Arhi 'The Palace Of Illusion' #2 note (39) 27th Jan

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I used to read 2 of your work last year.. Can't recall the titles but somehow due to personal commitments I couldn't continue and I think you moved them to blog as well.

I found this yesterday very randomly. Though it's such a light hearted subject, I loved the way you took the story through. Very well written!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

congrats on new thread

so we get more of this

cool man

cant wait to see where it goes next

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Congrats on new thread dear .. Hope u r feeling better... Eagerly waiting for the update

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

well as long as you update them slowly i dont mind if not updated
but if you cant update thats okay too
wow that was so cute
she gets time with arnav and she is worried for her family
all he wants to do is kiss her senseless
so sarayu is back
and she has started even management
cool am glad she tried to make something of her life
well yes arnav she cant come what with that relative of yours
damn i wish it was simpler
but life seldom is
awww so cute to see khushi mad at arnav
and arnav doing all to make her talk to him again properly
welcome back indedd
hmmm luv and rhea
does sound good

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akankha

@akankha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

after a long time...!!!
bt wonderful part!!

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ayaanshi

@ayaanshi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

hey Vanhi,

I am glad, you're back. But due to certain reasons I won't be able to read POI as of now. I wish to read it asap as I been one of those who requested you to repost it. But I assure you to quickly wind up all my work and start reading this story.

P.S.: Missed you and Sandcastle!

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Wonder ful to see this update... Love this story

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

omg... 😃

arnav bcm totally luv stuck

Awsm

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Ashahzadi

@Ashahzadi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Loved the update. Thank you!

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Thank you Vani... For updating the story...

And ALSO...TRYING TO KEEP UP WRITING INSPITE OF YOUR PERSONAL PROBLEMS...truly appreciate that...

Now as per the update...it was just amazing... As guessed... ARSHI would still have to sneak out to get some personal moments... Can't believe they don't even let them have lunch together or let him drop her home from college... Sooo conservative...

Aww...Arnav was sooo desperate to kiss Khushi senseless...how romantic...