SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago
Anu diii😛..i m back but a little late😕
oops y do i always miss such important updates😡...
plz dnt mind diii...i was a little busy today
dis update made my heart race for some 100 miles😲...dat quote is great👏
it has a lot of meaning diii...u r such an incredible writer di🤗
firstly who was dat person..i donno y but i feel dat its Randhir's uncle u know d dear one😕
n a dvd in d fourth folder😳???encrypted formula???book???my brain has become a frying pan wid dis update di...n Randhir omg sleepless nights😒...ofc how cud he sleep when d people who killed his parents were out there njoyng all d worldly pleasures😡 u know whom i meant na???
n Randhir thinking abt sanyukta😆...so dis is it Randhir welcome to d heaven via hell!!!coz u underestimated our tigress👎🏼...n finally d moment i hav been waiting for..sanyu waking up😕
oops dat was much more dan i expected😒...n Randhir noticed it...her missing classes ofc y wudn't he???he has planned a lot for her didn't he😉...uff diii dese ***** nly care abt publicity😡
yayayay!! Randhir is determined to do dis n he will👍🏼...n d sandhir scene its not exactly d one we shud be happy abt😕 but atleast they kinda spoke to each other right..(okay i know it was barely a conversation but they atleast faced each other dats enough for me)☺️...now diii wt i m dying to know is dat did Randhir believe dat it meant ntn to herwhen she confessed😉
n Randhir's qstns abt her apology...awww❤️ dats wat i wanted...get ready for such type of qstns to which u hardly get an answer😆 Randhir...n di must tell u Randhir Shekhwat is quite complicated person😕...i kinda realized it in dis update n d revenge..😲
ohhh godd poor sanyu...
omg...i can't believe dis Ramu chacha has been murdered😔...i dnt understand how Randhir will be able to handle dis😭...n dose ***** jus tell dem to stp their bloody act..they know dat someday this is gonna happen ofc they wud have known it coz after all their parents r d one who r keepng a lot of secrets concerning d shekhawat's murder😡
i hate to admit it but Randhir is surrounded by all dese monsters wid a hidden evil agenda..hes completely lost😭
di plz update ASAP...i can't wait to read d next part...😛


Edited by Anamika1309 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for pm😊
Awesome update👏
Sanyukta disturbed randhir once again
But what randhir did was not right😡
Ramu chacha dead,the mystery intensifies😲
Ishita & parth seems to be good, they really care for randhir 😊
Liked the caring nature of sanyukta towards randhir😊
Loved how vardhan controlled randhir😊
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Comment unresed on pg 70 and pg 82. :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
First thing first .. Anu cant you pls post your chapter litter earlier in the day..Just a request..
Now coming to the chapter... its useless to say now this was a marvellous chapter..
So Randhir's privacy was invaded by Sanyukta's drunken confession and he planned to revenge upon her and I must say his plan of revenge was as worse as Sanyukta's in serial... instead of planning revenge, he could easily let it go.. this is what normally people do when someone confessed his/her feeling for you and you don't want to reciprocate. It was not a big deal.. I asked you ke uske dimaag kee batti jalao tumne toh uska fuse hee uda diya...
when realization struck upon Sanyukta and she went to confront him in canteen, I was expecting a lioness.. I was literally imaging a scene where Sanyukta grabbed him from his collar and slapped him hard and told him off...but yaar at the right moment you dropped the bomb of Ramu chacha's murder in college canteen and instead of fighting, she was sympathizing with him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG bichara randhir ...i am really sad for ramu kaka...it was awesome...thanx for pm...update it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update...
soo randhir is affected by sanyu...
great going...
felt bad for ramu kaka...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Anu...
ekdum dhamakedaar..
I loved it...
pehle to I was angry on Randhir but then suddenly Ramu chacha murdered... poor Randhir...
plz plz cont soonish...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

First of all SoRRy for unresing late.

~Unres~
Read the title "The Drunken Confession" and I knew kuchh locha hone wala hai.🤣
The quote was beautiful.
It was an amusing update.
I noticed nowadays you are adding a comical tadka in your updates. 🤣
Meri sangat ka asar hai??🤣

I will tell you my expressions and reaction line by line for a part.

"Because instead of dressing himself up in
formals, Randhir appeared before the media in jeans and t-shirt"

('_') (_) ('_') (_) ('_')
So what?? He my Randhir & He's different.

