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Posted: 11 years ago
I don't know whom to pity for. Arnav whose whole life is based on hypocricy. Khushi whose timing is too bad for her and Rishab who is in the verge of loosing everything that he once owned. 😲
hope Khushi Stands the grong now and Arnav tries to understand Khushi's point of view. marriage is a thing that doesnot run single handedly. arnav should understand that i think.
AWESOME UPDATE. and u are a very detailed writer. 😛
waitng for the next update😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Holy cow ... Wht n updt .. Wow .. Luvd it nw cnt wait for wat happens nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
Everything going bad in Khushi's life
Arnav act instantly without thinking
Its so sad to read them both getting into fights always
Omg khushi got hit by the car and she did what she asked to do to prove her love.
Hope this accident will make arnav to see it all in different perspection
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOOO!!!!!!😭
what is happening...??!!
did that rishabh deliberately dint tel khushi that arnav was behind her?
how cruel of him! 😡
i dont if arnav really pushed khushi onto the road or not...
but what triggered is khushi's words which was deliberately done by rishabh!
he is the one at fault! and i now totally totally hate him! 😡
i just really hope arnav too realizes his mistake and come out of his past!
one cant always turn a blind eye for all those things khushi is doing.
i understand at that situation arnav's anger was valid but he could have been more reasonable!
and as far as khushi is concerned... she cant be so forgiving and let anyone let alone rishabh know what happened in her life or wat ever feelings she had for him!
when he cannot understand khushi's love towards her husband and give up on her even after 3 months and tries to probe her to come out of that relationship then he dont deserve to know what feelings khushi had for him too!
all the 3 are at fault!
its better late than never...
i just hope all these mistrust and miss-communication comes to an end soon and they will have a happy life!
and my dear... truly it was a wonderful update.!
amazingly written and i totally loved it!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Well really dont know what to comment on this update.

Khushi...I mean she is the only sane person between this three...this is all I can say...And one very needed advice one should give to Khushi is ...why?? Why do you land up thinking about both...your husband an your friend???? When... what both do is selfishly just think about themselves??? You should also think about yourself just like Arnav thinks like he owns you and can dictate you...you should also think like Rishabh, who thinks you owe him something just because you are his childhood friend...But alas, thats what you are, a selfless innocent thing...


Moving on to Rishabh...I was really not expecting this from him..(tanu di and shru dont get me wrong, just seeing through logic and less from arshi love story)
So as I said I din expect this from Rishabh doesnt mean that he had become a villain here...he was seeing from past few days Khushi weird behavior and he had seen what kind of a dominating person Arnav is and we dont expect him to understand Arnav like Khushi, now dare we??? No right??...So all he did because he thought he is doing right...he thought this will eventually lead to breaking of the marriage where he can get Khushi and Khushi will be free from the clutches of ...in his word...a lucky bas***d...
And I really dont think that when Khushi started telling about his crush, Rishabh knew that Arnav had came...it was somewhere between the conversation...thats what I felt after reading that part for few times... but still he encouraged her to speak which is really really not good coming from a childhood friend...but as I told...his misconception of Arnav had played a big role here than his selfish needs...




And now coming to Arnav...well, you yourself will be not expecting more from me regarding him😆 But still he reacted as per his character and if we go by his character than the last thing he did is not going to leave him for his seven lifes...just like his past...the thing that he had pushed Khushi is now going to haunt him like the demons in hell...his guilt will not grace him a second of peace...I understand all that was done in a heat of a moment but still you can't get away giving your anger as an excuse...


And I just hope that Rishabh had not seen that push...hell! What if he had and what if he tells Arnav's family?... than I am really afraid


A brilliant update...so much that in this hectic days still I come here to read your stories and also comment ...do update soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
I read this update against my better judgment and now I might just flunk my Criminal Law paper...
It's a day later and I still can't study a word! Thought it better to vent out whatever I feel about the update...

Yeh kya ho gaya Khushi ke saath?
My poor doll! Why should she suffer, matlab pyaar bhi kare, and save bhi wohi kare marriage.. and uspe yeh...
I mean becahri ke liye full stop kahan hai?

It was written so dramatically, I could see the whole thing in my head, and seriously, for the next 3 hours I was restless like hell... So much so that when I took a nap I had very disturbing dreams... Kudos to you on that...

