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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay! Here is the dhamaka! Hahahah! I just have so much to write that I don't think I can write everything in this post... hehe... you will wake up to this... I hope this makes your day... because reading your ff made mine!
Okay. I think I already told you that I had read until chapter 6 or 7 before...but I was new, so I didn't post on anyone's FF or SS or whatever... but I am just going to sum up everything I felt until then and then I will go on... on a new post.

I read this whole thing again... I was just like. WOAH. like oh my gosh. then I remembered reading this and my reactions... like esp. with Vidharth. Honestly, before we scrapped I was looking for this ff... and I fell in love with Vidarth. (I am just ...👏 flustered with so much emotions right now😆) ... I fell in love with it... and then I lost the thread and then I read Ash's stuff... and then we talked and then you gave me your index... and that's why I realized that yaar! THIS WAS THE INITIAL SPARK THAT MADE ME SHIP VIDARTH! AWH AWH AWH!

Okay... 1st. The part where Randhir confesses! WOULD YOU LIKE TO BE JIGGY'S AND PARTH'S BHABHI... oh my goshhh. His confession was just so cute... I can't even.

And then the besharam Randhir makes me blush. A LOT. PRETTY MUCH EVERYTIME HE SPEAKS.

And then oh my gosh...😳 those scenes. gosh. That was really hot. I can't say anything about it without me looking like a tomato. Seriously... I was eating when I was reading... and I was just like... seriously... seriously... you just made them be so perf. I can't even. *fangirls and blushes with that awkward smile fixed on my face*

Oh and I love how you just made their convo funny! It's always funny reading them. Especially the Paran bonding. I just love it. ONLY IF CVS LISTENS TO US AND MAKE THEM PARAN... Then... all 3 of them will be PASAND. get it.. Parth and Sandhir... hahaha! it's pretty cool...

and I another reason I fell in love with this was Vidushi. After reading this all again, I remembered why I loved this ff again... and that was because of how Vidushi actually became a better person. And how she had already confessed with Vardhan. Honestly, this is the only way on the show that they can salvage her character... I just love how you described her uncomfortableness and Parth's pain in seeing her so different and suppressed...

I just am so happy that this ff is so awesome. Like ... gosh. And talk about the cliffhangers you put. Yaar. You're so so so evil! 😆 hahaha! but that will be in the comment coming right up. I think I wrote a essay... but I like writing long stuff... so ha! Okay... next post about ch8-14... wooo wooo wooo

Love, Kri


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Posted: 11 years ago
OKAY!
I love the way you incorporated the jiggy and kaustuki side... I mean, they are also a part of their life... it just makes it so amazing... and I like how you know how much of them to put down... not too much and not too less... just perf. 😉

Okay... I have another confession. I can't really stop thinking about those hot parts. they are just really well written! kudos! Esp the part where Randhir is looking at his body☺️... like 😳

I love how you made Vidharth and Sandhir sooo understanding. They told their problems and confessions and the others were super supportive. *sighs and thinks... where is my guy.*

I love how you described Vidushi's feelings about Parth's past😊... (NOW COMING TO THAT PART LAST... you're gonna kill me)😕
They're just so adorable that I just keep on fangirling.😆

I love how Randhir used the SRK's Main hoon na... that was just icing on the cake!😉

I love how you included Vardhan's point of view. It's always nice...😛

AND AND AND AND! I ALMOST HAD FORGOTTEN! okay, I love how you kept it real. Like you made sure that you make them prioritize work and their dedication to Mech Eng, but you still made them hang out.👏 Like yeah, that was just the cherry on top. I don't know why I liked that so much... but I just loved that real element!👏

Okay... COMING TO THE CLIFFHANGER! ARPITA IS ALIVE! Woah, and how did Randhir know her? Like he did gasp right... like I have a feeling that Randhir knows her too...😲 hmmm.