"that too a t-shirt that read 'Question
Authority'!!!!!!"

(O_O) (O_O) (O_O) (O_O) (O_O)

Ohh terii yeh thoda zyada different ho gaya!! 🤣 🤣

I loved this part, of course Mehnat lagti hai aisa sochne mein. You are one intellectual person. KUDOS!!

The freshers party!
Yaha mera thoda sa pachka ho gaya! 'Cause in the 5th chappy's precap you mentioned "Sanyukta's new Avatar"
Here I was hoping a Sanyukta adorned in a beautiful Royal blue Saree and Randhir all mesmerized by the beauty!
But you found a better was to express the same. I love such creative thought of yours. That Saree...baarish..alcohol thing toh common haii...this was different..simple kurti-patiyala...tequila..en THE DANCE
Ufff...Aag laga dii by god!!!

Of course the best part was the confession. Again with a groundbreaking execution.
Aapki har cheez its different!!!
So to encomium you for this update I would say you are a Pioneer. (I think it means an inventor) So I will settle for this name.
I can't even write update soon🤣 the next part has already been updated.🤣
Cho cho cho cholly for unresing late!!
I've become the most sluggish person on this earth lately. 🤣
Lovee yaaa
Samaira
PS- oh forgot to mention...it was another magnificent update.:)

Samaira!!!!
Tu na ek kaam kar! Comedy circus join kar le plzzzROFL
Matlab, how can u be so funny yaar!!!! LOL😆😆
Every time u comment, I roll with laughter and my parents give me weird looks!!!!ROFL
Me pioneer? (yeah it does mean 'inventor'😉)
*Adjusts collar in pride*
🤗
U are so sweet!!!! I love u sooo much❤️
Thank u!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

~Unres~

The Title.
"Dismal Tidings" eh? What is this tidings?
*google baba ki jai*
Ohh news or information..haa!! Ohh goshh Iraa didn't know such an easy word.
*Thanks Anu for increasing her vocab.*

The Quote.
Another quote by The Great Anuradha!!
This was quite emotive and entrenched.
Bade uch vichaar hain aapke.🤣

The Update
Ufff!!! Pehle hi your very first para got me moonstruck. Why didn't you reveal who that man was?
*Thinking*
*guessing*
Naii woh naii ho sakta. (-_-)
*Thinking*
*guessing*
Naii woh bhi naii ho sakta (-_-)
And REPEAT!!!!!!!
Kuchh samaj naii aaya who that man was.
Atleast you can tell me by PM-ing baakiyon ko mat batana🤣 🤣
What say?

Randhir thinking about Sanyu? Haye!! Kahi toh progress ho raha hai in dono ke relation mein🤣
Aap CVs ki team mein kyu naii ho????? Arghh!!

The last part? Ek aur MURDER? OMG!!!
Mera Randhir kitna broken hai!!! :'(
() () () () () () ()

Uss fevicol ko onscreen dekhke toh ab I can't see my RD suffer anymore. Not atleast here.
Make them fall for each other jaldiii.
No patience left. I need SanDhir for my placidity. :'(

The pace at which you are changing the situations is amazing and I'm satisfied (which is very rare..I tell you)🤣

Shaabaash merii Future Novelist!!!!

So to accolade for this update, I would like to say You are a Stagger (the one who arranges everything perfectly) ;)

Update the next part soon.
Love ya
Samaira


Ok...Here goes:
First I was 'Novelist', then I was 'ART-ist', then came 'Pioneer' and now 'Stagger'???
Aur kuch baki reh gya kya iraa darling????ROFL
Btw 'uch bichaar' ki jai! Anuradha sadhvi ki jai!!!!!ROFL
SanDhir chahiye? Ruk...mile jayega! Anuradha mata teri iss khwaishh ko zarur puri karegi!!!😆
Aur tu chahti hain ki mein tujhe 'suspense' btaa du???? 😡
No way!!!!!!😉
But trust me, u'll love it when u come to know!!!!!ROFL
Love ya❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an update it was...
the mysterious person is sum1 too close to him ,
isnt it...n d only person cums to my mind is his uncle

well, so many things happened with both d characters nd
nw tht randhir is broken he'll need sum1 on his side to
console him...hope its sanyukta

well i jst love d way randhir's friends r always thr for him
even if their intensions r nt gud--whatever tht mayb...but still thy r thr for him
same with sanyukta...kaustuki is grt..

Nd thnks for PM.

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