Arnav I hope your lightbulb switches.on soonish ans you could do some damage control... You love her dude! I wish you were not so blinded by your past that Khushi ka pyaar bhi tumhe pity lage... Obviously the first love thing toh wohi lagna tha... And he's Arnav F**ked up Raizada ki there was ko way he could have not interpreted Khushi's love as pity...
These characters are so close to me, that there actions are predictable...

When he said that "this is over... This marriage is finished..." That was epic in my mind... Blood drained out of her face... Happened in my imagination even before I read that line...

Rishabh, that dog? Yeah I know he is hurt, but still the last part where he deliberately staged the whole thing for Arnav! Wow! That was low of him... Especially when he knows there is trouble in Khushi's paradise! I hope he is happy now... After hurting her so... And also losing her respect in the process...
Dunno whether it came to his notice... Arnav didn't call he came all the way there to talk to Khushi... So...

It was very unfortunate for me that I chanced upon a comment before reading the update and the whole twist was there spelt out for me...

But honestly you've written it sooo well...

That part of the conversation between Rishabh and Khushi where he knows Arnav is behind her... I have a feeling I have seen or read something like this before... And no its not the terrace scene... Wish I could remember... It's nagging me...

DID Arnav push Khushi? This question's been roaming in my head constantly...
I can't even imagine ab kya hoga... Because if he did, it will haunt him till the end of time... Khushi might forget but he won't! Arnav is going to live his nightmare in reality now...

I hope that Rishabh was no where near the scene of incident... Pata chale aa jaaye bolte huye "you've done whatever have to..." i will kick him if that happens...
Seriously, I just want one thing, Rishsabh ne jitne gadbad karni thi kar li... Please uska role rakhna par important nahi... Like I don't want him fighting with Arnav for Khushi again... Under the mistaken belief that she loves him... Or maybe I do... But Khushi should shut him out...

I don't know... You figure that out...

But anything that Arnav does should as always be because of what he thinks... His positive emotions this time... Not charged by insecurity or selfishness...

Now I remember the song you gave as Khushi's POV... Ans in it goes a line like "Mar jau toh bhi na lagau Koi tujhpe ilzaam..."

So I'm thinking that this is hint to what Khushi's reaction would be after she wakes up..

And I know its after, after all you've said your genre is happily ever after...

And I know that twists are usually far superior... But one thing anyway, Arnav ki second chance Khushi ki memory loss toh nahi?! I know the idea is absurd... It came in my mind because of what Rishabh said that it would've been so much better if he and Khushi had met how Arnav and Khushi did... Aa mature people... Obviously with a clean slate... That's exactly what will happen...

Okay forget about it... Seriously sounds like gibberish...

Please write an awesome update soonish...

Hopefully now I can study for my next paper...

PS: I'm Paridhi7250, if you remember me from your blog...
Edited by avni7250 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

when i read the chapter for first time itna gussa aya rishabh pe ki..

i was this thinking about song..


maar diya jaaye ya chodh diya jaye,
bol tere saath kya sulook kiya jaye
🤣



I think maarne se zyada effect chodne me hain...like breaking her friendship with...in Arnav's word...Raichand lad
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi anony, now that you are concentrating on mkm, I was hoping you would update sooner, like before? Two updates a week😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sphobic

Well really dont know what to comment on this update.


Khushi...I mean she is the only sane person between this three...this is all I can say...And one very needed advice one should give to Khushi is ...why?? Why do you land up thinking about both...your husband an your friend???? When... what both do is selfishly just think about themselves??? You should also think about yourself just like Arnav thinks like he owns you and can dictate you...you should also think like Rishabh, who thinks you owe him something just because you are his childhood friend...But alas, thats what you are, a selfless innocent thing...


Moving on to Rishabh...I was really not expecting this from him..(tanu di and shru dont get me wrong, just seeing through logic and less from arshi love story)
So as I said I din expect this from Rishabh doesnt mean that he had become a villain here...he was seeing from past few days Khushi weird behavior and he had seen what kind of a dominating person Arnav is and we dont expect him to understand Arnav like Khushi, now dare we??? No right??...So all he did because he thought he is doing right...he thought this will eventually lead to breaking of the marriage where he can get Khushi and Khushi will be free from the clutches of ...in his word...a lucky bas***d...
And I really dont think that when Khushi started telling about his crush, Rishabh knew that Arnav had came...it was somewhere between the conversation...thats what I felt after reading that part for few times... but still he encouraged her to speak which is really really not good coming from a childhood friend...but as I told...his misconception of Arnav had played a big role here than his selfish needs...




