?
any drama to reliease randhir that he love sanyu i m getting anything yar

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow Its superb yaar... pls contine... 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: twni

interesting very interesting

😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayasalvotore

hey scarlett . its really a lovely story. love the way u portray randhir's feelings. and please don't discontinue yaar. its lovely. continue writing. thanks for this lovely story dear🤗

thanks dear.will update tonight or tomorrow noon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: purnima209

so interesting yar ... but parth told sanyu that i love her and sanyu said me too but again sanyu said i love u to randhir wht is this ?

any drama to reliease randhir that he love sanyu i m getting anything yar

thanks dear.and the mystery will reveal soon. and its not a drama to make randhir realise his feeling.but u will get to know everything on the next update.😊

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