~Yeh dil dhadhakta hai sirf tereliye~ KR OS

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Hey! well, i was just thinking of something and got this random thought...I dont know whether it would turn up well or not but just posting it up...
So this is an OS called Yeh dil dhadhakta hai sirf tereliye! This is my first ever OS...
Toh iss OS mein KriYaansh are a couple...Its not related to D3...
And both have finished their college life...Both are working now...
Aage ka read by yourself!:)
~~~***~~~



"Shaadi!!! No mom! mujhe abhi shaadi nai karni!"
"Par beta...tujhe shaadi karni padegi...Your grown up now!" said Piyali convincing her one and only son!
" Mom...plz! aapne pehle yeh sab bataya kyun nahi?"
" Rey beta pehle batati toh tum mana karte! Dekho beta ab ek baar mereliye uss ladki ko dekhlo...agar pasand nahi aaya toh mana kardo..But plz ek baar Usse dekhlo" said Piyali
(Piyali is Rey's mom)
" Mom par!"
"please beta" Piyali requested Rey in the most sweetest manner...
Now he couldn't disobey his mother after all she is his Best friend!
Rey shared a good relationship with his mom..he loved her very much so did she...
he cares for his mother just like his best friend...But he have hidden only one thing from his mother and thats about his love life...
Rey's mom wants him to get married with a girl whom Rey hasn NOT seen yet...
par Rey is in love with Kria...toh woh kaise kissi aur ladki se shaadi kar sakta hai?

"teek hai ...Par mana kardia toh mujhe blame mat karna!"
"haye! yeh kaafi hai,..tum usse ek baar mil lo then u will never decline her..."
"Dekhte hai..."said Rey
Rey finally agrees and goes to get ready...ladki dekhna stuff is at 6pm...
~~*~~
In kria's house:

" Uff finally reached home after a tiring day in office!" said a frustrated Kria...
" Kria beti tum aagayi! Accha chalo get ready soon..." Kria's mom said from the kitchen
" get ready? kis liye mom?" kria asked confusingly
"Arey tujhe ladki dekhne aarahe hai..woh log bas aadha ghante mein aajayenge..tum jaldi jaa kar tayyar ho jao" kria's mom said..
"What the hell!!! ladki dekhne!!! Mom aapne pehle kyun nai bataya?" kria shouted in aggression
" Kria calm down...mein kya karoon beti...Ur dad has arranged all this...Ab plz go get ready"
" No mom! I'm not ready for all this..."
"Kria!! come on..go get ready..atleast ek baar ladka ko toh dekhlo"
" MOM!"
Kria's mom somehow made kria agree to this...
She runs to her room and she picks her mobile from her wallet...
She calls Rey immediately seeking for a help...
Rey- hey kria
kr- rey ..listen...(she says abt the ladki dekhne aaying thing)
Re- wat! yaar kria mein bhi kisi ladki dekhne jaa raha hoon...
kr- WTH! rey ab hum kya kare?
Rey- Kria dont worry i've decided ki We both will tell NO for this..bas ek baar yeh ladki dekna and all kar dete hai..after that we'll say NO...
fine?
kr- hmm Okay Rey...
re- k..bye
kr- bye...
~~*~~

Rey got ready and he and his family were going to the girl's house...
When they reached the house Rey was shocked...
He was shocked to see Kria's House!!!
Yes the girl he was getting married was none other than Kria!!!
He was dumbstruck..But soon a wide smile spread on his face..
Rey's POV:
OMG! kria's house..meine kabhi nai socha ki this would happen so soon that too by my parents!
lagta hai universe ji too wants me and kria to be together...
Thank u so much Universe JI!
~~*~~
Suddenly he felt as if someone was shaking him..he came out from his trance and saw it was his mother shaking him..
he shaked his head in a state of realization and went inside the house...
~~*~~

The Ghai family(kria's family) welcomed Rey and his family...
They were talking about some random things while Rey was "pakkayified" with those family-talks!
He was just waiting to see Kria...he wanted that moment to come for which he was waiting so long and controlling the irritating backgroud filled with family-talks...
That's it...he couldnt wait anymore...Initiatively he asked " Where's Kria?" in a polite tone...
Kria's dad told Rey that she will be coming within few minutes...And uhh see..Here she comes..
Rey immeditalety looked at the stairs through which Kria was coming...His mouth dropped down as soon as he saw her...
she was wearing:



She was indeed the most gorgeous girl...
but She was looking down...she just didnt want this moment to come...
She didnt want to even think of marrying someone else except Rey...but poor she..usse thodi pata tha that the guy she's getting married is none other than her Rey!
She lowered her lashes and came towards the families...she just brought some tea for the guests ...she again didnt look at Rey nor his family nor her family...
Rey's mom(Piyali): Arey wah...aapki beti toh photo se bhi abhi bohut sundar dekh rahi hai...
Kria really didnt show any concern to it...She just wanted to reject that guy...
kria's mom: Kria beti...tum wahan kyun khadi ho( seeing Kria standing )
Yahan aao na...beto yahan...
Kria was like "Oh god this is so hell"
Being helpless she went to her mom aur she sat on the sofa...still looking down!
After a while ,Rey's parents told :
