Blurring Lines: Sandhir Saga (part 10 updating this Sunday)

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Great update!

Love the pace at which the story is progressing!

From being completely broken due to him,to actually hugging him in joy,to hanging out with him and to resolving to be indifferent to his presence!Sanyukta sure went thru a motley of emotions in a short while!

Shanaya and Sid are too cute!

Eager to know what happens further!

Update soon! :)

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

love the update! thanks for pm

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@AnatomyAddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

EDITED!

Omg! You dedicated this update to me!!! And I am not even a follower (well I am now😆)... the amount of feels that are bursting in my body... "Jaise thande thande fountains phoot rahe hai aur garam garam firecrackers... Aur mein bhich main" It's something like that😆

The feels: 🤗❤️

So I was planning to write a massive essay, but I don't think I can manage that right now... A little less on time wa

So Mechanic-Rajkumari is also a budding writer huh?! I mean how brilliant though!

I always love a good separation story filled with angst, pain and sorrow! I am known sadist in this forum... You still haven't read some of my sad stuff😆😆

Anyways, I really like the additional characters of Shanaya and Sid! (SOTY?!) They both add another dimension to the story!

(I don't know which part but) When you portrayed Sanyukta's sorrow and heartbreak, I was like, "Damn!" I mean romance is easier to type (for some, I can never do it😆), but I feel that angst and heartbreak is harder to portray (for me it's easier... Opposites😆)

What else?! What else? *racking my brain... GOT IT* Revealed half the mystery, yet half the mystery still continues?! Really looking forward to why Randhir actually left Sanyukta!

Are we getting drunk scenes sooon!?!?!? OMGeee!!! I love drunk scenes, they are outright hilarious!!! Pleassseee!!!!

Update sooon!!!! Spend less time on scraps with me and pen down an update instead!!!!!

Just do it! (Like Nike)

Amazing FF (Saga😉) you have here! You write exceptionally well! Looking forward to more updates from you!

Love,

Pari 😳

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

loved it plz continue soon.

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Dhruvi Mehta

@dhruvi_parsh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

hey
aryanaa...
loved it...
u r a gr8 writer...
do continue soon...
thnx for pm...
wid love
dhruvi

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Aryana

@Drama_Writer

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: priiy
awww...it was so sweet...do update asap

Thanks dear!😊

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Aryana

@Drama_Writer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: federized2210
Aaah...I'm in such a hurry!!!
But just want to say that u are awesome, even though u won't admit it!!! And I'm glad u are my sister (and that's not just coz of where u live *winks*)

And this story is one of my favs! (I'm not buttering)!!

And this update is just fab!!!!

Esp the part where Sanyu stomps his foot with her stiletto :D

So like her :P

Love u aryana!!!!

-Anu di :)

Hahahahaha!!!!!! Thanks a ton Anu di!😃 Though I'm still not going to admit about the awesomeness cz your always better!!!!!

I know your my sister for a lot of other things than this! you HAVE to come home when your here in Mumbai!

God! This is one of your fav FFs. Okay, now i think i'm really flattered! *dances in front of the laptop*

yes, actually i was imagining stomping on sadu's foot that way till his toe would break! that's how this scene came up in the first place!😛😆🤣

Love you di!😃

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Aryana

@Drama_Writer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: So_Naley
Great update!

Love the pace at which the story is progressing!

From being completely broken due to him,to actually hugging him in joy,to hanging out with him and to resolving to be indifferent to his presence!Sanyukta sure went thru a motley of emotions in a short while!

Shanaya and Sid are too cute!

Eager to know what happens further!

Update soon! :)

Yay!!!!!!! Stupendously glad that you liked the update! Continue motivating me! Bcz that's what helps me right better! Thanks a lot!

Yes, Sid and Shanaya, are my fav couple after SanDhir all over the forum!😛

Love,

Aryana😳