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He guyzz dis mie frst attempt ot write a os...after seeing d precap i jus couldn't control myself..i noe ki mene apna ss kafi tym se update nhi kia..bt i surely update it in
a day or two
Fr d tym being i hope u ll njoy dis os
P.s.-bahut bahut lamba hai..agar beech mein bore ho jao too plz rukhna mat plz plz pura pad lena..i hope u lyk d ending
Here it goes-
D story strts wen kria is dancing on 'o rehna tu' n she abt to fall wen uska linecutter uss protect kar leta hai frm faling down
they r sharing a vry intense eyelock n rey is slowly moving towards her..deir faces r mms away..kria's heartbeat is getting faster n faster.She closes her eyes due d proximity
dey r sharing..bt bt..(patani kyun ek dum se inhe realize ho jate hey dat dey r so close to each otherš)
..rey realizes(sachi sachi batana kis kis ne socha tha dat kria will b d frst one to realize their position) dat wat ws he gng to do..he immediately helps her to
straighten herself n straightens himself too.
Kria's pov-
Universeji main yeh kya soch rhi thi..bhul gyi jhalli ki rey tujhe sirf ek ACHA DOST(nhi kria aisa nhi haišš) mante hai..shit patani kyaa soch rhe honge mere baare
mein. Ab hi bhi kaise bolun
Rey's pov
o GOD main yeh kya karne vala tha..abhi tak i haven't confesses my luv n she hasn't accepted it...bt ab isse hi kaise bolun..bt hi toh bolna hi padega itne dino se
baatcutter...a smile crepts on his face involuntarily as soon as he says baatcutter in his mind...ki sweet si awaaz nhi suni hai aur agar maine hi nhi bola to
phir chali jayegi n esse main baat nhi kar paunga..no no dude tujhe hi to bolna hi hoga even though it is highly awkward..he gathers up d courage n finally says hi
R:"h..hh...hi kria"
K:"er..h..hi rey"
R:in mind O GOD kitni zyada sweet hai iski awaaz..patani how did i survive without listening to her voice fr so many days..(simple rockstar..vo rey ke thoghts mein thi
na HUMESHA..AND FOREVERšš)"*clears his throat*..k...kaisi ho????"
K:"main main theekh hoon..how r u..aap kaise hain????
R:(lost in her eyes n her sweet melodious voice)"tumhe dekhar theekh ho gya"
her eyes widened listening to wat rey siad n her heart to absorb rey's comment
K:"huh????"
R:(coming out of his AASHIQ mode)in mind..freak yeh maaine bol dia beta ab to chal..aaj to kria tujhe uske universeji pass bhejh ne vali hai..kuch excuse soch varna
teri band baj jayegi"..i..i mean ki tumhe dekhar aisa laga jaise shayar(poet)...shakes his head realizing ki vo main hoon na vale track par ja rhha tha.."i mean it is a
pleasure to meet u..."hits himslef mentally..abbe rey aashiq mode se paagal mode pe kyun jaa rha hai.."i i mean ki tumhe itne dino ke baad dekhar acha laga"..in
mind..baatcutter apna luv confess kare bina tumhare samne ek line tak sahi se nhi bol paa rha hun aarrrgghh universe ji help me
Kria is still confused bt she decides to drop it as she still feels vry awkward in talking to her linecutter n would b boyfrndš
K:"kk..den kal milte hai..gud nyt"..sayng dis she packs her stuff, turns around n strts walking towards d grls locker room before rey could say anything.
rey seeing kria go away makes a bechara tensed face
R:in miind..arrey hey to jaa rhi hai..itne tym bad to mila hun n upar se bahut raat ho gyi hai(par college band nhi hua so stop thinking ki vo dono college mein phas
jayenge) main kria ko akele nhi jane de sakta
R:"baatcutter ruko.."..in mind pagal ullu duffer gdahe dimag ka dhakan udd gya hai tera kya bol dia..ab kya bolega..bevakuf..sachi mein tu pagal mode mein jaa rha hai
hearing baatcutter kria freezes. She after gathering a lot of courage turned around to face rey
K:"Rey aapne kya bola????"