Rey's dad: mujhe lagta hai ki aapki beti aur humara beta thode dher keliye akele mein baat karni chahiye...so that they can understand each other..
kria's parents agreed...
Suddenly...
***

Kria's mom: Uffo..yeh current ko bhi abhi jaana tha!

Here, Kria was thinking that this is the right time to go away...
But before she could put her plan on work she was being taken in someone's arms...Her mouth was being shut by his palm...
Kria was trying to escape from that stranger but all in vain..
He took her to a room...and let her down...
Kria was trying to let go herself from that person...

Kria- WTH! Tum ho koun to touch me and bring me to this room? HUH??
Rey(stranger): tumhara Linecutter

Kria was awestruck

Kr- wat!

and then Rey went away and found a candle...he lit it..now the room was filled with some light...
Kria now could identify that it was Rey...
She went towards him and hugged him very tightly...

Rey- Aww kria baby...dont worry...mein hoon na yahan

kr- Rey plz aap kuch kijiye...mujhe lagta hai ki i will have to marry that guy...

Re- kyun? U dont want to marry me?
Kria was totally confused and parted aside..
Kr- Huh?

Rey- woh ladka jo tumhe dekhne aaya hai ..Its me...

kr- kya..par..aise kaise?
Rey..par...yeh sab...
And she goes to her hyper active mode...

Rey- arey chill...kria that guy is me...
Mujhe bhi tab pata chala when i was entering ur house...
And the girl whom i told ki mein ladki dekhne jaa raha hoon...
woh toh tum samajh gayi hogi ki who's that...

Kr- yeah...I know thats me...
rey nodded ..

Instantly a smile appeared on Kria's face...
She never expected this to happen...
She wanted this to happen but like this...Huh...
Kya karein...It was all the game of Destiny!
KriYaansh too thought ki yahin unka fate hai...

And both hugged each other very tightly as if there's no tomorrow!
Rey slowly started making desings on kria's waist...
and he planted sweet kisses all over her neck while she was just enjoying the moment...
He caressed her face with his hands to which she closed her eyes...
Giving a smirk , he aimed at her rosy lips...
Without wasting any more time he absorbed her lips into his...First it was passionate...both showed how much they love each other..
how much they mean to each other in that single kiss...
Breaking the kiss...He pulled her even more closer to her due to which she jerked a bit but still remained in his arms...
Few strands of her fell on her face when she jerked, seeing which Rey moved his face closer to her , leaving out the warm air touching her soft cheeks..
And he slowly pinned her hair behind her ears...
And when he was about to take her to another rollercoaster of kiss ..

Thud thud...

KriYaansh parted away hearing the sound which was coming from the door...
They guessed that someone was banging the door ...

kria's mom: Arey koi hai andhar?

KriYaansh recognized by the voice that it was kria's mom...

rey- Dekha sasuma hume yahan bhi nai chodenge...

kria's eyes widened to the word "Sasuma"...Rey just smirked ..
thud thud...

kria's mom: Arey koi hai? darwaza toh open karo..
kr- mom..haan mein yahan hoon...

kria's mom- arey tum yahan? accha darwaza kholo..dekho sab tera intazaar kar rahe hai...
current bhi aagaya...

KriYaansh just then realized that the current had already come..because they were so busy romancing each other!

kr- haan mom mujhe pata hai..mein bas apni saari ko teek kar rahi thi..bas abhi aayi..aap jaayiye mom
She said handling the moment...

kr's mom- haan teek hai..jaldi aana..
Kria breathed hard due to relief ...

kr-Rey pehle aap jayiye..agar un logon ko pata chal gaya ki aap yahan hai toh gadbad ho jaayega...

Rey- haan toh mein kaise jaoon?

He spots the window and says..

rey- kria tum bilkul chinta mat karo...i've got an idea...

kr- Kya? *confused*

rey- he indicates her to look at the window...

She soon realized what his plan was...
Planting another kiss on her cheeks he went to the window and opened it..
He climbed down through the pipeline and reached the garden area...
Kria soon made herself straight but one thing she couldn't cover up was her crimson blush...
She smiled thinking about the last kiss...she suddenly came out of the trance and went to the living room...
~~*~~
In the living room:

Rey's mom: Yeh Rey kahan chala gaya...kab se gaayab hai...*worried*

rey's dad: arey tum chinta mat karo..woh yahin kahin hoga ..abhi aajayega..

Rey's dad made her console but she was still not convinced...
And here came Rey from the main door..
Everyone were surprised how come he's coming from the main door...

Piyali: rey..tum..

Rey- haan mom..mein! woh kya hai na..current chali gayi thi na..so thandi hawa keliye mein garden area mein gaya...
everyone were convinced...
soon kria came down...

Both the families asked for KriYaansh's answers whether they would accept to marry each other...
And their answers made their families go confused..
as their answers were YES!
Both the families were very much happy that their bond is going to get even stronger by being relatives!!!
Both fed sweets to each other and spent the evening with loads of happiness where KriYaansh were still doing their *kuch puch*😉😆
~~~***~~~

