#1 ArShi: His Secret Desire ~Next Thread link on Page 147~ - Page 65

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww poor khushi:( waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
that should not be theway they begin their morning..
loving each other but not understanding each other 😡

fool arnav how come he let khushi decide and accept her demand😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
break up i guess superb writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
well 1 thing they clearly lack in their relationship that is COMMUNICATION ,
which is very important in every relationship and in relation of husband -wife or lovers or bf -gf .It is toh must .
how it was difficult for arnav to say ' it was best night of my life ' rather than shying away , or how difficult it was for khushi to clear her doubts

another thing they are lacking is TRUST

I didnt knw why khushi feel so low of herself , she is a modern , confident educated woman.Even she is innocent she knew what he feels for her



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Posted: 10 years ago
and yes all my thoughts of morning romance trashed😭


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Posted: 10 years ago
omg its a sad one ...

but arnav should've stay with khushi in the morning and explain things with all his love to her than just leaving the girl in bed all alone and that make her have negative thoughts ...

and that girl came and spoil things more for arshi now ... argghh .. plz make it right for them soon ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
ASSUMPTIONS...ASSUMPTIONS.. ASSUMPTIONS...
GOD...Could Arnav and Khushi screw up their love any worse...? i guess htey cant...
But as GUESSED... Khushi's insecurities were bound to show up...?
Arnavs past habits would have side effect on him some time...right..?
So here they are...playing their own part in breaking their hearts...
SO..HOW LONG WILL THIS GO ON..? WILL ARNAV LEAVE THINGS TO THIS...BECAUSE I DONT THINK KHUSHI WILL REALIZE ANY TIME SOON THAT HER INSECURITIES AND LACK OF TRUST WRWE THW CULPRITS RATHER THAN Arnav for her situation...
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Posted: 10 years ago
why why why
u do this with arnav😭😭
i hope everything will be fine soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG, what is this twist, All stupid MU's between them. Why wouldn't Arnav just clear her MU's, instead of creating new ones.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok no offence, but i honestly think this was not one of your greatest chapters...this makes khushi look just too damn stupid and arnav like a douche bag!
I mean they love each other right? so how can both of them just let it go?

Things i didn't like...

Khushi assuming he was disappointed...i thought she knew him better than that, but all her insecurities are too much here
Arnav acting like such a fool by ignoring her...she had s*x for the first time...he should be comforting her and making sure she is all right...i really don't know what kind of love this is
Thirdly, when he knows she has misunderstood, he just lets her think the worst? Why would you do that? I did not get this plot at all! there was no reason for this!
Then he seemed so ok with that other chick kissing him in front of Khushi...he did not push her away, i mean come on he's a man and much stronger
Plus he lets khushi go home in a taxi! What the?
And then even sits in the car with priyanka!

I'm sorry but this is just a tragedy of errors here...I get it that its your story and you have full freedom to write what you want. but it will be good if its not a cliche like many other stories and that to, to such an extent!

If you love someone, you fight for them...you make sure that come what may, you will keep them by your side...this my dear, is not love...

sorry if I sound rude, but its just a rant of a fan who loved reading this story and is not satisfied with the turn its taken...

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