Oh gosh. What will happen to Vidushi? 😲She's going to feel extremely 🥺sad... but I know it's Vidarth. The end game has to be. So I am not really worried about that.😃

OH! AND! You didn't include Arpita because you were pissed of at Vidushi were you?😲!?!?! Haaa? Huhhh? hahah!😆 just kidding! I believe in Vidharth!😃

Okay... I don't think I have to emphasize much that you are an amazing writer! And I loved this all to the core. Like seriously... I loved it. LOVED IT SO MUCH THAT I AM MAKING IT IF OFFICIAL. 😎... hehe! 👏👏👏 you seriously are amazing. now I can look at the os pm that you sent me! ❤️But I don't know where you get these ideas. but it's so so so so😎 so so so so so so so so so awesome! amazing! fantastic! beautiful... ❤️

Love, Kri🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
You know... I forgot to write down... that Hanuman line was just the best ... okay... I will stop spamming your FF haahaha!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chowanisha

ok i am sorryyy...i am tooo late ...

bt the twist is reallyy awsome...i had read it and also liked it per commnt nhi kar payi!!!!

👏👏
ab bechara parth ka kya hoga!!!!
jaldi update dede ab!!!!!plsss🤪


Ok fine...Meine tera like Dekha tha par phir bhi Gussa ho gae Mein..🤣
Thanks nisha...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Interesting story. I read few parts later I lost the thread. But today I checked my PM and saw the thread. Read all parts in one go. Interesting turn of events. Would like to we how story unfold in future.


Thanks sparky,..
To come from a writer like u I'm seriously happy...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: purnima209

again triangle love between parth and vidhushi and arpita now have to see what will happn in future jaldhi post na pls...


Again kaise hua??🤣
Well I'll update ASAP...
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

Okay! Here is the dhamaka! Hahahah! I just have so much to write that I don't think I can write everything in this post... hehe... you will wake up to this... I hope this makes your day... because reading your ff made mine!

Okay. I think I already told you that I had read until chapter 6 or 7 before...but I was new, so I didn't post on anyone's FF or SS or whatever... but I am just going to sum up everything I felt until then and then I will go on... on a new post.

I read this whole thing again... I was just like. WOAH. like oh my gosh. then I remembered reading this and my reactions... like esp. with Vidharth. Honestly, before we scrapped I was looking for this ff... and I fell in love with Vidarth. (I am just ...👏flustered with so much emotions right now😆) ... I fell in love with it... and then I lost the thread and then I read Ash's stuff... and then we talked and then you gave me your index... and that's why I realized that yaar! THIS WAS THE INITIAL SPARK THAT MADE ME SHIP VIDARTH! AWH AWH AWH!

Okay... 1st. The part where Randhir confesses! WOULD YOU LIKE TO BE JIGGY'S AND PARTH'S BHABHI... oh my goshhh. His confession was just so cute... I can't even.

And then the besharam Randhir makes me blush. A LOT. PRETTY MUCH EVERYTIME HE SPEAKS.

And then oh my gosh...😳those scenes. gosh. That was really hot. I can't say anything about it without me looking like a tomato. Seriously... I was eating when I was reading... and I was just like... seriously... seriously... you just made them be so perf. I can't even. *fangirls and blushes with that awkward smile fixed on my face*

Oh and I love how you just made their convo funny! It's always funny reading them. Especially the Paran bonding. I just love it. ONLY IF CVS LISTENS TO US AND MAKE THEM PARAN... Then... all 3 of them will be PASAND. get it.. Parth and Sandhir... hahaha! it's pretty cool...

and I another reason I fell in love with this was Vidushi. After reading this all again, I remembered why I loved this ff again... and that was because of how Vidushi actually became a better person. And how she had already confessed with Vardhan. Honestly, this is the only way on the show that they can salvage her character... I just love how you described her uncomfortableness and Parth's pain in seeing her so different and suppressed...

