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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

See m so good I always comment Haan haan xD
It was good I love short updates if they are updated frequently Acchaa? 😆
It was nice he thought she was not there but she was :p But she was :P
Hearing Parths names he hit his hand on the wall :p Yeahh
And first -aid scene

Ahhh nice update soon <3 Thank you <3

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reminescence

I love this! Could you PM me on update? :)

Thank you :)
Glad you like it <3
I will :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

omg!!! itna bada update...i have never seen such a long update in my life😲I know 😎 ...dis update is nt gud..nt bad...nt awful tooo...its jus wonderful👏 Thank youuu <3
n Randhir's thoughts lol..."shezz talking too"🤣 Haan 😆
aww how cud u manage to give such hilarious updates all d tym...😛 Personality vaisi hai 🤣
Ananya!!!! u r awesome...but next tym i beg u dear plz plz plz give a little long update😭...luk ananya u giv very "long" updates n on top of dat u write so well then how r we nt supposed to think dat its a "long update"😕...my dear awesome writer plz update soon😉 Accha? xD I'll try 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyukta_lolz

Haiyee!! This was the best part yaara...! Kuch na hoke bhi sab kuch tha...( kuch na hona means *Ahem* *Ahem*... u know na!! :p) Tujhe pata nhi kitni mushqil aayi mujhe ye comment sochne mein! Maa itne saare questions pooch ke disturb kar rahi hai...!😡 Lekin seriously maar daala...!! And that last line -"if only u knew Sanyukta" ...Omg! Superr se bhi uperr... bas hogaya abb aur type nhi hota... chal luv u... aise hi likhti reh..! :) <3

Tu na itni badi kameeni hai, itna blackmail karna padta hai 🤣
Mujhe pehle toh type karna pada tha 😆
Classmate hoke bhi itna nahi kar sakti -_-
Useless kahiki 😆
Anyway, thank you 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Wow! Thank youu <3

I loved it Glad you did :)


Randhir was so cute Aww :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshifan2012

RES! *highly embarressed for missing this out* :P --UNRES-- Okay toh now i get it! I have read the first part before too but then it was a drabble! I didn't know that u converted it into a FanFic! 😲 and sorry i didnt at the first time , u see im very lazy... 😛 now coming to the story! Kya story hai yaar! Something's definitely burning and cooking between these two! 😆 parth and sanyu , bf-gf? Arre yaar , mera dil todh diya! 😭 RD and and his anger issues! xD xD by the way , why so small updates? O.o i want big updates! Varna i'll not talk to u! Ek toh cv's ne naak mei daamkar diya hai and upar se u... 😡 and i loved the last line of the last chap! "if only u knew farzi" how cute! 😳 Randhir knows sanyu got jealous! 🤣 yay...ur updating! Zoya khush hui , very khush! 😈 Abhi jaldi likho and write a big one...bwahahaha...u will get my blessings! 😎

Lazy ladki 😆 Thank you, thank you :D Bf-gf nahi, bas party ke liye dates hai 🤣 Yeh kya hai? :O Baat nahi karegi? :O Hawww, tu pehle update kar 😆 Thank you, thank you again. Blessings? Vaah, mein dhanya hogayi xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you everyone for liking and commenting :)
And if you're unresing, please post that you've unres'd or scrap me :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm early 😆
Well, thank you Sanchari for the spamming 🤣
Comparatively longer xD


Burning: Part-5

"Randhir, you'll be paired up with Sanyukta for this year," Professor Vardhan told him.

Randhir's mind went blank after that statement. He couldn't believe Vardhan would do this at a time such as this. Just when he was saying this Farzi everywhere, Vardhan Sir just had to swoop in and make it more complicated, didn't he?

Chal beta Randhir, let's begin,' he thought to himself.

"Sanyukta, what are you doing? You are not going to touch any machine here and spoil the whole project. Let me handle this. If you dare to do anything around here, I swear I will make sure you get the worst grades of your whole life," Randhir told Sanyukta and started making designs of the machine.

"Shut up Randhir. I'm not interested in working with but I swear to god, if you don't let me work, you can bid goodbye to your Rank no 1. Now just shut up and get to work." Sanyukta told Randhir.

"Listen you Farzi..." he began but was cut off by Sanyukta, "No, you listen, you MCP. We will be working together, whether you like it or not. I'm not going to put my career at risk just because I had to work with an egoistic and overconfident batch mate."

"Stop murmuring and get to work everyone. Just because you had a party last night doesn't mean you're going to be let off so easily." Vardhan Sir spoke and the class began to work.

When three hours were over, Sanyukta and Randhir were the only ones to have completed the design. How they managed to work together was a mystery, even to Vardhan.

After the design was ready, Vardhan told them to go to the mechanical lab and start working on the machine they had to make.

They went there and got everything ready and wore the glasses for protection and began on the machine. Sparks were flying everywhere when Vardhan came to check in on them as they had been in there for five hours already.

He saw them still working silently on the machine, an unsaid agreement between them to not fight at least until the machine was over after which they would go back to their usual modes.

From afar, standing that close to each other with their hands intertwined in some form, he had to admit, they looked like a couple who was working on a machine and they strangely reminded him of Niharika and himself. Vardhan stood their observing them for a few minutes and then left them to themselves.

After Randhir and Sanyukta were done, they both took a seat on the tables nearby and sat there in the tranquil silence, neither saying a word to the other.

"Randhir, I'm just going to leave now, bye," Sanyukta told him softly and got ready to stand up when she noticed that he had fallen asleep on her shoulder. He was disturbed by the sudden movement but Sanyukta ran her fingers through his hair and patted him lightly so that he could sleep. She too eventually fell asleep and they both sat there like they were meant to be.



Liked it? Hated it?
Do let me know :)
Your reviews matter a lot <3

Love,
Ananya
Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RESERVED FOR MIRROR.
unres


Okay so Im late xP Very late. And a short comment only, okay? After all tu, bitch, kbhi kabr hi lambe coments deti h xP

"Randhir, I'm just going to leave now, bye," Sanyukta told him softly and got ready to stand up when she noticed that he had fallen asleep on her shoulder. He was disturbed by the sudden movement but Sanyukta ran her fingers through his hair and patted him lightly so that he could sleep. She too eventually fell asleep and they both sat there like they were meant to be.
^^
This.
Is simple bt just wow.

Its the best part of ur update am so glad you gave a long update
Baaki sab was also subtle and jus perfect. Now im off to read latest chapter. Lamba commentdere
Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I can't stop myself from admiring your writing style!!
It is simple yet elegant!!
It is so well-planned and organised

The only flaw is that your updates are small and you take too much time to update!! :(

Thnx 4 d pm
Update soon
Love,
Shefali

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