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Posted: 11 years ago



If you wish to read more of this story, please refer to this NOTE (it's on Thread 30 in case the link does not work).

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Edited by Anony_mous - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
after resing first post after months-

but after reading chapter


WAT A 360* turn of situation,i thought about some thorns in rose but not whole cactus...:(
so as my thoughts are jumbled so will be my comment,anonji aap yoh samajh hi jaoge!!


arnav says love in rishabh eye can be seen by blind man,but cant he see love in his wife eyes?why is there some problem..
cant he despite loving her rishabh never tried anything wrong with khushi..
arnav very well knows how much it is difficult to forget ur past,so why cant he give a chance to rishabh to forget his past.no one can deny khusi is his past..
prb is arnav sees on things what he wants to see,he doesnt go to ngo unannounced just because he cant see a repeat show,but can he see ,how friendly they hug, not it is that type of hug which he and khushi share..
i think arnav knows very well that even if khushi had been forced in this marriage and she loved rishabh,she wouldnt have cheated arnav.but he doesnt trust.which obviously cause of his past..

he is right now failing as son,husband,lover just because of his past,he is only successful in business where there is no need of business..

and khushi is right he needs words too,physical aspect is also imp so does words are..dont know i m wrong in using in word ,but arnav needs love of a mother too.,so khushi along been wife needs to play a role of mother too..
just like how are mother bring us ,some time scold us,sometime pamper us ,sometime she agree on things which she is not right but only for sake her child..offcourse khushi needs time..she is still quite young ,with very little experience in life...and age and experience does matter..

arnav here took me back to a memory, my di left her 2 year old son left for 2 hours to his dad for some work.despite playing with his father ,as soon as he saw his mother he started crying ,how much she kissed her ,cajoled he only stopped crying when she verbally assured him ,'that mumma will never leave him again..'

i liked the confidence of khushi that she knew arnav will never harm her..
wat amazes me is arnav 's control,he cant control his anger but he controls wat he says during that period..

which is quite opposite ,as when we are angry we in flow speak things which are not meant to be said..how can he control that..people in 2 condition cant control their feelings
-either they are heavily drunk
-or they are angry..

but this arnav..but i love this khushi more normal circumstance anyone will think to leave that person who behaves like ,but khushi she is going to be his strength..i guess this is love about..

HARIPRakashji you are so cute..!!




Edited by shruti46 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
update was wonderful ,beautifully written their emotions..
khushi had thought that Arnav was jealous of Rishabh,but finally she realize that's not the case the thing is he was completely insecure of him.. she must have never imagine it in her wildest dreams that he is insecure about their relationship..glad that she finally got to know and hope she would do something about it.. so she is going to say that she luvs him.. i hope it works for him.. fingers crossed ..
on the other hand arnav should try to understand khushi rather than blaming her all the time for his insecurities..
well waiting for next update already to see what will happen next..
Edited by dsbj - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey anon... :) last thread, after ur note, i did mention tht whn u say "imp update" it usually has to do sthg with arnav's insecurities :) :)
n honestly, though i m sad, n obviously upset fr wht khushi has to go thru...
i still feel worse fr arnav...

i m still nt as mad to execute the kill-arnav-plan :) :) .. n the way u put arnav across.. i wonder if i wud ever b :) :)

ok.. before going on abt hte chapter.. i hv to mention this... as per me.. khushi is going to mk matters worse if she confesses.. coz arnav is nt a normal insecure, full of complexes human... he is one who is hurt beyond repair by expression of love, which eventually turned out to b a show.
n tht too, nt once, bt .. fr arnav.. atleast twice.. by both his parents. n most imp.. by the one relationship we all consider in-corruptible, his mother. not step-mom, his very own real mom.

someone who has been cheated by his own mom .. someone who's mom always told him tht he is loved ONLY by her, n then ends up finding out tht even this love was fake... is bound to despise even the mention of the word.