I just am so happy that this ff is so awesome. Like ... gosh. And talk about the cliffhangers you put. Yaar. You're so so so evil!😆hahaha! but that will be in the comment coming right up. I think I wrote a essay... but I like writing long stuff... so ha! Okay... next post about ch8-14... wooo wooo wooo

Love, Kri




Thansk sooo much kri...
Like u said u made my day...
I love you sooo much...
Thanks a ton again...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

You know... I forgot to write down... that Hanuman line was just the best ... okay... I will stop spamming your FF haahaha!


Arey chalega kri...
I'll deffo allow u to spam my thread...🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys... I know I'm damn late... Well kya karti there was no inspiration..
Anyways I'd like to dedicate this chappy to some people..
First has to be ash.. Typos n telling me where I got wrong.. Thnks dude!!
Kri - my young sissy...🤣 ur the best!!!! Love ya...
Chowanisha - Nisha... Thanks yaar.. You always ask me when will I update... That actually reminds me ke I have to start writing..😆
Pihu - this one is for you as well... If not you I wouldn't complete it in the first place...love ya!!!


PART 15


He was walking ...walking with RD along his side...He was totally shattered...What Arpita had said was continuously ringing in his mind...But having someone especially RD by his side it was a little soothing like being frozen with a lit candle trying to melt the ice...

He dint know when and how they reached their room...But he immediately collapsed... To him Crying was his Best Friend now he thought...

R : Parth uth yaar...tu ro kyu raha hai?? It's good right that Arpita is back...
P : Good?? Tu pagal ho Gaya hai kya Randhir..?? Arpita Zinda hai...She's alive...
R : Toh..?? You always wanted her to be alive right...?? Phir ab kya hua..??
P : Randhir she was my love...
R : Exactly...she WAS... And Vidhushi IS...Aur please mujhe yeh mat Bol ki tu CONFUSED hai Dono ke beech...
P : Par Randhir,..
R : Par kya Parth?? Acha suun...tu Arpita ke sath relationship Mein kab tak tha..??
P : 2 years...Kyu??
R : See mujhe aisa puchna ka koi haq nahi hai par did u ever cross your lines with Arpita..??

Randhir could sense that Parth was understanding was he was actually trying to tell... After a minute he said

P : Nahi...
R : Vahi toh u moron... Par Vids ?? Uska kya..?? You love her truly not that I mean ke tu Arpita se pyaar nahi karta tha... Par with Vids it's different ... Yaad hai tune mujhse kaha tha ke when anyone sees her with not so good intentions you fell like ripping the persons head..?? And you wanted her to be only yours in every aspect...haina??

P : haan...I love Vidhushi... Par Arpita ka kya..?? Vo toh yahi soch rahi hai ke I still love her...

R : So..?? That shouldn't even bother you... Usne tujhe choda tha tune nahi... Just tell her you love someone else... Yes she'll be hurt but it's good instead of you trying to hide it from her and she gets to know it from someone else...

P : your right Randhir... Thanks a lot man...
R : come on dude... Best Friend bas naam ke liye nahi hu...Par Parth please Jakar vids se baat kar... Right now she needs ONLY YOU...

Parth got up at once and began to go out but not before hugging his brother from different mother as tightly as possible...

P : Thanks RD... Pata nahi if I wouldn't have you Mein kya karta...
R : senti mat ho yaar... I'm always there just like Sanyukta , Jiggy , Kaustaki ...
P : tu vids ko add karna bhul Gaya...he said totally confused...
R : abbey... We are always there as friends not romantically like her...

They laughed their hearts out still not knowing what was going to happen..

Parth after the 'Pep Convo' with RD was definitely feeling a lot less burdened... He walked to the girls hostel where vids was present like RD had informed...
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Finally all the things had got well...like they thought...
The group along with new additions i.e Arpita and Sahil were there in the canteen sipping their beverages happily and chatting away their free time... Yes the things between Arpita-Parth-Vidhushi were sorted out... Arpita had accepted the Vidarth relationship... She had no qualms whatsoever and why would she when she was the one at fault...The biggest fault she had ever committed was that of letting Parth go...

