ARSHI FF: CARPE DIEM #7 COMPLETED Updated pg-61 1-5-2014

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ArHiLover-x

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Great update, I enjoyed reading it alot!

Thanks for the PM :)xx

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AR_EternalLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

awesome ud

khusi think she cant be with him as she dont deserve him and la loved him

finally arnav too told his and la relation which was just physical and she didnt mean to him like khusi ..he did liked la but he will die without khusi

and now whatever happens he is not going to leave khusi ever...though he once asked if he was worse than shyaam but he wasnt and khusi knew that... but khusi didnt wanted to be anjali and hence arnav cleared everything

but that fake call really made khusi come bck to possisve mode...hehhe

and finally these lovers got real peace after thier painful 8 years of separation and this time it wasnt just physical relation but it ws lovemaking and unision of two souls and hearts ...they really are one now in every respect...they desereved it after suffering for soo long...the rain took away their pain finally...

i just hope they get togther for nver being separated ever

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

awesome
grt part
heheheheaenav fooled her
grt one

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Its a wonderful update.. You portrayed their emotions so well..

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zaibun un nisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

simply awesome and beautiful update.

loved it.

arshi r mindblowing in their roll.

tf pm.

sorry for late reply.

tf pm.

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kriti094

@kriti094

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Wow now this was simply an amazing updt
finally arshi r back together
arnav is quite intelligent , he tricked khushi so that she tells her true feelings
I m glad khushi has overcome all her insecurities now

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Jasmine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

dialogues were beautifully written.last scene was lovely

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SIMI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

"Life is made of ever so many partings welded together."
Charles Dickens, Great Expectations

Hola friends,
🤗 Love you all for the love you have given me so far. Carpe diem!! is my first ever ff in IF & you people have made my journey heavenly blissful.I am posting this note only to tell you heart felt thanks for encouraging a novice writer like me. I love you all. This note is also bearing an information, uhhu..uhhhu...uhhhu... CARPE DIEM!!! is going to end in next with an epilogue. I donno whether I have done any justice with the story. But to say truth, I also felt tortured whenever I wrote ARSHI's misery. As this story was shaped long before starting of IPKND,sometimes few incidents was too much harsh to digest. Still you people stayed with me till the end. You all deserve a big round of applause for encouraging a newcomer. Hope I am going to have your similar or much bigger😉😳 support & love in my other on going stories ,TUM MILE!!!! & YOU BELONG WITH ME!!! .
PS: If you have any queries left, pls do PM/ scrap. I love to give answers your questions.

SIMI