i knw most of us wud b happy tht she is ready to confess.. bt i m nt.. i somehow feel, tht its going to mk him distance himself further.
u knw everytime i think of khushi's POV song.. i dont knw y.. bt i always get a image of khushi in the vast lawns, n terrace of tht huge house, alone, thinking abt arnav who is probably far off.. mayb office, or some trip.. bt definitely nt arnd..
n the upcoming confession seems like mking it come true.

khushi is wht arnav said.. sunshine, n u cant ask sun to b selective... though here again, i wud say, she might hv jsut been able to find a small little window of moving out after him, even if just fr a bit, mayb she cud hv said she needed to use the restroom, or tht she wud go luk fr arnav n find out how long he is tking... reasons almost all wives use to go to their husband's whn needed.

n tht wud hv been enuf... coz those few seconds, wud hv convinced him, tht fr her he is most imp. .. most of hte times, actions do convince ppl more than words...

bt then. she is nt at fault..
1. though mature.. she is still too young.. n then she obviously doesnt knw as much abt his issues as us 😉 i mean readers do hv the adv of knwing both sides of the story, unlike the characters :)
2. she was being civil, n was definitely waiting fr arnav, concerned n obviously giving absolutely no attention to rishabh.
bt then, how wud arnav knw any of it.. he was nt there; n whn he was, he ws too furious to notice anythg positive wrt himself.

i think confessing in the heat of the moment ... might still b ok.. whn the confession just flows out of her, n doesnt luk like a pre-meditated thot... bt a planned confession, is sure going to mk him feel its happening all over again with him.
i mean the confession, khushi wud hv to really think it thru before executing. she really needs to mk him believe tht she loves him, to ensure he doesnt run away.
well thts wht i feel... n i soo soo hope tht i m wrong :) :)

i wish he is in enuf control over his anger to appreciate her feelings, n realise tht he is most imp to her, no matter wht... n this is nt going to change ever.

i felt soo bad fr him.. i wished khushi cud just hold him, cuddle him, n let him knw tht he doesnt hv to fight alone every single time in his life... tht she is there to stand by him, hold him, n ensure tht he wins, whn he feels tired of fighting. ..
i m sure khushi too wud hv prefered doing htt... bt cudnt... n tht mks me feel sad fr her too...

i loved the fact tht khushi didnt give up, tht she reminded him tht they wont sleep in seperate rooms, given his reason fr tht, once he does cool down, n if he thinks it thru... he might see tht she has no intend to leave him... ever.

i knw it feels like khushi deserves better... bt honestly... i dont think anyone can b better fr her.. she is gd fr anyone n everyone.. she is a gem.. bt noone else can ever give her as much importance in his life as arnav.
she is the centre of his very being... unlike any other person. i mean fr anyone else, she wud hv been the love of their life, their better half, best half fr tht matter...
bt noone else wud hv hd ONLY KHUSHI in his priority list.. which arnav does.
n a person as beautiful n pure n selfless as khushi.. deserves this...
thts wht i feel atleast..

loved it tht khushi realises tht arnav, no matter how angry he is... wud never hurt her physically.. nt even a scratch. she does understand him too well.. if only he realised it...
his anger, his words, his silence, likes, dislike... everythg .. she understands n prioritises everythg abt him soo soo well n above everythg else. above her own self.

at times i feel a little bit manipulation is needed in life to ensure all goes well... so dear khushi.. use whtever is needed... bt before u confess mk sure tht he wud believe.

its gd tht she knws n commits to holding the fort till he comes arnd... infact i respect khushi soo soo much fr this strength of hers... bt still , it wud nt b wise to fight a battle, whr u r nt sure of the result.. atleast mk all possible effort to ensure a victory... n then on... its obviously upto time n fate n situation.

i think i had once mentioned tht more than jealous... he is insecure coz he feels rishabh is better match fr khushi than him... gd tht khushi finally knws it...
God i soo soo wish tht he believes her declaration of her love fr him. i wish... :) :)

PS: khushi must hv amazing patience n love fr arnav... otherwise the way he is still accusing her, anyone else wud hv probably left him
Edited by tanu3579 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This chapter once again proved that Khushi is the most suitable life partner for Arnav. Who else would have tolerated the blame of Arnav so patiently immediately after the unforgettable moment they shared?