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Everyone were back to their rooms when a message to Parth startled RD who was in the room as well... RD who was a light sleeper, woke up asking Parth wether it was an urgent one or not to which Parth meekly replied, "Yaar, vo Vidushi ka hai... She wants to meet me right now..."

RD just shook his head thinking about this set of Laila-Majnu and laughed earning a glare from Parth but still hadn't stopped laughing...

Parth embarrassed and excited went to the terrace where his lady love had called him. The sight he was presented to made him stop abruptly. There stood vids supporting her body a little on the railing and looking straight thinking something. The light breeze made her beautiful and long silky hair move lightly. In short the sight was ethereal and made his heart skip a beat.

"Vids..." he called out.
She turned and took his presence in. She didn't know why but she ran towards him and hugged him tight, not letting him go. Parth was momentarily surprised but anyways hugged her back equally tight.
It was a tough day for them. A Life Changing One Indeed

"Hey, tum or kyu Rahi ho ...?" he said when he heard her sobs.

"Kuch nahi... Mein tumse kuch puch sakti hu...?" she asked.

"Haan Pucho na ... " he assured her...

"How come Arpita is alive..?? I'm happy ke vo ... " she slurred but he stopped her knowing well that she would be uncomfortable to ask about that...

He started telling her what Arpita had told him in the morning...

FLASHBACK

P : Arpita tum yaha...?? How come your alive..??
A : ah.. Parth .. Vo...
" Aprita stop it and bolo... " he said really angry.

"Parth actually ...vo.. Mom and Dad ne.,," she told completely scared because she knew what would happen after she would tell her part of the story to him...

"Arpita Chauhan, I need you to speak up...Right Now..." he shouted scaring the wits out of the girl standing in front of him.

The other people present in the room were scared as well. RD had never seen his best friend this angry ever. But like they said Desperate Measures Call For Desperate Needs.

RD had sent Sahil away not wanting his best buddie's personal problems displayed in front of the world. Though he himself didn't go, he wanted to know after all why had Arpita left Parth who was shattered beyond repair. It was because of Vids that he is where he is.

"Parth just promise me ke tum mujhe interest nahi karoge...and.." she was about to tell but Parth who was already irritated spoke "Arpita ..just start it anyways... "

"Ok... Yaad hai tumhe jab I wanted you to come with me to the U.S..?" she started, to which Parth nodded slightly asking her to go on.

"Actually Dad ne kaha tha ke you didn't come and I clearly told him ke without you I wouldn't go anywhere..
And usse chakkar Mein humne flight miss kardi... Phir Pata chala ke that flight had crashed and all the passengers were dead... " she broke down after telling this, but Parth didn't go to comfort her.

"This is just half story Arpita... Uske baad kya hua..?" he asked keeping his cool. He didn't want to lash out on the sobbing girl.

"Aur kya Parth...?" She asked confused...

"Tumne vo flight miss kardi toh mujhe Bataya kyu nahi...? Tumhe Pata tha na ke I would be completely broken after hearing the news of your death..! Why Arpita ..??" he said blaming her in a way for his broken self that was recently repaired by Vidushi.

"Meri koi galti nahi thi Parth... As soon as I got to know that the flight crashed and the news was spread I wanted to meet you and hug you Parth...But dad was persistent Parth, unhone kaha ke mere bachne ke chances were very less aur kaha ke you couldn't handle agar mujhe kuch ho jaata if the surgery was unsuccessful... Unhone kaha ke Acha hi hua ke that the news of my death broke out like this... Mujhe tumhe vapas paakar Khona nahi tha Parth, isiliye Meine bhi Dad ki baat maanli.. But Dad ne jhut kaha tha, mere bachne ke chances were too high par just to detach me from you he lied..." she finished crying.

