Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 25)

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#621

Wonderful note 👏

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#622

With This Note,
Arnav.. Gets our confidence Vote.🤗

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: aashi12
With This Note,
Arnav.. Gets our confidence Vote.🤗

On his wife, he does dote

But to keep his life afloat

He should get rid of his doubt

For, her whole life, she is here to devote

One chance life will give him to find out

Her love, his life, is all about.

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sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Thanks for the Note...🤗

But Writer ji, there's no need to clarify yourself...we love your writing, the way you tell the story...We just love it

Half of the time I disagree and sometimes hate what Arnav does, and I dont like and keep on criticizing him...that doesnt mean that I am pointing out finger on your writing skills...never...

It just write what I see, what i feel about the character Arnav...never ever tried to question your belief...

Many a times my mother shouts at me and even picks her broom.😆...she tells are you mad, why are seeing the thing from that side why not from here...

And all I say is ...I can't help it...I can see the things from this side only...the other side is beyond my reach...bas...I never clarify myself from where I look the world or what I belief...

So if 'someone', who dont know you...is pointing his/ her fingers on your belief and writing than she/ he need not do anything...she just needs to go through every comment on the thread and she will understand, where every next comment conveys that...

I am not liking this Arnav ...but I believe you...

Thats it!...what more you need as a writer?😉 😆

As in my real life, my mother scolds me ...here I have tanu di...I dont know from where she brings all this patience...she makes me understand here on the thread ...and also through PMs😆

Sorry Tanu di...I will say the same thing which I tell my mom...this Arnav is beyond my understanding...😉

And ya I almost forgot...what is this second chance ???? eagerly waiting to see and also your surprise...I am sure it will really surprise us😆

so please please please update soon...

Edited by sphobic - 11 years ago

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aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: Viji79

On his wife, he does dote
But to keep his life afloat
He should get rid of his doubt
For, her whole life, she is here to devote
One chance life will give him to find out
Her love, his life, is all about.

He is learning it, still a kid he is.
Love one day will bring him on his knees.
He is insecure,
he'll give in for sure.
She is strong.
She'll fight till long.
With them taking steps, however small.
They'll stick together, in love.. For once and all. :)