And now coming to Arnav...well, you yourself will be not expecting more from me regarding him😆 But still he reacted as per his character and if we go by his character than the last thing he did is not going to leave him for his seven lifes...just like his past...the thing that he had pushed Khushi is now going to haunt him like the demons in hell...his guilt will not grace him a second of peace...I understand all that was done in a heat of a moment but still you can't get away giving your anger as an excuse...


And I just hope that Rishabh had not seen that push...hell! What if he had and what if he tells Arnav's family?... than I am really afraid


A brilliant update...so much that in this hectic days still I come here to read your stories and also comment ...do update soon...


no matter wht the motive pooja... bt as a frnd khushi trusted him soo much... tht she fought with her husband fr rishabh.

i wud say it was khushi's mistake to confess to someone who is expecting her to come bak to him even after 3 months of her marriage, which she has clearly said she intends to keep.

n its outrt betrayal on the part of rishabh, to hv nt stopped her whn he did see tht arnav is standing.. he shud hv...
if his pt was plain simple concern fr khushi's happiness n well-being... then he shud hv continued the conversation in pvt.. n nt infront of arnav.
bt he did just htt... which means he was more interested in letting arnav knw tht khushi once loved him, n in the MU tht wud come up between khushi n arnav, knwing fully well tht khushi wud nt like any prob in her married life.

if u really r a frnd... u always respect ur frnds choice... u might nt like it.. in which case u pvtly try n mk them see ur pt... n nt decietfully put ur frnd thru a heartbreak or a relationship break to suit ur designs.

arnav too manipulated khushi... n i m nt very appreciative of tht either... bt atleast he had the decency to ask her fr her choice.. atleast he gave her a chance to tell if she liked rishabh..

rishabh, knwing fully well tht she is happy with arnav, in general... loves arnav... in his words.. as is evident frm his self-thot abt the bday dinner... still went ahead n n put her in a tight spot knwingly...

honestly... i wud anyday hv a tkn a foe than a frnd like rishabh...
it doesnt luk like he holds any value fr khushi atall... had he valued khushi, he wud hv nt cheated her like this.
n the worst... he did it.. whn he knew there is some prob already existing between her n arnav... as if mauke ka fayda utha ke.. prob ko aur bada bana ke badla le lo ... :(
Edited by tanu3579 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanu3579


no matter wht the motive pooja... bt as a frnd khushi trusted him soo much... tht she fought with her husband fr rishabh.

i wud say it was khushi's mistake to confess to someone who is expecting her to come bak to him even after 3 months of her marriage, which she has clearly said she intends to keep.

n its outrt betrayal on the part of rishabh, to hv nt stopped her whn he did see tht arnav is standing.. he shud hv...
if his pt was plain simple concern fr khushi's happiness n well-being... then he shud hv continued the conversation in pvt.. n nt infront of arnav.
bt he did just htt... which means he was more interested in letting arnav knw tht khushi once loved him, n in the MU tht wud come up between khushi n arnav, knwing fully well tht khushi wud nt like any prob in her married life.

if u really r a frnd... u always respect ur frnds choice... u might nt like it.. in which case u pvtly try n mk them see ur pt... n nt decietfully put ur frnd thru a heartbreak or a relationship break to suit ur designs.

arnav too manipulated khushi... n i m nt very appreciative of tht either... bt atleast he had the decency to ask her fr her choice.. atleast he gave her a chance to tell if she liked rishabh..

rishabh, knwing fully well tht she is happy with arnav, in general... loves arnav... in his words.. as is evident frm his self-thot abt the bday dinner... still went ahead n n put her in a tight spot knwingly...

honestly... i wud anyday hv a tkn a foe than a frnd like rishabh...
it doesnt luk like he holds any value fr khushi atall... had he valued khushi, he wud hv nt cheated her like this.





I know Rishabh is wrong di...all I am saying is everyone is selfish ...and Khushi too should be one...if she loves Arnav she should forget about rishabh...and I know Arnav is not much at fault here...but he IS...

As I said Rishabh is wrong that doesnt means Arnav is not...as Rishabh said..he is one lucky bas***d...who gets away with everything and... everything fits very well ...where Khushi is concerned not talking about his past...

sorry for the language...

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