SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 10

Originally posted by: frenzyy

omg! that was sooper awsum!! so sanyu already finds randhir very handsome😉 randhir, parth and karan are frens.. ishita always speaks for randhir - wonder how he let her! sanyu-randhir lab partners -cant wait to see what happens

omg u r back...i have been a silent reader but could'nt help writing dis one...i must say u r back wid a bang seriously loved the 1st chapter...the way u describe things with the very minute detail i must say u r a gifted writer👏 nd seriously ur writing is ont thing dat makes me happier nd content...i know its too early to ask but plz update d nxt part asap cant wait to read d nxt part...nd ha pm me the nxt tym u update😊

Originally posted by: misharocks

omg u r back...i have been a silent reader but could'nt help writing dis one...i must say u r back wid a bang seriously loved the 1st chapter...the way u describe things with the very minute detail i must say u r a gifted writer👏 nd seriously ur writing is ont thing dat makes me happier nd content...i know its too early to ask but plz update d nxt part asap cant wait to read d nxt part...nd ha pm me the nxt tym u update😊

I cannot believe how bird brained I am!
I read the intro but didn't realize you had already updated the first chappy!
No probs!Better late than never!
The first chappy was so cool !
Loved the amount of detailing you added to it from the time tables,to the locations of each lec ,to the syllabus covered!Med student, are you?

The character sketch of Sanyu was superb...simpleton from a humble backgroud with big dreams!Nice!

Randhir is as perfect as ever!Adonis seems like such an apt representation of this glorious creature that he is!
Well the attitude had more to do with his upbringing I guess!
He will see the light soon and realize his folly in ill treating Sanyu!
His backstory was heartwrenching though!

Looking forward to know how Randhir and Sanyu actually manage to connect with each other inspite of being from such starkly different worlds!

PS:I thought the canteen description was twilight-esque...could imagine Bella staring at Edward unabashedly when I read that situation!Could purely be my brain drawing unneccesary parallels or not!

Originally posted by: anki08

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hey Anuradha,,

</div>nope noPe,,no offence at all sweetheart:-)<div>I just thought of telling u tht...otherwise my guts to tell ny shortcoming in ur wrks?????A hell no...

you are flawless...👏

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Himani,
Thanks a lot!
Now that I know that u r a med student, will pester u with doubts:)
I really mean it when I say point out the mistakes! Only then shall I improve!!!
Love u!

Originally posted by: So_Naley

I cannot believe how bird brained I am!
I read the intro but didn't realize you had already updated the first chappy!
No probs!Better late than never!
The first chappy was so cool !
Loved the amount of detailing you added to it from the time tables,to the locations of each lec ,to the syllabus covered!Med student, are you?

The character sketch of Sanyu was superb...simpleton from a humble backgroud with big dreams!Nice!

Randhir is as perfect as ever!Adonis seems like such an apt representation of this glorious creature that he is!
Well the attitude had more to do with his upbringing I guess!
He will see the light soon and realize his folly in ill treating Sanyu!
His backstory was heartwrenching though!

Looking forward to know how Randhir and Sanyu actually manage to connect with each other inspite of being from such starkly different worlds!

PS:I thought the canteen description was twilight-esque...could imagine Bella staring at Edward unabashedly when I read that situation!Could purely be my brain drawing unneccesary parallels or not!

Freaking hell!!!!
That scene is a twilight redone isn't it?!
I didn't plan it that way, but really glad it turned out like that!!!!
Btw ur lamba comment has made my night!!! So glad u loved it!
Actually m a maths student!! :p
I am so glad u loved it!!!! Love u :*

WOW WHAT an amazing start...👏 I've a feeling this ff will turn out to be a blockbuster... 😉

Anu Di, Oh my God. You're back!!! :') :') YAAAY!
Just when I thought that my birthday couldn't get any better, this pops up. And here I am, jumping up and down in the middle of the night.
What a brilliant start! :O If the start itself is so...bloody brilliant, I can't imagine what's yet to come. :O
I loooved how Randhir has been described. *drools*
And that flashback. Genius. Atleast according to the flashback I share my birthday with Randhir. Ahhh!
Love the introduction of new characters.
Waiting for the story to take control over me.
Thank you sooo much for comning back this fast. ^_^
Love and respect
Nivs. :)

wow wow wow