Huh..!! finally managed to write this One-Shot!😛
This OS is for Soha di as she asked for something romantic..Even though there's not much of romance here, i hope your fine with that small part of romance..😳
I'm sorry if i've not lived up to ur expectations...But i'm running out of time...
And guyz, i hope u liked my first OS...
Plz do leave ur reviews and dont forget to hit the LIKE tab!

-With love,
Reshma😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...
reshu tu aa AT pe batati hu tuje abhi..
unres...
it was cute simple nd sweet os..
loved it...kriyaansh bechare ye bi nai jante kisse shadi hogi...
bt lucky hain jo esa hua...
light ke baad wala romance...reshu badi ho gai...
i loved it..it was amazing
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Resh...😡

AT mei aa tu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its too cute
lovely superb
rab ne bana di jodi
awsome work
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏 👏
Wow Reshu it was to
Qute well writen
I like bed room scene very much 😉 😉

Great work thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing os!!!
Mujhe to laga ki pakde jayenge dono!!"
Thnk god nahi paakde gaye!!!
Unke parents ko laga ki arranged marriage karva rahe hai...unko kya pata ki love marriage ko destiny ne arrange kiya hai!!! 😆
Massst os tha!!!
Good work!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reshu..aww this saw super cute OS..

loved kriyaansh romance nd all..

haha..aww poor family mem shock laga hoga dono ke answer sunke..

it was cute nd loved it alot..

lots of love,
urs abhi didu..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb reshu...
it was simple yet sweet os..
bichare kriyaansh reject krne ka soch rhe the..
haye romance.. loved it..
well written...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww so cute
Destiny played an awesome role no worries no problems and no heartbreaks every lovestory should be like this
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was beautiful and wonderful os... loved it

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