This was the time when Parth actually moved. Not knowing what the effects would be of asking Arpita what he was about to ask her he continued "Arpita agar tum achi ho gae thi toh mujhe contact Karne ki koshish kyu nahi ki..?"

She was shocked. What had happened to that Parth that she loved and still loves. He wouldn't be asking her these questions after knowing that she was well and fine and just take her in his arms in a comforting hug assuring her that all was well. Her chain of thoughts was broken when Parth astonished her telling "I'm not the same Parth, Arpita ...that Parth is dead.. He died when you, the most important thing for him, lied to him..."

He walked off from there leaving a sobbing Arpita and a shocked RD. RD couldn't do anything but he, however, passed an apologetic look to Arpita and followed Parth...

And the rest as they say is history.

END OF FLASHBACK


Repeating what Arpita had said made his vision blurry with fresh tears. Vids was guilty for asking him about it.

He didn't know when the tears rolled down his cheek. But he felt a soft palm brushing away the tear off his cheek. He could see that she was guilty for asking that.

"Arey, tumne itni raat ko bulaya toh mujhe laga maybe we could..." he added just to lighten the mood and he was successful in doing so when he could make out a tint pink on her cheeks in the moon light.

"Maybe we could what Parth..?" she asked innocently giving in as well.

He strangely loved being teased by her. She had the special right to do so, Only She.

"Maybe we could cuddle..." with this he pulled her close to him. 'I'll never leave you Vidushi kumar' he promised himself.

"Nah... I don't want to.. Mein tumse bore ho gae hu..." she teased yet again.
"Acha thik hai, then good night..." he retorted, he wouldn't give in as well, he was after all as sassy as her.

He smirked even more after watching her eyes pop out and her mouth open. She immediately regained her senses and added, "Fine, then go... Good night Parth Kashyap..."

'Arey shit, yeh toh sahi Mein jaa Rahi hai...' he thought. But before she could leave he caught her again and in no time there lips sealed.

It wasn't one of their many intense ones, but rather a sweet one at first which later got converted into a heated one. Each asking for more. Finally breath totally out and cursing the need for oxygen to survive they parted, their foreheads still touching.

They didn't know that a certain couple was watching them and their faces beamed with happiness seeing their best friends happy in each other's company.

"Kitne khush lag rahe hai na yeh dono Randhir" she said leaning against the wall.

"Yup.. Inhe kissi ki nazar na lage" Randhir said mockingly to Sanyukta.

"Shut up Randhir, kabhi bhi mujhe taunt karte ho...huh..." she said faking anger.

"Ok baba , sorry..." he apologised.

Sandhir were watching Vidarth, oblivious to the fact that even they were being scrutinised.

"Vidushi, please kabhi bhi Parth ko mat chodna... Jo galti Meine ki vo tum please repeat mat karro..." Arpita said walking back to her hostel room.

And that's a wrap..
Thanks for liking it... I hope you liked it... It's actually different from my usual writing style... Hope you like it as well...

Give me your feedback so that I knw wether I have improves...


NEXT CHAPTERS MAINLY SANDHIR

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Posted: 11 years ago
Res

Un Res!!!!

Looks Up

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Right & Left!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah... am first

Wah Ayesh... 🤗 superb... dats fab...

Randhir & Parth convo... dis is what we are expecting in serial... such a beautiful bond between dem... Loved the way how Randhir talked with Parth & made him realize about Vids... & Arpitha & Parth Convo... awesome...

haha Vids & Parth, wah dat is mindblowing its obvi she will feel lit bit as she knew how much Parth loved Arpitha... & now their relation... last dat Ahem ahem

superb... now update the next part soon... Sandhir part romance or any twists???? ab jaldi update karo na...

Love,
Mickey

Edited by amulbaby06 - 11 years ago

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