Smitar's: Recalling Arnav-II Parts 1~9 Link to #2 on Pg 1 (4/5)

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

waiting to see their married life.
Arnav's emotions r well portrayed.
May b DM hurt khushi becz it wil make more impact on him than hurting him.
Wndrfl updt

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Felt every single word and emotion relayed via Arnav as he spoke to DM! As he questioned DM about punishing Khushi and putting her through hell. Felt the conviction in his words as he promised Khushi that he will be a good husband to her, as he promised that he will be a better father to their children and as he promised her that he will give her all the time in the world until she is ready to become his wife in the true sense of the word!

The writing is powerful, it is brillant and I can't help but be completely and emotionally vested in every single development in this story! Part 9 was beautiful, S!

PS. I am sure I don't even need to tell you that I will look forward to the next part with bated breath! :)

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Arnav's talk with Devi Mayya was amazing...he realized what devi mayya was trying to tell him and what precious thing she gave him and he always pushed it away not knowing that it is in his destiny... if he had realized this long back...things would have been different...never late than ever...good that they are going to be together...mind blowing chapter...thanks for the PM