TaaRey Two Shot :: The hidden secret of my Heart (Completed)

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Mon_tr

@Mon_tr

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Taarey were best friends.hayray ye jealousy kya kya krwata h..hehe.awesome start.egarly waiting 4 nxt part

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Neha

@..Neha.

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome..
What happened in one year between him & Kriya?
Jealousy scene were described so amazingly..
Can't wait for next part!
pls post soon..

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Aarti Taarey

@Aarti_Taarey

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Amazing two shot
Loved the first part
Waiting for next part
Plz update soon

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dasv

@dasv

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awesome update.
Really nice two shots.
Rey broke up his frdship wid taani just for kriya but where is she now.
Party scene was nice. Rey getting jealous.
He took her to his house and directly to bedroom kafi fast forward hai yaar.

Waiting for next part
Update soon

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yoyoaishwarya

@yoyoaishwarya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

😛 🥳 awesome os my ideas shop , kya baat new os on taarey too cool , rey was so rude , per now taani ko after 1 year dekhkar usko itna hurt kyu ho raha hai, now after drinking he is behaving like a despo n obsessed , per it's okk after taani ka rey hai toh yeh toh hoga hi, m waiting plz update soon

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poorni

@poorni_vishali

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

superb concept

taarey was bff

and rey blames taani for his break up with kriya

update soon

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deepkriti

@..Deepkriti..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

nice start
par badi jaldi jaldi sab ho raha hai😆
fast forward mode mein 😆😆

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Purple Feather

@Purple.feather

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

wow yr
It was soo good
Loved it to the core...
Concept is really nyc
Kriya = musibat b/w taarey...
Jab koi prob hoti h toh uske peeche vo hoti hai...

Bt its nyc
Bahut hi galat waqt par u stopped
Bt im excited to read further
Update soon
N thanks fr the pm...

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asthanagalia075

@asthanagalia075

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

awsum story yr kaha se itna dimag Ata hai tumare pass... Story title should be ... Dur the kar bhi pass.. Rest depend on u...

nw Cuming to story.. Rey na sir thodh dena chahiye... Jb dekho apna dimag chalata hai Jo hai nhi.. Bina much jana taani ko itna sb bol diya ... Bewakuf kahi ka.. Party tyme Ws awsumm and next part update soon ...

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

It was awful what Rey said to Taani
He ended his friendship because of someone else, that is so foolish of him
Aww poor Taani is so hurt and alone
Taani moved and both has their own lives but still misses each other All because of Mr. Rey and his ego
Love Taani saree, it's so beautiful
I like how Taani ignore Rey while he was going to speak to her lol
It suit him right ;)
Jealous Taarey are too much much
Oh my, Rey take Taani with him to his house ;)
And that too to his room, I wonder what he is upto
Wonderful update, love it

Some titles suggestions - Forever and Always in love with You
Or The hidden secret of my Heart