R:"mm...main..maine bola ki kria ruko"..in mind...o God plz plz plz plz bachalo pakka ab bevakufi nhi karunga
K:in mind..jhalli y dont u understand dat rey doen't luv u..pagal kuch bhi sochti reyy ti hai.."haan rey boliye kuch kaam tha???"
R:to himself..bach gya..he walks towards her.."ab ab haan kria main bol rha tha ki kaafi raat ho gyi hai tum jaldi change karlo main tumhara bahar wait kar raha
hun..main tumhe ghar drop kar dunga"
K:"nhi rey koi zarurat nhi..main koi cab le lungi"
R:"nhi bilkul nhi ek baar dekh chuka tumhari baat maane ka result..tumhe dobara nhi ko sakta tab to main aa gya tha..agar tumhe kuch ho jaate tho"...as soon as he said both of dem shared a intense eyelock remembering d
whole event of kria's deprature to U.S.
rey comes to his senses n realizes wat he said jus now
R:"i..i m s..so..srry kria mera vo matlab nhi tha..i was jus concerned...main tumhara bahar wait kar rha hun plz bahar aa jana i ll drop u"
Sayng dis he moves out of d RH so that he does nt say anythng stupid again in frnt of her
K:"rey ko bolne ka kuch fyada nhi hai..main chali hi jati hun"
scene cut to rey's car-
rey ws driving n kria ws siting silently..their was pin drop silence frm d past 15 mins
Rey's pov
yaar yeh baatcutter aise nhi banegi..main agar aise he darta rha to apni feelings confess hi nhi kar paunga..kuch soch dude..den suddenly an idea pops in his mind n
smirks thinking abt it
Kria's pov
universe ji abhi rey se baat krna itna difficult hai..patani musicals aur college mein kaise baat karungi
Dey reach d guest house...rey comes out of d car n opens d gate fr kria.Kria steps out of d car.
K:"gud nyt..kal milte hain"..saying dis she strts moving towards d door of d house
R:to himself..aise hi thodi na jane dunga tumhe baatcutter..saying dis he smirks.
He grabs kria's wrist n pulls her close to her. He puts his left hand around her waist pulling her more close n kisses her..on cheeks...dirty minds kya soch rhe the...n den winks
with an mischievous grin plastered on his face n says-
R:"kal subah tumhe college ke liye pick karne aaunga...gud nyt BAATCUTTER"..he says this emphasizing on d last wrd
As soon he says dis..he moves to his car n goes away leaving a dumbfounded n totally shocked kria with her jaw touching d ground
K:"kya yeh abhi sach mein hua ki yeh meri imagination thi..rey mujhe baa..n *touching d cheek on which rey kissed her* rey ne mujhe...bt kyun..mujhe rey se baat karni
hogi..nhi nhi impossible mein rey se bilkul nhi baat nhi kar sakti iss bare mein...kya puchungi unse aur kya javab denge vo..nhi nhi kuch baat nhi karungi iss bare
mein aur kal rey mujhe pick up karne aaye usse pehle hi mein college ke liye nikal jaungi vahan jakar unhe bol dungi ki mein pehle hi college paunch gayi..haan haan
yeh hi sahi hai"
Saying dis she went inside d guest house n went to sleep without having her dinner as her mind ws so full with events dat took place that day dat she didnt even
think abt dinner.
At rey's house-
rey talking to himself
Baatcutter i noe tum mujhse aaj ke kiss ke bare mein kuch nhi puch paogi...tum mujhse aise to baat nhi karogi par haan i m sure aise mujhe tumhari forgiveness aur luv
pakka mil jayega...bt yaa vo kiss...jab main usse kiss rha tha mere stomach mein butterflies fly kar rhi thi aisa lag rha tha ki i m on cloud 9..i wonder ki mera ka
haal hoga jab kria mujhe aise kiss karegi..he den imagines kria kissing her..imagining dis he falls on d bed...n says-"haayee..mein to mar jaunga jab aisa hoga..he den
blushes at his own thoughts(jinme kria haiš)n drifts into a peaceful sleep.
