A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON)

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samridhi

@samridhigoodiez

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Awsome, funny, that ' pee' part was vry funny,,.,, plz pm me whenever u edit this part...

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Reserved! :)

Unreserved!

Oh gosh!It was simply ah-mazing! 👏

I loved every bit of it!

The best part about your writing is that you add this undertone of humor in even the most messy situations! 😊

Certain lines in this chappy just made my heart flutter! 😳

I absolutely loved reading Sanyu's paranoia after figuring out she has feelings for Randhir!
And she had the lamest excuses when he confronted her!
In love with Parth!Haha!Cracked me up!

The anticipation before the so-called-not-a-date was fun to read! 😆

I just love everything about the way you write and more! 😳

Love,
Khyati ❤️

Edited by So_Naley - 11 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Thanks for pm😊
Awesome part👏
I am still not completed reading the previous parts though
Loved randhir -sanyu part😉
Update soon

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

wow

amazing long update

beautifully written

she was ignoring him

can't wait to see where randhir is going to take her

please update soon

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Awesome_Annie

@Awesome_Annie

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Sorry for unresing so late!

I loved it!! Everything was just perfect! I love the fact that even in bad situation, u r able to add humor!

Confused sanyukta is a fun to watch!! 😆

Please update soon!! And do PM me!

Love,

ann!

Edited by Awesome_Annie - 11 years ago

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Mandira17

@Mandira17

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

mayuri!

Take my bow!

Tell me! U hv to tell me! Hw do u write so beautifully?

give me some tips pls! I loved this chapter! It was just mind blowing!

The dialogues like "like feed him poison" was just" 😆

and when kaustuki came running shouting we did outrun randhir.. i was like 🤣 poor sanyu!

Oh good he's taking her out? where where? tell me! Let me guess.. a candle lighgt dinner?

pls update soon! Thnx fr da pm! 😊

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Aryana

@Drama_Writer

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Okay, first off, Minimo, WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU???? Looks more like nata's sucking the life out of you!!!!!!! And I have so much to tell you! Not one message? I'm surprised!🥱

Tuh tuh tuh... coming back to the FF.. as usual you don't need it, but I'll let you have the credits!😛 Its hilariously amazing!😆

You create this riot of laughter with your dialogues and the situations. Its like watching a straight out of the TV english sitcom! Oh that gives me an idea, next time I sit to read your FF, I'm first gonna get myself a bowl of fresh popcorn! It'll compliment the reading better!🤣

Overall, a wonderous, hilarious, riotfully outstanding update! A thumbs up from me!👍🏼 Le, tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi!

😆

Miss you loads!

Love,

Aryana😳