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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Surely Khushi cannot take any more crap in her life now??? Hope she has found a friend she so desperately needs at the moment!!! Many thanks

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

when i read ur update
its really wonderful ur are not only talking about khushi but also arnavs feeling why is he like such what he really is
but i dont undersatnd why he thinks khushi could do that
why he never investigate it to the core to check whats happening
why he still got shyame and khushi in same house
why he put shyame with his di
that man (shyame ) is vile
does he also think that his mom woud be alive if he would have destroye that woman who came to his fathers life
is not it his fathers fault
is not his mom's fauilt who only thought about her self and not about her 2 childern before she shote her self
arnav just need a blacksheep to put all the blame on it
and its khushi for him
she is middleclass so would not dare to talk against him
she is uneducated so she would not know whats happening
and she would not talk against arnav or ask him why is he so crule
arnav only knows half the thruth and he took such a big desiction not only for him self but also for khushi and now she is destroyed
i really feel sorry for arnav being such impulsive and stupid
love babuji to tell arnav what he deserve
i hope serendipity it would be
for our khushi
love the update and best of luck in examens on monday
talk rest after examens and then update
love y

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Superb update...gud that khushi is gone ,hope she is fine. I Hate arnav.
And i think it was sashi who spoke at the end...but yet you left me thinking.

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

nice
is the voice belongs to shashi?
and Arnav deserves a lot of slaps from the ladies..

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

Arnav is just impossible... He just proved he never deserved Khushi...

I just hope she is safe...it's good she walked away from his life...

But why did they not get her letter...? Did no one know about it...?

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soppy

@soppy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

You have got me on the edge of my seat!...please update faster than last time...dont keep us waiting!

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#307

This was unnerving...hope to see an update soon!

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Destinyhope0305

@Destinyhope0305

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#308

Aww Thank u for dedication😳
But u deserved that appreciation 😳

But that was a Short update 😔

Ok now hopping back to the Update-

Tell me if there is any replacement for "bas***d" !
Coz Arnav totally deserves it !

I m within an ace of losing my temper,admiration,trust and everything for dis Guy !
I m really sad that what looked like "Love" was actually his "Lust"!
He never was attracted to her,Was He ?!
All the way it was only Lust for her Beauty ..That's it !! That apparently shows his Love for the Skirt and the Top and not the woman under it ..

And that poor soul somehow thought that after nipping in the bud, he might "Regret" and start loving her ..
But what does she know that for love ,1st one needs Trust !

Poor Payal and the rest of the family ..

Whenever he mutters "wh**e" , a shock stems up my every nerve ..
And it all bursts into tear balls when he finally threw the vicious bomb by accusing her of warming other Man's Bed!!

Is He Kidding Me !!

Can't he see her love for Him !! Is he that f**king Blind !! And where are his family !!

Man, You really really have to show him repent much much harder .. I m hoping for "atleast" 40 chaps on his Redemption .. Still I would say If i was in her place and if somehow i came to know of such gruesome thoughts of him about me , Man I would have never ever forgiven him .. To hell with his Killer Looks and Tanned Body !!!!

Now waiting terribly when she gets pregnant and then again how the douchebag mistake's his child to be someone elses!

Or it might be that He realises his mistakes before that and he serches her or something .. But My Instincts says you might go with the former speculation of Him mistaking his child as someone elses!

Any track you show it , i m just waiting with bated breath for ASR's redemption track !

P.S-

~Continue with due respect

~Cheers for the PM

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Skyfall

@Skyfall

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#309

First of all, I would like to apologise for the late unres!

Secondly, may I kill Arnav? Just kill him? Okay no..how about a punch? or two.

He makes me so angry that I just want to rip his hair off.

He just makes me hate him every second,

You are such a brilliant writer Zee, I am on the edge of my chair here (Okay not really, I will fall off) but you get what I mean. Every chapter keeps me wanting more and I can not wait to see Arnav's redemption. I feel a bit sadistic as all I can imagine is him crying down and realising what an IDIOT he has been.

I can not thank you enough for giving us such wonderful chapters amidst your hectic schedule.

Such fabulous writing.

&& Lastly I can not thank you enough for recommending my FF, it means a lot to me Zee. *gets emotional* Thank you so much for your kind words, Damn it I love you.

*Now runs off the stage with tears in her eyes*

Edited by Skyfall - 11 years ago