Next day
kria got ready by 8 as she thought ki as usual rey 9 o clock tak college jayenge so he will cum till 8:30.she gt ready n picked up her bag n opened d door bt froze
seeing rey waiting fr her. Rey was sitting on d bonnet of car with his head resting on d glass n his hand behind his head ..he ws waiting fr his baatcutter..as soon as he heard d click of d door he
immediately got off d car to greet n smirked seeing a suprised kria
R:to himself...main tumhe bahut ache se jaanta hun baatcutter..i knew ki mujhe avoid karne ke liye tum pehle hi ready hokar college jaane ka sochogi..dats y yahan par
tumhare 7 o clock se wait kar raha hun...aaj to tum aapne linecutter ke saath hi jaogi college
R:"hi kria.."
K:(coming out of shock).to herself..universeji yeh to yahan par pehle se hi paunch gaye ab main kya karun(kya karun ka kya matlab..go with ur linecutter..poor
soul aapka 7 o clock se wait kar rha hai)..ab to jana hi padega inke saath.."rey aap yahan"
R:"tum jahan..tumhara linecutter vahan.."
K:her eyes wide open.."huh..kya..??"
Rey chuckled silently seeing kria's expression
R:"kya kya..tumhe lene aaya hun..remember kal RAAT ko bola tha..maine"..he emphasized on d wrd raat too tease kria n smirked.
K:"huh..h.ha..haa.haan chaliye"
R:"after u"
kria strtd walkng towards d car bt rey lyk yesterday grabbed her wrist n pulled her closer to himself. she banged into his chest..he den placed his both hands around her waist pulling her closer
R:"arrey tumhe gud mrng to wish karna hi bhul gaya...gud mrnd BAATCUTTER"..saying dis he again kissed on d cheek
R:"ab chalo"
K:"huh.."still in shock
R:"i said chalo..colleg nhi jana..."he said smirking all dis while
K:coming out of shock.."ha..haan chaliye
they both sat in Rey's car n rey drove her to d college.
guyzz now im cutting to d reheasal hall..d whole gang is present dere..kria has cum to noe abt dere plan n dat rey is d mastermind behind dis plan..all of dem r
facing kria with their heads down rey is standing foward as he thinks he is d main culprit(p.s.-vp has excused all of dem n he believes ki gang ne yeh nhi kia hai n he
trying to convince d authorities dat dey should consider d affiliation
k:"guuyzz..aap sab ne mujhse yeh sab kuch kyun nhi batayaš”š”...swayam sharon tumne bhi..swayam jab main NY mein thi i told u each n everything chaye vo sahi ho yaa
galat..*rey ws burning with jealousy thinking dat uski baatcutter usse baat atak nhi kar rhi aur swayam ko sab kuch batati thišš*...tumhe mujhe bilkul bhi trust nhi
hai na...main bhi iss plan ke favour mein hoti may b bt tum sab ne mujh par thoda sa bhi trust nhi kia n karoge bhi kyun...mujh par kaise trust kar sakte..abhi bhi aap
sab mere baare mein vo hi sochte hona jo pehle sochte the.."
R:"nhi kria aisa kuch nhi hai.."
bt kria cut him in b/w
K:"agar aisa nhi hai to kaisa hai..aap sab abhi bhi mujh par trust nhi karte mujhe aapna frnd nhi maante na.."
R:"kria aisa bilkul bhi nhi hai hum sab tumhe hurt nhi..."
bt kria toh baatcuuter hain na
K:"hurt...haa...hurt to aap sab ne mujhe ab kia hai nhi baata kar
Rey tried to speak bt again n again kria would again cut him n would not let him complete..after all aise hi thodi na baatcutter haiš.
he ultimately gt irritated n walked towards her pulled her so close to himself dat deir bodies luk lyk one n he without thinking anything took her lips into his..kria
didn't realized anything..d only thing she did ws to kiss him back..rey sucked her lower lip while she sucked his upper lip..dat kiss explianed everything her pain her
wait..dere confusion..his luv..dere luv ..jus everything..dey both kissed each other lyk eternity unaffected by d surroundingš³...bt bhul gaye piche kaun khade tha...
puri gang
the gang ws jus staring at dem with dere jaws touching d ground..(dey couldnt actually see dem kissing matlab lyk unka village vala kiss...ab guyzz kuch toh un
dono ke beech rehna chaiye naš)...rey n kria broke frm dere kiss after sumtym which seemed lyk eternity due lack of oxygen n realized wat jus happened..dey both were facing
down with shock tryng to absorb d recent event bt now d whole gang immediately faked cough..hearing d cough dey immediately kriyaansh lukd at each other with shock realizing dat
dey nt only did dey kissed each other bt also did it in frnt of d whole gang
Dey slowly moved dere heads to face d gang n found d whole gang smirking ready to tease dem vry badly...bt b4 any1 could speak rey spoke
R:"guyzz..ab..mm..mujhe kria se kuch baat karni hai akele mein.."
hearing dis kria who till now had her face down with embarrassment looked at rey immediately with wide eyes
nicky:"baat karni hai yaa kuch aur.."
