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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Brilliant update. Looking forward to what plan ASR's Shatir Haward bran came up with to pataofy his Love. Please update Jab Se Tere Naina soon...

Edited by fffan123 - 11 years ago

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

awesome update ...looking forward to the next series...

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tmowla

@tmowla

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

no your stories never end and they never should!

keep on writing girl!

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Superb update had hard time reading Hindi dialogues but understood most of d dialogues

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Superb update had hard time reading Hindi dialogues but understood most of d dialogues

Thanks for taking the pain to read it! I was finding hard to write Khushi in hindi as that seems out of character for me! But I tried to put as much english in for Arnav!

Thanks for reviewing!

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

wow superb updates loved them please write the next sequel looking forward to read them.

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: chavvi16
why do think you will be seeing her more
khushi man am sure you will see more of him
did he just say kiss
haila yeh aru ko kya ho gaya hai
is he feeling okay
hope so
pagla toh nahin gaye
waise he was right she didnt say please
as if he would have moved had she said please
come on this is ASR after all
how come when ever she turns he is there
stalker ban gaye hain kya yeh
wouldnt put it past him though
you never know with him
so payash are married
cheers for pm
surprise this sure was
waise i didnt know kkhushi he saath phere ho rahe the
the way she said mere saath phere miss karwa diye
this girl is too much

Haila!😲 You almost deciphered the plot!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome update
I think Arnav has start liking crazy Khushi and that's why open flirt with her and trouble her. And he said about kiss Haila!
This is just the beginning, I am sure she will Arnav more around her.
Waiting for next update

OMG! You actually almost deciphered the plot!👏

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

such a wonderful SS

I also love Jab Se Tere Naina

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan
WOW what a twist. Looking forward to how Arnav made Khushi his wife. Thanks for writing beautiful stories for us. Thanks for the PM.

😃 Feel touched that you think my stories are beautiful!😳