New ArSh SS *Perfect Together* UPDT pg 3/ 25Th april/14// 16+ - Page 11

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Part-1 commented

Wow dear..

Lovely concept and awesome update..

Just love it.

In beginning arman was so angry..

And shilpa was scared...

Omg shilpa lost her memory...

Feeling bad for arsh...

Lovely..

Loved there talks and moment..

Finally both confessed..

Do continue soon

Originally posted by: radhikakapoor

Hey...
So its almost like ages that i'm replying to an ff...
but well.. its nvr too late...
so here it is...
About "Perfect Together"...
I think i've mentioned this before but i just have to speak it up again.. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE STORYLINE OF THIS FF!! i mean like you know that i'm not much into the arsh thing but still somehow.. this ff i love... may b bcz it wasnt really meant to b an ff and u actually started of as an os and then gradually shaped it up into this beautiful story.. so i was completely smitten by this idea that you could actually come up with something as meaningful as this out of that one idea.. i mean like i have an ff n atleast i think thats its running without much story involved.. but u for that matter have struck a right cord between romance and story!! so kudos to u for that!! its unimaginably creative trust me!!!!!
and now coming to the writing... again like i said... i love the pace at which they are going!!!! i mean i agree ki shayad real life mein sab kuch itna jaldi nahi hota... but then thats the relative latitude that this beautiful world of fiction provides you.. sry.. typing error.. provides "us"!! and that reminds me.. i miss ur typing errors... i mean yeah i know ki that was just one os long but i still love it!! khair... so yeah.. "perfect together"... is definately high on romance and passion... and now i feel ki u've bcum a pro in writing love making scenes.. i mean u like such big love scenes without hesitation.. thats actually impreesive.. and then there are times when you actually sweep me off my feet with phraese like.. "travelled down to her feminity", "nodded slightly", "moved rhythimically", "mentally rejected each of her dresses", "he could go for another round like last night just now"... i mean its all so cute to read... and when such scenes appear cute.. then it does bcum perfect!!
BUt kayi baar you use phrases that dont really make me...uh...what do i say.. comfortable.. yeah thats the word.. matlab i wont mention them here.. but yeah there are a few explantations which i think go beyond that required.. so vo i think.. pta ni.. may b others like.. but i get awkward!!
ANd then coming to this maikey going thing.. you arent much sure of it..are?? like v discussed this.. and whatever u said vo main khair yahaan forum pe bta ke story ka maza kharab ni karungi.. evn though i'm pretty sure tu khud hi na bhool gyi ho shayad... khair... it will be great for me to see ki how you take this story forward... i'm actually inetrested in it out of curiosity.. and the hottness quotient of course...
and its been really long so i think now u must update soon... n done gimme a "look-who's-saying" here 😆 ...
so yeah... get well soon..
come back soon..
and get started!!
love
mani 😛

Originally posted by: karan-007

wen we will get the update 🤔

Originally posted by: harshiakshi

plzz do update soon... ur one of my favorite writers on forum

n plz do cheak my new ff BAS YUHIN..on arsh

Originally posted by: cuteshilpa

hey caught with ur ss and it is awesome n fab pleaseee cont soon :)

Originally posted by: kritika_24

tomorrow I guess...

Originally posted by: karan-007

tom as in after 12 ya literally after 5th morning 😛😆

Originally posted by: kritika_24

I can't believe someone wants to read my work so much!!!!

Originally posted by: karan-007

😕 yeh sarcastic way mein tha ya normal

Originally posted by: kritika_24

normal man... excited... coz i really can't think i write that well!