I read this update against my better judgment and now I might just flunk my Criminal Law paper...
It's a day later and I still can't study a word! Thought it better to vent out whatever I feel about the update...
Yeh kya ho gaya Khushi ke saath?
My poor doll! Why should she suffer, matlab pyaar bhi kare, and save bhi wohi kare marriage.. and uspe yeh...
I mean becahri ke liye full stop kahan hai?
It was written so dramatically, I could see the whole thing in my head, and seriously, for the next 3 hours I was restless like hell... So much so that when I took a nap I had very disturbing dreams... Kudos to you on that...
Arnav I hope your lightbulb switches.on soonish ans you could do some damage control... You love her dude! I wish you were not so blinded by your past that Khushi ka pyaar bhi tumhe pity lage... Obviously the first love thing toh wohi lagna tha... And he's Arnav F**ked up Raizada ki there was ko way he could have not interpreted Khushi's love as pity...
These characters are so close to me, that there actions are predictable...
When he said that "this is over... This marriage is finished..." That was epic in my mind... Blood drained out of her face... Happened in my imagination even before I read that line...
Rishabh, that dog? Yeah I know he is hurt, but still the last part where he deliberately staged the whole thing for Arnav! Wow! That was low of him... Especially when he knows there is trouble in Khushi's paradise! I hope he is happy now... After hurting her so... And also losing her respect in the process...
Dunno whether it came to his notice... Arnav didn't call he came all the way there to talk to Khushi... So...
It was very unfortunate for me that I chanced upon a comment before reading the update and the whole twist was there spelt out for me...
But honestly you've written it sooo well...
That part of the conversation between Rishabh and Khushi where he knows Arnav is behind her... I have a feeling I have seen or read something like this before... And no its not the terrace scene... Wish I could remember... It's nagging me...
DID Arnav push Khushi? This question's been roaming in my head constantly...
I can't even imagine ab kya hoga... Because if he did, it will haunt him till the end of time... Khushi might forget but he won't! Arnav is going to live his nightmare in reality now...
I hope that Rishabh was no where near the scene of incident... Pata chale aa jaaye bolte huye "you've done whatever have to..." i will kick him if that happens...
Seriously, I just want one thing, Rishsabh ne jitne gadbad karni thi kar li... Please uska role rakhna par important nahi... Like I don't want him fighting with Arnav for Khushi again... Under the mistaken belief that she loves him... Or maybe I do... But Khushi should shut him out...
I don't know... You figure that out...
But anything that Arnav does should as always be because of what he thinks... His positive emotions this time... Not charged by insecurity or selfishness...
Now I remember the song you gave as Khushi's POV... Ans in it goes a line like "Mar jau toh bhi na lagau Koi tujhpe ilzaam..."
So I'm thinking that this is hint to what Khushi's reaction would be after she wakes up..
And I know its after, after all you've said your genre is happily ever after...
And I know that twists are usually far superior... But one thing anyway, Arnav ki second chance Khushi ki memory loss toh nahi?! I know the idea is absurd... It came in my mind because of what Rishabh said that it would've been so much better if he and Khushi had met how Arnav and Khushi did... Aa mature people... Obviously with a clean slate... That's exactly what will happen...
Okay forget about it... Seriously sounds like gibberish...
Please write an awesome update soonish...
Hopefully now I can study for my next paper...
PS: I'm Paridhi7250, if you remember me from your blog...
Edited by avni7250 - 11 years ago
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