Sandhir: Secret Fantasies NOTE on PG 133 - DISCONTINUING - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..


My pleasure!
Ty😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update Niki!
I loved it!!! opening up some past graves are we ey??? Who is this Keerthi??

Does Keerthi's past link with Sanyukta's?? Is this why Randhir hates Sanyukta soo much??

Intuiting indeed!

I love how you manage to include the chapter name is every update for yours! It's brilliant work!

Conti soon!
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Nikitha! :)
Wonderful Quote again! :)
Thumbs up for it! :D
Coming to the update,
I really love the way you transport us to flashbacks and present!
I'm scratching my head trying to figure out what happened to them.
I'm leaving it all to your imagination.
Please do reveal it soon. Okay? :P
Love,
Aditi
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊
whn i saw ur update.
I was
*dancing* n *dancing*
😃
i loved dis part. I know chotu sa tha still it was amazng.
Its nt abt moving a story forward, bt undrstanding matters. I mean d way u hv describd each n evrythng in so much detail, i lovd it.
By Randhir's pov, we got 2 know much about him.
N karan
*gud frnd*
i was hell shockd.
Acha acha i got apki ff me wo gud types h. XD
vrna sounds
weird. XD
mujhe ye carrier orientd woman
"renuka ji" ka kuch smjh nhi ata.
Nega n posi charactr h. 😕
n
"there are some people who can steal my heart and make it dance in joy. Yes, it is her"
while readng these lines, i tho8 hez tlkng abt sanyukta.
😳
thn aage padha toh

"Irritating her and making her go jelly is my favourite hooby."
aftr readng dis. I was hell sure.
😊
bt thn ye kya hua
ye
keerti kahan se a gyi.
Unpredictable.
Bt koi nhi. Isko or us ishita ko mai chodungi nhi.
XD
n aj sanyu nhi thi.
I missd my bst frnd sanyu.
Lgta h ab nxt part me sanyu ka pov hoga.

P.s thnx 4r d pm.
N ye res wala game mere bs ka nhi h. Mjhe pta h mai fst ni a paungi isme.
XD
wah wah aj kal daily update. Keep it up.
Nw jst waiting waiting 4r nxt part.
Lots Of Love
😳
*PRIYANKA*
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Niki!
Short update but nice one!👏
Where is Sanyukta?
So Keerthi is dead
How she died?
Waiting to know all about it!!!
Update sooon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Randhir Karan frenship is Awsum..
Randhir liked Keerti? Interesting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woah! Now here was some major plot development and some twisted mysteries from the past as well.
I'm in love with the constant pace of the story and how it is slowly unfolding.
Ah! This update was really small. It was getting so interesting and I was so into the chapter that when it ended so soon I couldn't help but complain.

The quote at the begining was all your mind?? You are quite philosophical... The quote was highly enlightening and true.
So you gave us a completely Randhir oriented chapter... Interesting...very interesting.
You've written Randhir's childhood with so minute details that it really amazes me to know how depth knowledge of the character you have. Great job!!!!
You have justified Renuka Sanyal's indifferent behaviour towards her child perfectly.
Keerthi...!!! Now where did she come from all of a sudden in his diary??? I really can't wait to know about this mystery..
I loved the chapter as a whole but only wished if the length could be increased. It was short but fully potential.
You've nailed it again girl.

Now do update the next part of the story soon.
I'm sorry for the late reply. From today my exams are statrting so you can understand my situation very well...

--With love
Kajal
Edited by --ScarletRed-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Vry well pennd down.. Lvd d choice of wrds.. Owsm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was amazing...!! Superr se bhi uperr... loved it yaar... Update asap, m waiting eagerly...!! :) <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res.
Unres.

Nikitha, hey!
First of all, sorry for the delay.
Next, excellent chapter. Very very well written. :D

Starting with the quote, kudos! Beautiful that is. ❤️

From what I understood, Randhir has not broken ties with Renuka? That I really like. :) And I love how Karan has a positive side here while most other stories I've read hold him for a negative character. :D

Coming to the diary, it's the part I loved the most. I too have a habit of titling my entries, so I was a bit thrilled there. 😃
And yes, the entry "Irrevocable" is amazing. And a really cute. 😳 *What's up with Keerti?*
Then, Epitaph. 😲 I'm scared now. *Ponders what could have possibly gone wrong.* His emotions, (y).

Waiting for the story to unfold soon enough.
Great work! *Fan already*
Kudos!
Love,
Nivedita. :)

Edited by ArSha_TillIDie - 11 years ago

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