ARSHI FF: CARPE DIEM #7 COMPLETED Updated pg-61 1-5-2014

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akhila22051993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

One of the best ff i have ever read.

All chapters in one go

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#412

hi
the up is really beautifully written
so khushi and arav finally made their suhaagraat and the discussion remained unattended
and they are blessed with a baby girl awww so sweet
loved it thoroughly

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#413

Beautiful end...thanks for the PM

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bs1224

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Posted: 11 years ago

#414

loved it
amazing one
CARPE DIEM was one of the most fabulous story😃
We had laughed with their teasing ...We had cried like crazy ...
We had cursed you hundreds of time😉 ...We had thank you thousands of times 😳
It was an amazing journey ...From start to end ...with lots and lots of tissues ...😆
But at the end it was all worth...every tears ..every laugh ...every single comment was worth it 😊
The concept from the start was awesome and it ended on a HAPPY NOTE which At the end I doubted a lot 😆
End was fabulous ...loved it 👏
Finally their family got completed and khushi got everything she wished and deserved for ...😃
thanks for pm ...😃
Will be surely missing this piece of your 😭

Edited by bs1224 - 11 years ago

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pakpearl

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#415

Simi...

For completing this amazing story

This chori ka maal for u...

😉😆

Fauzia..

Edited by pakpearl - 11 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#416

Wow great story please update soon
I'm really going to miss reading this story of your so much and great epilogue. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

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kajal511

@kajal511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#417

beautiful ending to a lovely story of arshi👍🏼
really loved to saw their bond to got stronger by each passing day🤗
going to miss it a lot😭
thanks for pm dear😳

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sk2405

@sk2405

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Posted: 11 years ago

#418

Finally read the story and had a great time reading the same. It is really disheartening to see such cruel incidents occurring even today. You came up with some very controversial topics like:

1. Girl being older than her love interest and parents disagreeing to such a match.
2. A girl being forced to give up on her studies and also being raped by her own husband.
3. A girl being taunted on not being able to give a family its heir.
4. A girl being blamed despite her husband being the real culprit.
5. A widow being disregarded.

and managed to do justice to each of the above. The character sketch was perfect and was very well coordinated with the incidents occurring.

Very well written 😊