Edited by ramyarn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was great update...just waiting for next,,sooo excited to know wht will be reaction of arnav when khushi will confess her feeling towards him...must say he is very very tough husband only khushi can handle husband like him...!! hope in next we can see some romance between arshii...plllzzz pllzzz make it soon if possible " border="">
Edited by BSDsarun - 11 years ago
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yaar anoy...im disappoionted with arnav's behavoiur...😡

but this kind of update was well needed with current scenario of the story
Edited by indhuza - 11 years ago
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Arnav's good day turned horribly wrong. Rishab turned up at the same restaurant as the Raizadas. Poor Khushi. Turning him away would be bad manners especially in front of bhuaji and bade papa. The elders don't know what's going on with the youngsters. The are assuming everything is fine. Obviously leaving the table would have looked rude. Khushi could have used the excuse of the bathroom to go find Arnav. She is really trying hard to keep the elders happy and reassuring her husband of her fidelity. I get the feeling that the only way now is if Khushi quits the NGO and stays at home. This way she doesn't meet Rishab and she is already avoiding Lavanaya and NK for Arnav's sake. Arnav isn't going to talk about his feelings so Khushi will have to start being completely honest about every single thing and tell him about her feelings. She will have keep on demonstrating her feelings until Arnav is reassured.
Edited by badfaith4u - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

arnav's insecurity is bcmng worst

poor khushi, c had to bear d burn
Arnav is far 4m logical thinkng
I hope d confession make arnav peace wid himself, n he hurt khushi less
Bcoz of his parents he don't even trust khushi
Superb update
Edited by gangsu - 11 years ago
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What an emotionally charged up and intense chapter, quite a contrast to previous chapter too A. Is it normal for me to be all emotional and distressed??
Well, this is my state right now so consider yourself warned! :P

What can I say, kudos and salutes to your Khushi, anyone in her position, heck even if I put myself in her position, I would have been extremely hurt by Arnav's unreasonable & harsh behaviour. And this specially after knowing that his wife accepted him as her husband whole heartedly, the way she has been with him throughout this marriage, the way she submitted to a physical relationship with him, he would have to know that he means the world to her. Yet his ugly insecurities make him become completely irrational, losing all his good sense and logic at the same time. It was wonderful to see Khushi not give up on him, to be that someone that is just perfect for him, that someone who sees beyond his ugly outbursts, that someone who loves him unconditionally and puts up with all his childish tantrums because after all she is that someone who understands him now and his insecurities as well as trust issues because of his past.

It does make me wonder though, while she is remaining strong for him forgetting her own aches and pains chasing him around the house. Is he doing the same for her, that is make her just as happy as she wants to make him. He hasn't even realized his love for her and at this point Khushi wants to confess her feelings. As if this chapter hasn't got me feeling for her already, I am scared of what will happen in the next chapter, will she finally be so hurt that it will be beyond repair. Being the feminist that I am, I couldn't help feeling all emotional, feeling all sorry for the Khushi in this FF, A! Forgive me but I have lost all hope and faith in Arnav particularly with the way he was in this chapter. I am scared that he is going to continue hurling harsh words specially when NOTHING happened that is Khushi did absolutely Nothing to deserve his harshness. I am scared of what would happen if something does go wrong. ( ASR might need to go to Rehab for anger management so he can stop breaking things and eventuallly breaking his wife's heart to pieces)

For someone who wanted to make Khushi his and never let her go, for someone who is so insecure that he wanted to manipulate the girl so she could stay with him forever, his behaviour is more to alienate her and not ensure that she stays with him. Excuse the emotional comment A, I think your incredibly strong story and characters have made us all connect to this story emotionally. And depending on what we have witnessed we sympathise with certain characters more than the others. While I could sympathise with that lost and foolish boy that Arnav was in this chapter but my respect goes to Khushi for being sensible and way more mature and not giving up on the boy ( and I say boy deliberately because Arnav acted like an immature brat and not the man that Khushi married) and I hope and pray that things will look better for her in the future and that she wouldn't have to go through so much pain each time her husband goes berserk.


I can't wait for the next chapter already!!!!!
Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago

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