Rey shot a glare at both of dem said again in a lil anger:"vicky nil mujhe kria se kuch baat karni hai abhi akele mein."
nicky:"th..theekhe aina jaa rhe hain..chalo guyz inhePRIVACY chaiye.."
R:"GUYZZ.."
as sson as he said dis all dem ran out of d RH bt vo to d3 gang hai..jayegi thodi na..dey all hid behind d door to listen there convo
rey turned to kria who was lukng down
R:"kria mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi bahut tym se..ab main aur wait nhi kar sakta bt yahan nhi karunga..vahi par jahan par hum sari baate karte hai aur apni
sari misunderstandings dhur karte the
kria immediately understood dat rey ws talking abt d fire escape bt b4 she could say anything rey got hold of her wrist n lead her too d FE. Since d gang failed to
understand wat rey ws talking abt dey decided to leave dem alone.
rey lead kria into d fire escape..n den knelt down in frnt of her confusing her. He den took out a red rose(guyzz...humara rockstar roz flower lekar nhi ghumta hai..vo
flower kria ko dene ke liye laya tha par subah dena bhul gya tha dat's y he has a red rose) offering it to her n said-
R:"baatcutter i m srry..dis srry is neither fr d kiss we jus shared nor fr any kiss we ever shared..dis srry is fr hurting u troubling u..i noe dat u luv me bt i m a
fool..coz i didnt realized ur luv...our luv..main dar gya tha baatcutter..*when he spoke dis all d pain n guilt ws clearly visible in his eyes*..do baar heartbreak suffer karne ke
baad phirse pyaar karne se dar gya tha..main yeh bhul gya ki jis din u broke up with me mere sath sath u also broke ur heart...selfish ho gya tha blind ho gya tha..na tab
tumhare pyaar ko samjh paya na ab..n lyk a idiot i moved on...bt ab nhi...kria dis heart*pointing towards his heart* will beat only fr u..n tum humesha mere dil ke
sabse pass rahogi par mere dil mein nhi..pata hai kyun coz jab mein par jaunga na tab mer a dil bhi beat karna band kardega aur agar dil kaam nhi karega aur usme tum
hongi to humhara luv bhi khatam ho jayega par mein essa chahata nhi..i want our luv to last till eternity..i want our luv to b immortal..kria ghai i luv u n promise
too luv u only coz u r most innocent, sweet, beautiful n maddening grl i hv ever met...will u plz except mie luv???...
K:"i luv u 2 rey.."..saying she jus hugged him tightly.."i m srry main ne bhi aapne sweet handsum charming n caring linecutter ko itna trouble kia..i luv u 2 rey"
dey hugged each other fr a long long tym n finally broke d hug
K:"rey hume chalna chaiye..varna sab phirse tease karenge...chalen??
R:"haan..par hum kya vo dobara kar sakte hain jo humne abhi thode tym pehle kia??"
K:(confused)"kya??"
R:"vo hi jo humne RH mein kia"
K:(realizing wat rey ws talking abt)"rey badmaashi band kari aur chalo"
R:"hmm.." n strtd opening d door of d FE
bt b4 he could open d door kria pulled him into a smooch n after kissing him left d FE blushing leaving rey who ws overwhelmed with joy.
he touched his lips n said-"Universe ji yeh ladki mujhe sach mein maar dalegi"
-THE END-
srry fr an errors
ur shoes..eggs tomatoes r welcum bt plz give ur review
n yaa i m thinking of writing a sort of epilogue to dis os..tell me i should write it or not..i hv sumthing in mie mind regarding it
I Hope u all will lyk d os
Anupamaa
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