Arhi 'The Palace Of Illusion' #2 note (39) 27th Jan

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Random1888

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Loved the part. One can easily understand sarayu's point. No one can stand the one who is hell bent in ruining our life. Loved this desparate Arnav who is eager to see his fiancee in saree

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rosaline

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

such a wonderful update after a long time...loved it...

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soniya123456

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

wow you are back again i luv ur ffs superb update after long time are u writing all ur ffs or only this one

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madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

superb update...welcome back⭐️

nice change in Arnav.. the way he made plan to have some time alone with Khushi⭐️

wow Suryu got khushi pics in saris...👏

pl continue soon looking forward

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shell01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Heyyy nice update... please do continue...

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45678

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

after a long time. loved the update. fantastic. loved the addition of sarayu's character.

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teja21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

i just loved it

thanx fr d pm

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J P

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Hey Buddy! Just caught up and I know the timing is bad considering your note.. Sigh but I must confess I'm hooked. I simply love the story line and the way you have built it up..Marvelous!!

A relationship between a matured man and a kid, I never knew I would somehow accept it so easily.. The way you have penned it left me no choice..it all feels so real and lovely! Added to it is the maturity level that Khushi gains slowly over the months...

Every character in this is given importance and they do their bit which is so sweet to read..

The confession scene was just mind blowing!! And the lift. Scene with the Ex-army officers wife it was a class apart!!

Everytime he wants to take it to the next level , he heads back keeping her in mind which is so damn lovely!! He's an amazing lover!!

So is she, puts him ahead of all the things but draws her lines clearly family and friends!!

Luv and Ria these two are a gem!

I simply love each and every scene including Varun Aditi and finally that siblings bonding scene..

And now at the movies...time for some love!!

Wedding bells. Bliss!

Can I buddy you for further works?

Cheers