Sandhir SS:Make Me Alive By Your Love[Completed] - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear, take a hug...
First Parth & Randhir's friendship... the concern & way he gave him tablet and then Sanyu & Parth's conversation, pure relation of Bro & Sis... wow... amazing... & now to coming the best part... Sanyu & Randhir's conversation... god feeling bad for both. the way u have explained Sanyu's point of view is perfect... Loved the lines she said in the end wow yaar simply awesome... Yes specially when the loved ones won't trust us and says loves us a lot it really pains... ur explanation for that is fab...

Pls keep going and update the next part soon...

Loads of love,
Mickey

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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
omg!!
what to say..what to say...i'm so overwhelmed!!😳
sandhir confrontation was simply superb!!👏
all d dialogues n scenes are written so well👍🏼
very intense part..well actually d ff is just so intense!!
love it!!😛..fallen for ur ff from d very begining!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
ohh poor randhir... but what sanyu did is the right thing!!!!
Its really nice to read your work...waiting for the next part..
keep rocking...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
feeling for randhir so much😭 but sanyu's anger is justified😳
beautifully written:) 👏👏and thanks for the PM
KEEP ME POSTED⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenu1613

😭😭😭nxt prt plzzz

will give u soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Omg tune sach mein mujhe rula diya yaar...

Ek tarah se sanyu is right
If u don't trust then love will never bloom in that heart

Awesome update, dear...just love it...

Thank u so much dear...yea as u said trust is the most needed thing...thanks again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: amulbaby06

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Dear, take a hug...
First Parth & Randhir's friendship... the concern & way he gave him tablet and then Sanyu & Parth's conversation, pure relation of Bro & Sis... wow... amazing... & now to coming the best part... Sanyu & Randhir's conversation... god feeling bad for both. the way u have explained Sanyu's point of view is perfect... Loved the lines she said in the end wow yaar simply awesome... Yes specially when the loved ones won't trust us and says loves us a lot it really pains... ur explanation for that is fab...

Pls keep going and update the next part soon...

Loads of love,
Mickey</font>

Thanks a lot mickey ...i am so glad u loved the part dear ...yea it really hurts when the loved ones didn't trust us ...will update soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: ainaboss

<font color="#0066cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">omg!!</font>

<font color="#0066cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">what to say..what to say...i'm so overwhelmed!!😳
</font>
<font color="#0066cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">sandhir confrontation was simply superb!!👏</font>
<font color="#0066cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">all d dialogues n scenes are written so well👍🏼</font>
<font color="#0066cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">very intense part..well actually d ff is just so intense!!</font>
<font color="#0066cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">love it!!😛..fallen for ur ff from d very begining!!</font>

Thanks a lot dear ...glad u love this story...will try my best to give nice updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SWA1992

ohh poor randhir... but what sanyu did is the right thing!!!!
Its really nice to read your work...waiting for the next part..
keep rocking...

Thank u so much dear ...will update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks a lot...

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